Body-Tempering Martial Arts: The Path to Immortality Begins with Five-Animal Exercises

I got a job, became an apprentice, practiced martial arts, and even tried to repay a debt of gratitude. When you become emperor next year, the system says, "Thank you for nurturing my imperial body all these years." Will you give it to me or not? Isn't all of this a bit too contrived? Did I do all this just to kneel and offer up my body?

If you're going to write about widows, just stop already! Damn, all the male leads are like eunuchs now.

The plot revolves around the idea that hard work pays off, and the idea that one certificate is forever valid. However, once someone becomes wealthy, they have access to martial arts schools and sects, but instead of joining them, they collect scraps of martial arts to practice. This kind of plot progression is uninteresting. Does the author not know how to write a sect storyline?

Your side-stretching technique is really unpleasant to watch.

When writing from the protagonist's perspective, I think a pseudo-first-person narration should be used. While it's not about "I did this or that," it shouldn't be "he" either. Otherwise, it lacks a sense of immersion. Instead, use the protagonist's name as the subject, then write about their feelings and actions in the first person.

The Vajra Indestructible Divine Skill is indestructible, not invincible, right?

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