The Magical Girl Junior Is My Ex-Girlfriend?

The advantage is that there are many stickers, which are very delicious; the updates are stable, the plot is smooth, there are no contradictions, and there are no poisonous points such as amnesia The disadvantage is that there are many stickers, which leads to the slow progress of the plot; there are few characters, and the overall world view is not fully displayed due to the slow progress of the plot, so the possibility of expansion is relatively small, and symptoms of fatigue may appear over time Generally speaking, I still maintain a relatively optimistic view of this book. By the way, in order to prevent the author from taking advantage of the situation, I will give four copies of the double monthly ticket in the hope that I can live longer.

The future development will not be I can't be your brother, boyfriend, psychological counselor, magical girl senior, and zw toy at the same time

Have you ever been a magical girl? Some things are written randomly, and I take it for granted!

I was born to watch this kind of thing😭😭😭 It's so beautiful

Let me state in advance that as a bookworm in the next 20 years, my taste will be quite picky, so this suggestion is for reference only. Currently this comment has only been updated to Chapter 27 The first suggestion is to polish the description of monsters. First of all, you must give the audience a rough imagination template. You cannot just throw a "virtual beast" and then move its paws here and there and its tail to let the audience guess. You are not reading a book to play blind man and touch an elephant. Moreover, when the male protagonist sees something strange for the first time, he must be a little shocked, so he can use the short-term surprise, and then preconceptionally give him a "dinosaur" or "ant", and then briefly write about the differences, and finally insert the details when fighting in detail. For example, for the first one, you can write, xxx is extremely shocking. You can actually encounter a monster in reality. It looks like a long-armed Godzilla without breath, and it is much more ferocious than the leather cases on TV. The faint sense of oppression and numbness on the skin all tell the story of the ferocity and bloodthirsty it reveals. The second suggestion is the ideological change after transformation. Women are not born coy, and the description of effeminacy can be appropriately relaxed. After all, the main consciousness must be male, so at critical moments, such as when the male protagonist is forced to transform in a crisis, the highlight of such a pretense must be the subconscious male consciousness, which will attract readers more. It doesn't matter if you look handsome and then become deflated in a second. You can't even start to shy away from being handsome. Then it's not a transformation tattoo but a clone from a hundred and eighty years ago (split personality). The third suggestion is that since the male protagonist is to be a "senior" and has system requirements, there must be a sufficiently detailed system framework, even if it is a fake system. Otherwise, the male protagonist will completely mess up and have a showdown with his family. The punishment of being made a girl by the system is ugly to say the least, and it also comes with a full-level large size. This is not a punishment at all, but a discount at all. Since you want to force the male protagonist to take action, you must seize the male protagonist's weakness. I'll see how you make it up. There are only a few chapters at the moment, so I won't go into the many chapters. Brother, if you see it, just give it a shout. Anyway, it's just for your reference.

It looks weird and pretentious, but inside it still looks like a female video. This subject and writing method should be voted for pineapple, anyway, there are also occupied by female videos. The best-performing magical girls on this site are the off-duty demons and the arbitrary demons, both of whom are written in male videos. It's not that women's videos can't be popular with their writing style, but this is the base camp for men's videos 😂

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It's too watery. 95% Of the content is just posts without any plot development. Most of these are things I want to skip directly. Skipping to subscribe doesn't seem to work

After reading more than thirty chapters, I have the urge to kill Liuli. What kind of god is this! I don't know how close we are to God, but we must be very far away from people!                                                                                                                    If someone else takes a risk to come to your rescue, you don't even say thank you, but instead speak harshly to the savior. Second: After angrily running away all the supporting magical girls, he blamed them for not coming to support next time, showing his "true colors" and equating them with his scumbag parents. Third: What kind of environment is this, how can she perform mental health problems in a life-threatening battle? Why do you have no idea why Yinxue is the only one around? If you refuse to cooperate with the tactics, how can the senior magical girl guide you? I can imagine how desperate those magical girls are. From Chapter 4, we can see how pitiful Liuli's battle is, and then in Chapter 26, Liuli... Not only did she have to save this pig teammate and resist damage for her, but this pig teammate also refused to obey orders. Fourth: Although the author wants to show Liuli's tsundere, tsundere is not a little fairy! As for these nonsense, Fan Liuli didn't even need to accept the soft submission when he returned home, but he could justly use your power (if Fan Qingqiu has a good brain, he should know how to do it) to erase all the problems, and then you just stiffened your neck and refused to go back. In the end, you caused so many things, and even Yinxue didn't learn the basic knowledge that newcomers should master... In the end, it evolved into that you are responsible for delivering the goods, and Yinxue is responsible...

It's an urban emotional game, with more emotional interactions than battles.

As a person who likes to watch magical girl themes, the introduction was quite interesting at first, but then I really hesitated to watch it when I saw the system. It was already a magical girl theme. Wouldn't it be more appropriate to use the whole mascot to trick and induce the protagonist? Even if the mascot is an individual thing inside and is just a disguise on the outside, it looks better than a rigid thing like the system.

One million words, first-level author, 78 discussion posts. . . .

I really hate this kind of literature that is controlled by golden fingers.

No procrastination or foreshadowing, just say what you have to say. This feels great. Moreover, the description of the sister is really good. In just two chapters, a vivid image is sketched out. The setting of lovers in the past life and siblings in the present life (not related by blood) is also great. Especially when the two people meet and reveal their identities, there is no dragging back and forth as expected (the tacit understanding of an old husband and wife). The writing is really good. 🌹

Personally, I don't really understand it. Is the protagonist's low acceptance of the female form a bit exaggerated? I mean, is it really that confusing? Although it does not affect the viewing.

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Mengxin asked if Shennong is good-looking?

The two recognized each other. My girlfriend kicked me when she found out the protagonist's identity. I'll watch it again.

Nowadays, the plots are so good. They are all about chatting and posting. In one night, the plot can change the perspectives of several people and create dozens of photos.

The strong color of female videos, why invest in them? There is no audience.

Just look at the post. The author writes very well. The male and female protagonists are very sweet. I feel that it would be more suitable for the author to write a story about pure love. This kind of writing with magic or other training systems is generally focused on growth and upgrading. To be honest, I saw the title Magical Girl Senior and came in to read it. I definitely wanted to see the kind of protagonist who competes as a senior and then develops a junior magical girl. However, in the author's previous dozens of chapters, post-posting takes up the majority, and it feels like raising a junior magical girl is a small part.

The more I read this book, the more something is wrong with it. It doesn't feel like it's from a male channel, but more like a female channel.

At least the update is complete and the curse of interruption is gone. It's all subscribed. Come on.

I don't watch it unless it's a harem (it doesn't matter to me that Lily's harem is a harem). How can people judge if you don't have character cards or tags?

Sometimes a conversation should not be too lengthy. Maybe the author wants to write it in a comprehensive and detailed way, but as I watched it, there were many heart-to-heart conversations that continued to control me for nearly ten chapters, which was very tiring. I can't imagine how others felt when they were following up on updates.

After only reading the first ten chapters, I felt very disconnected. The author was very good at writing about human relationships, but once he got to the "system" and "magical girl", he began to reduce the protagonist's intelligence and turned into a noisy brat. And obviously "becoming brother and sister with my ex-girlfriend in my previous life" is enough to write a romance book, so why do I have to add a "magical girl" line? Did you want to write something different from the usual romance stories?

Why did the laborers stop? Is it possible that this one will also enter reincarnation?

I don't know if I can still have an orthopedic routine. There is too much content and I'm tired of it.