Warhammer 40,000: Pale Phoenix

The Upper Nest was definitely corrupted by Slaanesh. There was the previous description of the snake with the crown of thorns in the rebellion, and the description of the noble maid's tongue and the behavior of the noble in the previous chapter, which is definitely Slaanesh. Let Fulgrim's clone land in the upper world of Slaanesh's corruption, but then land in the bottom hive, which can be a compromise between the Emperor and Slaanesh. Slaanesh wanted to corrupt the Phoenix again, and the Emperor wanted to sharpen the Phoenix so that he would recognize Chaos and his own shortcomings. Either fall here to the hands of Slaanesh, or recognize that you are the enemy of Chaos. It's up to Fulgrim's own choice.

I hope you are all satisfied after reading it and can cast your vote. It may not mean much to my family, but your vote is my greatest support. Wen Ting led Xiaofu to thank you, go to work Xiaofu!

I finally saw the one about Meifeng. I hope to see the son of the emperor, the enemy who killed his father 🙂🙂🙂

The new Meifeng, I hope it can survive to be released on the shelves

I wrote dozens of tmd, and it's still in the nest, and the water is terrible. Come on, everyone, this is not for your so-called mortals. Forget it, it is estimated to be within 150,000 words.

It is indeed possible to write from other perspectives, and the effect will be good once it is written, but it cannot account for such a large proportion. The rest will either have an occasional chapter as an interlude, or it will be a group portrait article. There are now eleven chapters in this book without the protagonist. This ratio is too high, and this book cannot guarantee to be updated every day. It will be half a month since I saw the protagonist. Moreover, there are too many words piled up when writing the article, which looks very verbose.

The relationship between the protagonist and the Emperor's Children felt awkward, and for those who didn't know, I thought it was a romance novel.

Um. . . . Just because the people on the nest want to capture Fulgrim and **** him, we can't really write him as a tomboy. We don't pursue perfection too much, and we don't let pride turn into cowardice.

To be honest, the writing was too slow, and the progress of the story was also slow, which made people feel uncomfortable reading it. After reading a few chapters, I completely forgot what was written before. I didn't enter the main story before it was released. I wonder if someone is tricking you. I can't see the future of the book at all.

The writing is okay. It would be possible to add more ink to the supporting characters to polish the plot, but this kind of slow-paced writing requires sufficient update progress to ensure results. Your kind of update, which is almost once a day, and the number of words in each update is still average, is really not suitable for this kind of writing. It can only be said that it relies on love to generate electricity, and the results are bound to not be good. If the author only works part-time as a hobby, it will be fine. If you want to make some money by writing books, it will probably be difficult, so you have to be mentally prepared. 😠

To be honest, the author's writing is okay, but the pace is a bit laggy, and it's even slower. There are only a few words in one chapter, so it doesn't look very good.

It's already on the shelves. I'll try my best to update it twice a day. As for the pace, I'm trying to speed up the pace. I also find that my own writing tends to be slow and hot, which may make many monks unhappy. If you really don't like it, you can support it. As for the progress of the plot, I am also speeding up the pace. I try to abandon some plots as much as possible. I promised everyone that the father and son will meet before six months, and I will do what I said, so don't worry. There are also issues with the subsequent plot and settings. I will write about them in the work after updating to Father and Son, including the settings of Winona, the settings of the Emperor's Loyalist Son of Atonement, etc. Finally, thank you for your support. I am actually reading all the comments, whether they are good or bad. I may not write well and may even dissatisfy everyone, or someone may like my writing. I accept it whether it is good or bad, and I will continue to write. Please rest assured.

The writing and ink focus more on the protagonist! 🤓 After all, everyone likes to watch the growth of the Primarch. First meet the Zaizi, then the process of unifying the planet and developing the planet. Then, unify the star sectors so that they have a basic base, and then use the skin to develop and attack in parallel. Then slowly rebuild the legion and participate in some major battles later. Meet Huang Pizi, the last step to reverse the decline of the empire.

The book has a strong Hammer flavor and is suitable for Warhammer lovers. It is not a comedy-style Hammer novel. I found it difficult to read those light novels that were written in a crazy comedy-style. The Space Marines and Primarchs are written in the same way as zz. In my opinion, this book is well written, but the plot needs to be advanced. I don't know if the author has an outline. Generally speaking, the exciting part about the meeting and return of the original body and Zai Zai should be written after it is released. I have been waiting for this book for several days. I read it every day after it was released. I have saved 7 or 8 chapters now and I have not seen the original body and Zai Zai meeting. The plot is very well polished. The problem is You have polished it too meticulously. You have written the web article in such detail to put it bluntly. Just like Chinese compositions, some unnecessary plots and unnecessary words can be removed. The slow development of the plot is the biggest poisonous point of your book so far. But don't worry, author. You will get smoother and smoother when writing articles. The premise is that you have to make a good outline. This does not mean that you are not allowed to be lazy, but that you are reasonable and limited. Summary: Warhammer Food and Grass, middle to upper level (in my opinion, it is better written than the one about Phoenix Sex Transformation and the Companion Protagonist)

The emperor's son has been floating in orbit for 15 days. When can they see their young father?😫

I want to see the love-hate relationship between Xiaofeng and Tie Shou! ! !

A perfect book, a great work, and a flawless art. Fulgen's new book is a must-try. Needless to say, it tastes great. Ferrus said it was a good read! 🙂

I would die if I didn't see Zi Ting Phoenix 🙂

It gives me the feeling that a phoenix has risen from the ashes and become a suzaku. Love of beauty and pursuit of perfection are the characteristics of the Third Legion, and arrogance and arrogance are its shortcomings. The new chapter directly abandons these. The alienation from beautiful things and the vague belief in the emperor are too separate. If it were replaced by the desire for beauty, but the heart warned oneself to be restrained, and warned oneself about the dangers of arrogance and arrogance, the armor and decoration would still show the beauty, and the skills would still pursue perfection, but everything would appear restrained, so it would be beautiful but not exaggerated, then the sense of separation would not be so great. Character description can actually refer to Guilliman. As the original customized toy of Khorne, irritability and impulsiveness are its shortcomings. However, with education, Guilliman has restrained his instincts and can operate rationally in most cases. However, in some cases, he will still show character flaws and will jump into gangs to single out those who go against the car.

The author has updated it. It's much better than the other one. It's definitely okay to continue this.

Why are you pretending to be dead all of a sudden?

It seems that the author is very busy recently 🙂

Can it still be updated? Please, please, I really love watching Fumeifeng! The author doesn't want a eunuch!