What Started as Wordplay Became Folklore

There is a female protagonist, let me take a look first😍😍😍

I watched n series of lay masters called Quan Eunuch

The two major features of mainstream mainstream fandom are official and eunuch-cutting.

Doesn't the author know that the "emotional drama" he wrote is poisonous and shitty? Looking at Yang Ke and the protagonist, I couldn't get into the plot at all. It's a pity that the folk custom setting

A very good suture monster. I saw the lay master in Dusk Divide A few suggestions First, you don't have to learn from the lay master and write so many female protagonists. The perception of emotional dramas that reduce intelligence is not good. Either write emotional dramas well or avoid them. You don't need to write the handsome male protagonists who fall in love with each other at the first meeting. They are all kinds of secret loves Second, the power system is a bit messy. It is a temple of happiness, a temple of drama, and a temple of ignorance. After a while, I am a believer of the twelve zodiac signs again. The two sides feel that the system is different. Plus the doorway, I don't know if there will be some pretense. I wonder how to integrate it without making a show. Third, it must be completed. This subject is easy to be unfinished....

As expected, I was discovered again. I was really convinced. They were all following the same routine as the secular master, and they poisoned me to death.

There are more than 500 chapters and more than 70 comments. They are either not good or ugly. They have all been deleted because they were scolding. I don't even need to read them.

The world view of the lay master is grand, the foreshadowing is interlocking, and the eunuch is inexplicable. The death of the genius who created the path has resulted in the middle of the road.

Where is Shennong, and what is this book like?

Identification completed. This book is a dog-licking novel.

The words "big pig's hooves" and the exposed underwear are enough to make people shy away.

After reading Chapter 25, I can't figure out what this female supporting role does? How many days did it take to save people? You still have a face, licking your b face to seek performance?

What are these women worth writing about? They can't write well. It's just disgusting.

Just naming her Bai Ningxue already shows her skill.

The writing is messy, and there are too many books that have been incorporated into it, including Mortal Lord, Twilight Divide, Perfect World, and that vulgar emotional drama. It feels like a hodgepodge of several books copied here and there.

There are three or four chapters about the city. To put it mildly, they are all about seeing the secular master. You are putting the cart before the horse. The city accounts for at least 40% of the entire article. The starting point is to spend money to read the book. Are you sure readers are willing to pay back to read it? If it's a tomato, just write whatever you want

The writing was pretty good at first, but after it was put on the shelves, it became a fantasy dragon Aotian style!

It is predicted that the eunuchs, the secular ones will not be able to complete the book.

In this kind of novel, we shouldn't add characters that create a relaxing atmosphere, okay? Don't say a normal sentence, just three sentences to complain, okay? I'm really speechless. Not many normal people like to watch you complain.

The author is speechless. Even a complicated character is reluctant to die. The mini-boss in Novice Village can drag on for two or three volumes. The protagonist basically has no bright spots and relies on luck all the way.

Don't you think it's awkward to have the protagonist's father? When you know that your father is a big boss, why don't you ask your father for help, ask for resources, ask for skills, and take a step back and ask the head office for some information The protagonist's father can refuse to give it, but the protagonist has to ask. It's really awkward without such a plot.

Food and grass, why are there so few people?

To be honest, the book is okay, but the choice of words and sentences... It's hard to describe in one sentence. All the words are piled up

The scene in the warehouse was already a bit discouraging, but later I saw the heroine appear. No need to look anymore. The emotional drama is an absolute failure.

After reading a hundred chapters, the story in the game seems to have a solid setting and a grand world view. However, the ten or so chapters after it was released focused on writing a chicken-eating game to give the low-level male protagonist a chance to show off. However, the capital for showing off is based on equipment obtained from treasure boxes, which seems very lame. In addition to the realistic plot, the biggest problem is that the protagonist keeps clamoring for folklore experts but does not see any folklore literacy in the protagonist, nor does he solve anything with folklore knowledge. All spiritual knowledge is learned through the system.

There are so many royal feet, they make me swell when I see them, and I can't stand it when I hear them! 😭

The effort is out of proportion to the benefit, and the role of pig's feet is a bit awkward

I hate reading literary games the most, I don't know what they are.

When you stare into the abyss, the abyss stares back into you