
Ke Xue Arms Dealer: Start with One Billion Yen
柯学军火商:开局十亿日元
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Anime Crossover
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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533Chapters
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I can accept many harem novels, and even almost all novels I can't accept single or nothing, with only two exceptions, one is Shen Youchu in I Really Don't Want to Reborn, which was very popular a while ago, and the other is Mao Lilan. Many novels at the top of the list describe how wonderful the heroines are, but I don't think they are as touching as those written by Shen Youchu, and they are not as worthy of being loved wholeheartedly by a good man. The other thing is that I have been watching big anime since I was a child, and I can't find any shortcomings that make Maorilan unworthy of being filled with a sincere heart. I personally feel that why almost most of the female protagonists in the harem of Conan fans are Ai and so-and-so, or simply the legacy of Wei Wu, because it is really easy to be called a scum and a beast if you are not satisfied with starting a harem after having Xiaolan!
Well, the author wanted to create conflict, and the protagonist wanted to be a coward, and then a series of operations gave him a grumpy old man to do things! ! !
The protagonist is too petty
Why do I feel like this protagonist is a bit of a loser? He obviously has a system mall that is the envy of people all over the world, with super powers and exercises from all over the world, as well as the ability to buy various movies, TV shows, and various teams that are only loyal to him in novels, but the goal of the protagonist is just to become a chaebol.
He was poisoned at the beginning, can't he spend the 1 billion yen he stole? That's funny, right? That's cash, not Alipay and WeChat. Do you have Internet-connected money counting machines in convenience stores and restaurants?
His name was dug out at the beginning of the drama, and he didn't mean to be the mastermind at all. He also revealed that he was an arms dealer in front of others, which was a bit speechless.
I like your opening, but don't write the protagonist as the red side's dog later on. As long as it's not the red side, it doesn't matter whether it's the gray side or the black side.
If you write a fanfic and change the characters of the original work, then why are you writing a fanfic?
It feels okay. It's a bit realistic, and because it's realistic, the characters are a bit occ. For example, the silly sweet sweet Sonoko turns into a scheming chaebol heir. Maybe the original author will be unhappy. There are also some issues with oral habits and poor writing skills, but others I think are okay.
Shennong
Evaluation: The first few chapters are very OOC, and there are strong suspicions of conspiracy theories, which greatly affects the viewing experience. It is recommended to start reading from Chapter 21. The plot in the following chapters is still good. There have been some corrections and the previous problems have been solved a lot. In general, it is still worth watching and it is recommended to taste it.
Although the author tried his best to create a slightly more stylish pig's foot, his limited ability may have given me the feeling that this pig's foot is a lunatic.
The author despises the chaebol and wants to join the chaebol. He expresses disdain for his integrity.
I feel like I've completely failed to write. Now I'm all confused. I can't convey the basic theme at all. I'm going to retreat and settle down. Let's wait and see.
If you like conspiracy theories so much, why don't you write Journey to the West?
Why don't you just change your personality completely? Do you think you have a unique style?
In a word: This protagonist is both good and fun-loving
In fact, I have always wanted to say, there is obviously gold and jewelry in the warehouse of Mingming Didan Primary School, why not go and get it?
It was good to watch at first, but I couldn't stand the part when I got to Tomizewa's house.
I read a Conan fan, and you spent so much space describing how to annex the Tomizawa family. I'm not here to read about political intrigue and business wars.
Are you tired of talking about conspiracy theories every day? Gone, gone
It's awesome. It's one of those rare novels that can't be read within the first two chapters. I would like to comment here to commemorate it.
The plot of the Fukuzawa family is a complete failure... Was it well written? Is it cool? I kept writing, and I have written more than 20 scenes... There are more scenes than Gin. I've been following the updates and now I don't want to read anymore…
Can my grades really be better than those on the stove? Or is the stove completely broken now? This book was at the top of the Lu list, but the author stopped writing it and changed the outline to come up with ideas. To be honest, I don't think it was as well written as the Lu book.
The robbery was not a bank at the beginning, so the money can be used. There are many cases in Conan, which are inherently unreasonable. Why do you want him to forcefully do something reasonable? Why is the World of Conan called the World of Conan?
Is it already finished?
It has not been updated for a long time. When will it be updated?
He's still an eunuch. Plus the book Seoul Spring, that's two books.
Suggestion
It is suggested that it be changed to start with a debt of one billion, and later use means to owe more and more, so that both red and black will owe everything. I owe it to everyone to be afraid that something might happen to the protagonist. Similar to Constantine in DC.
The front part is still okay, but the back part is really watered down. I don't know the world. I have to force explanations and intelligence to set off the protagonist. I write three or four chapters of nonsense after meeting each other. The plot advancement is also extremely slow, so I canceled it.
There has been no update for 5 days, is it discontinued?
Does the author have a bit of a green-haired turtle tendency? How many times did Xiaolan hugged Conan?
The protagonist is such an idiot, and I suffer from stupidity. The evaluation is that if you don't have this kind of writing power, you shouldn't write a conspiracy-type protagonist. If you write an ordinary person, I won't feel stupid, but this protagonist still has to pretend to do things and is pretentious. There is also the conspiracy theory that Tiantian puts out, and the conspiracy theory garden is forgetful. Even Kogoro actually wants conspiracy theory. He has nothing to do after he is full. You can just write original works and write fanfics. Moreover, it is not too satisfying to collapse like this. The protagonist still has a headache every day.
I have tried it, and the writing by this author is still good. At least overall there is nothing wrong with it. If it can be maintained at this level, I will definitely continue to read it. Come on, the author can keep up this quality.
Let me ask, is this a single female protagonist or a harem? If it is a single female protagonist, who is it?