The Red Mansion Prince

I couldn't stand it after two chapters. A prince's son got married to Jia Jiarong's brother. It was just a joke to kidnap Qin Keqing. In exchange for it, or simply take her as a concubine. The Qin family was so anxious that the Jia family could not dare to say anything. They also said that if the Jia family sued, they would be deposed into common people. Are the Jia family or Brother Rong worthy of them? To tell the truth is so false. How much do you look down on the prince? Even if he is confined for a few months, you are still looking down on him.

This book has been scrapped. Is it logical to marry Qin Keqing as the legitimate son of the prince? The poems, songs and characterizations of The Red Mansion are useless, but I still have the nerve to write about The Red Mansion.

When the prince comes to Jia's house, should he first ask his mother, "Grandma"?

I really want to complain. In Chapter 68, what did the protagonist give Lin Daiyu? Guqin plus piano score. The author really doesn't know what these two things mean in feudal society, when an unmarried man gives such a gift to an unmarried woman when they meet for the first time. Mrs. Shi actually just frowned, which was amazing. This situation is not a complete disrespect for the Jia family. And Lin Daiyu actually thinks that the protagonist is caring. Are you kidding me? This is beyond the rules, and it's irrational, don't you know? In a serious feudal society, Lin Daiyu's first reaction when encountering this kind of situation was to be ashamed and angry, but she still wanted to have a good impression. If she didn't hate you to death, she was fine. She was ruining someone else's Mingjie, you know. Where did this naughty operation come from? Oh my God, I actually gave you the guqin and its music scores. The best thing would be to give only pen, ink, paper, inkstone and silk and satin, and the color should not be bright, and it can only be handed over through the elder, that is, Mrs. Shi. Giving away guqin music scores, poetry collections and novels is too frivolous and disrespectful. It conflicts too much with the etiquette character created by the protagonist.

To make a long story short, a book about dog licking in Red Mansion

Like the title, the portrayal of Qingwen is too brainless (I felt uncomfortable reading those chapters). Qingwen's heart is as high as the sky. This is because she first debuted in the Lai family (when she bought it, she was branded by the Lai family), followed by Jia Mu, and finally Baoyu. Compared with other maids, Qingwen has a strong backstage (Jiamu's indulgence towards the Lai family). There is also an inconspicuous Baoyu to coax her, plus the color is good Among the maids, they are all equally beautiful and arrogant. However, they are not so disdainful towards the maids and the master's rank, especially towards the interaction between Qin Keqing and the protagonist, Qin Keqing and the protagonist. Qingwen cannot have so many psychological activities of hatred and hatred, because Qingwen has not been sent to Jia Mu for training for a few years, and has not been spoiled by Jia Baoyu, but she is a refugee. The maid bought by the Lai family barely trained her skills and her temper has not yet been developed. All kinds of unreasonable. It is better to change those chapters. Take some time to avoid readers who come later and abandon the book after seeing this and the results are not satisfactory. When the time comes, it will be too late to go back and revise.

Xue Baochai didn't, and Lin Daiyu didn't. Take a look

I feel that the author has just read The Red Mansion in one go, and there are many places that don't feel right. I won't talk about the garden drama. I didn't write it at all. I guess he knew it was not good at writing, and he didn't pay attention to some details that were inconsistent with the original work. After all, the fusion of this book There are always omissions in the book "Dynasty", let's just talk about the plot and characters. None of the twelve positive and negative golden hairpins are well described. Qingwen has a few more sentences to describe the character, Lin Xue has a few sentences, and I have no impression of the others. There is also Xing Xiyan who is called Master Miao. . . The plot is like boiled water, but the vernacular is not superb. I read almost 200 chapters, and I was ready to skip the subscription. Then I didn't read it for a day. The next day, I had no desire to continue reading, so I just moved out. This is a post after searching the browsing history. It's not a comment, it's just some thoughts after reading it.

The uncle should be of the water genus, the protagonist's father is a wood, the four kings are a gold, and the protagonist does not have the five elements yet, so he is speechless.

This thing is a drama at first sight. King Zhongshun and King Lu are all lined up together. What idiot would name the dynasty like this?

If he doesn't lick Jia Jia, he won't lick Xue Baochai, so he chases her.

Your title of character is too loose. The names and seniorities of the Ming Dynasty clan do not follow the rules of gold, wood, water, fire and earth. It can be said that all the vassal clans of the previous Ming Dynasty were killed. Otherwise, how did your father's title of Prince Su and Prince Ning come from? There is no way to add a title like Prince Li, which is only available in the Qing Dynasty.

It looked okay in the past, but in recent chapters, why does Qingwen have so many scenes, which makes people uncomfortable to watch.

Don't you have a trick? It's okay to have double physical strength.

While using other people's names but not following the rules when naming them

Don't have a golden finger, otherwise this good book will be useless You must rely on your own historical knowledge and novel interpretation to write it

Marry Wang Xifeng. Without Wang Xifeng, it wouldn't be a Red Mansion.

Let's hurry up and hurry up to seize the throne. I always say that a prince of a royal family formed a gang.

There are also too many ellipses. The writing stops when it needs to stop and breaks where it needs to. With so many ellipses, it always feels like the breath is constantly leaking out when reading, which makes it look very indecisive.

Wearing a red mansion, becoming a prince, marrying Jia Mu, becoming an emperor