From a Walking Hawker Selling Liver to a God of All Dharma

I actually don't understand why those of you who have troubles have to go to a martial arts gym. Logically speaking, you can practice things by yourself using the panel.

If you change the title of the book to "Starting from the Young A-Yue" to "Ten Thousand Fa Tianzun", you can ensure that a lot of people will read it.

If you sell a few more pennies, you will be targeted, and you will be targeted for murder and silence. You will not be targeted for eating and drinking, and you will not be targeted for buying a new house? The small martial arts gym is okay, and you dare to enter the top martial arts gym in the country. After a while, I will find out your situation and kill you to get a quota. Can you survive as a hawker?

Author, you really have no highlights in the first three chapters. The side effects of Golden Finger are so severe that even trying to convince yourself would make you dizzy for a long time. The writing is okay, but the rest is really lackluster.

The writing is a bit messy, don't try to include everything. Some of the plots are blunt and awkward, and the plot is mindless and very dramatic.

I can't understand the plot, and I can't understand any recommendations for martial arts schools in the early stages. Is the male protagonist also a stupid second grade elementary school student? He can't even speak in a feudal society?

The author is too humble in front of the readers. The sentence "Return to the Master" made me laugh.

The results will be better if you delete them at the beginning 🤫 There are not so many things to do before practicing martial arts. It is difficult to get a recommendation order and it involves the Dynasty and Changfeng martial arts schools. There is also a position for the protagonist to show off his own specialties. Then the protagonist relies on a golden finger to pass the test. Because of the recommendation order, he seizes someone else's place in the martial arts hall and starts to pull 😅 These chapters just glance at the beginning and jump to the chapter. I feel that there is not much difference between watching the beginning and not watching it. It is better to start with the protagonist entering the martial arts gym. The most disgusting thing about this opening is the erratic combat power. For example, the protagonist, an ordinary person who doesn't even have enough to eat and hasn't practiced martial arts, can "shoot a sonic boom" because of a low-level ordinary skill? I feel like everyone who practices martial arts can be killed by the protagonist, right? How to write about the follow-up after the protagonist learns martial arts? Invincible? Others can't dodge the protagonist's skill at all, right? The force generated at such a fast speed is very powerful. If you can't dodge, you can only rely on your body to resist. And being hit by a strong power is similar to a car crash. Or is it a car crash when the power is concentrated to a small extent, and you can't be fooled? Just this skill can crush all low-level warriors, right?

There is nothing else to change the mask into an ordinary mask. It is more natural. The world plot cannot revolve around the protagonist, and the protagonist needs to develop on his own.

It looks like it's going to be G. New authors shouldn't write so complicatedly. Just write plainly and feel comfortable, and that's it. You can still leave some fans. If you want everything, you'll end up with nothing.

The plot is good, including the protagonist's counterattack, which is no problem. However, in a world of high martial arts, the most basic first level requires pulse-opening pills and is blocked until death. In this kind of world, no one can rise. Even the Qing Dynasty's ban on martial arts cannot prevent ordinary people from practicing martial arts. You have simply closed the door and added another lock. How can ordinary people stand up? Also, if copper plates are used at the bottom level and silver is used at the top level, does it mean that there is no middle class for people who are broad at both ends?

Recommended by newcomers and new books I would like to ask all readers to collect, read, and comment. Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

It's okay. Although there are all kinds of flaws, the plot of "The First Out of the City" is okay. Just write it down. Come on, author.

Thank you for your compliments, but the newbie has no talent, and his writing is also very flawed. After much thought, the only way to remedy the problem is to add more updates! Please read and collect!

It's not bad. As readers of more than ten years have said, have you posted it to the group of writers who are on the streets? It's all your peers who are belittling you.