Tianbang

The feeling of watching Baili Qingfeng is that of caution and madness. I really enjoyed watching this contrast. But looking at Ji Fuyou now, I feel like I have low self-esteem and cowardice, and I also have a heavy filter on capital. Although Ji Fuyou has the ruthlessness of a small person, it is really uncomfortable to watch him in such a portrait. Maybe it can be refreshing to watch Ji Fuyou being so ruthless. But this is really frustrating to watch every day. When I see a beautiful woman, my second brother takes over my brain, and when I make money, I feel uneasy. What's the saying, "If you want to wear a crown, you must bear its weight." Obviously this money does not fall from the sky, but is earned by wearing your head in your belt. I know that the author wanted to write about a sense of transformation from the bottom to the top, and by the way promote the transformation of spiritual power, but the way you write it really disgusts old readers. Your first suppression and then promotion is really bad. I originally planned to read the cool article, but it turned out that it gave me a feeling of abuse of the mainstream, a feeling of low self-esteem and mental distortion.

First, let me talk about my feelings: First, the routine of Shuangwen novels, the protagonist grows up very fast! This is also the reason why Shuangwen novels quickly attract book lovers, but there is also a drawback. It is difficult to write group portraits, because the protagonist evolves too fast, and the people around him must be worse than the pig's feet, otherwise the pig's feet cannot be set off. So in this kind of novel, it is best not to write emotional scenes, because no one can keep up with the rhythm of the pig's feet. The pig's feet must constantly meet stronger people in order to maintain the conflict and rhythm. More importantly, the map must be changed. And if there are emotional scenes and family members, it will be more difficult to control, unless the author writes down the female character later. And the author's emotional dramas are always superficial, and sleeping with Yu Xiaoyu is even more embarrassing! There was no emotional basis at first, but suddenly because of being rescued, no relationship developed in the middle. Suddenly, the protagonist and his sister got into bed together, but the protagonist didn't have the temperament of a domineering king! So it's better not to write here! Furthermore, the author wants to write a sex scene, but he doesn't dare to. If you have the ability, just boldly write some sex scenes. There is a high chance that it will become a hit, but it doesn't happen. Apart from sleeping together at night, the two didn't even interact at all during the day! Two, Lanyue City, save people! It gives people a very uncomfortable feeling here! The author is not writing about superheroes, but there are some shadows of superheroes! Say yes, the protagonist is so sane that he can give up on a family with children! Three, forcibly suppress your intelligence! Pei Zhaoye, Yang Kaitai, Xiao xx, Guan Yue, Fang xx, these are all people who have learned about the mutated powers of the world before the protagonist, and they are all very strong. But for the protagonist, he either becomes an obedient baby, or he is killed in three strikes, five and two! In particular, Pei Zhaoye can be regarded as the protagonist's leader. Normally, he should be the protagonist's big brother. If he wanted to die, he could die helping the protagonist, but he was actually written as an enemy by the author. The author can take a look at how Xu Qing and his guide Lei Dui get along with each other in Ergen's "Beyond Time". Although Lei Dui was offline very early, Ergen's writing is so disturbing that every reader can't calm down for a long time. A great addition to his novel! The author could have done it too. After talking about the shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. The author of "Tianbang" is very ambitious. You can see the author's ambition from the title of the book! The author's dream setting is very good. I personally think it is another creative setting after "Lord of Puro". But it certainly can't be compared to "Pro", but it's still pretty good! This is actually the protagonist's golden finger! His alone! The writing is very smooth, but lacks explosive points. The author can refer to the recent better "Crying Dragon". Let me write here first. If the author feels that there are too many shortcomings in what I have written, you can delete the post or even ban it, it doesn't matter! It's a big deal and I won't watch anymore!

Where is the author?

He is considered a great writer, but the emotional drama he wrote is really hard to watch. Don't write about things you're not good at. It's like a book that gets out of the way. The woman is hacked to death within three chapters. It's quite exciting to finish it all!

Martial arts is martial arts, and the live broadcast is here. I really wonder if it's me who can't stand it.

If you don't know how to write about love, don't write about it. He sleeps with someone like a little fish every day. He doesn't give a stone but gives it to his sister. No matter how bad a person is, he can't do such a thing.

The protagonist sister and Xiaoyu both disappeared in the later stage and basically had no scenes. The funniest thing is that the parents are only mentioned in two sentences. If you are not good at writing this, can you just cut it off? It's unnecessary.

The world will face a natural disaster in more than three years. I am determined to save the entire earth. The most important thing now is to train my sister, who has low qualifications, into a strong person who can stand alone😫😫

I can't help but feel uncomfortable. I just saw the trial in the temple. According to the settings written by the author, it should be a personal trial! You can kill others to gain points. I don't understand what kind of mentality the author has in writing about team combat.

What kind of weird brain circuit does the author have? ? Do you have to be loyal to your girlfriend? ? If you don't throw the trash can to your girlfriend, why would you sleep with her every day? Still pregnant? I really can't accept this setting. Abandoned by poison.

It would have been better without this relationship scene. My sister told my brother in the early stage that my best friend doesn't like you, but she actually said she doesn't like you. I was very curious. My best friend doesn't like your brother. You tell your brother to let it go. Your best friend likes your brother, so you start to tie your brother with a chain to your best friend. Come on, author, I will withdraw first.

As a long-time reader, the emotional drama is really the biggest failure. Can the author explain why he wrote it this way?

The most annoying thing is that the protagonist only upgrades after fighting life and death, while others can upgrade casually.

The story of this book could be richer. It only has plots of cheating, defeating monsters and upgrading. After reading it for a long time, it really tired the eyes. I had to write more about the characters and enrich the world view.

Does deleting your sister and your little girlfriend have any impact on the plot, or is there any foreshadowing, but such a big poisonous point cannot support your foreshadowing. The writing is worse than Buddha's emotional drama. Let's not force the harem to be added. I was just enjoying it, but I immediately dropped my head when I saw my sister and my little girlfriend.

I only read it because the label said it was invincible, but when I saw it was on the shelves, I didn't see any signs of being invincible. Is there any true invincible flow in Qidian now?

What is the significance of Yu Xiaoyu's existence? Vase? It looks so awkward, I might as well not write this character! Source Crystal doesn't let her use it, I don't understand! As the world becomes increasingly dangerous and there is no way to protect oneself, what is the author's purpose in writing this character? It makes no sense at the moment!

The descriptions of the first 200 pictures in this book have been determined to be published, and the author has no outline at all.

If you don't know how to write an emotional scene, don't write it. It's disgusting. Although you don't have feelings at the beginning, but later you develop an acceptable relationship, but you suddenly accept the person, and then you don't write anything anymore, and you just become a bed partner. Instead, you have an affair with the person named Fang, and you have been suspected of orthopedics with the protagonist's sister. You really wrote this emotional scene and the novel lost a lot of points. The quality of Chengfeng's recent few novels is not good, is it because he is not putting his heart into it?

Has someone been replaced? This book feels wrong

Burning Technique is an early panel, swallowing strange fire adds points. Grandpa Yaochen is an early system, and he can protect the protagonist even when he issues training missions. The structure of this royal novel, which has been blessed with explosive popularity, is also not simple.

It's so funny, the protagonist upgrades so fast, he has to bring a bunch of oil bottles with him

I was bombarded with comments and likes. Personally, I think the biggest problem with this book is the bullshit Sword Intent of Seeking Truth. Strength improvement is bound to philosophy, so why are these people not philosophers?

I used to read his books just to see a protagonist who kills decisively, but I really couldn't stand this one. Fortunately, I gave up on it early.

The author gave me the feeling that the more he writes, the worse he gets. The bad ending is the basic operation. In the later stage, it is basically all about spreading depression and making it uncomfortable to watch.

No, no, it's just a few words, it's so boring, I'm speechless😓

The first half of this book is considered an advanced white text. The villain is carved from the same mold. It's almost like the village guard dog will despise or look down upon the protagonist at first sight. The supporting characters are so stupid. The heroine is also baffling. If you don't know how to write, you can skip these. It started to look good in the mid-term, with high-quality quality. Starting from chapter 520, the villain started to poison again. I was even more dissatisfied with the ending of the last chapter. If you ascend, just ascend. First, write that your sister will die of old age, and then Fang Qiyun is so kind to you. Three thousand years are like one day to you. How about giving her a title? Then he left others behind and ascended

It's already halfway through the 10th and the new book has not been released yet.

The more you look at it, the more disgusting it gets. Chun Chun has become a nanny, giving all the good things to his subordinates. Every time, the protagonist contributes the most, but there is nothing he can use. He has trained so many subordinates, and it is not obvious how much help he has provided to the protagonist. The resources required for the protagonist's upgrade are very difficult to obtain, and the only way to obtain them is through the protagonist himself, and the team he has trained cannot provide any help.

This book is much worse than the author's previous books