Age of Mercury, I Can Extract Entries

This protagonist is awesome. When something goes wrong with her body, she would rather trust outsiders than believe in her own cheating. Protagonist, you are so in need of love. You want to tell others immediately about your situation and want to be recognized by others. You must be a female author. You have such a strong desire to share.

I wonder where the current Internet article writers learned their wry smiles?

Stop writing emotional scenes. It looks too embarrassing. A group of people, with men bowing their heads and women turning around, is all a sign of cowardice. You could just use a stone and splash water to attract them. How can you be safe if the rescuers are dead? Also, if there is a third person present, why do you say everything outside? Are you so careless? Also, why do you say you are a warrior when you save people? You can do as much as you have the ability. It has nothing to do with your status. Should the masses wait for rescue indifferently?

Because you have no basis in weapons, you choose weapons and double shields. How could you do it without practicing? If you don't practice because you don't know how, how can you lose your understanding? You can choose a bad [Knife], but you choose [Double Shield] 🤔

A novel that overwhelms the reader is like an essay that goes off-topic, and gets zero marks. This is the most disgusting thing. Moreover, this crazy author would sometimes do things and people to disgust readers and make them suffer. Are you living in the past? If you can't keep up with the times, don't write novels. It's too unlucky. Reading a novel makes me feel unhappy.

A genius of the same level who signed the Stars contract went out to hunt seafood at a depth of about 500 meters because she was a woman. However, because the protagonist was too powerful, she displayed it as a vase and did not participate in the battle, giving up actual combat... I have to complain. Poison!

How did you sign the contract? I feel like my writing is better than yours.

I thought it was a good book, but I didn't expect it to be poisonous in the later stage. I had a romantic girlfriend, and she took the male protagonist off because of her impure intentions. It was despicable. 😰😰

I'm here to see the entries, not to see your fighting ability. Chapter 60, only two entries? Food, vegetables, trees, there is no entry for that one. It is just as hard for the protagonist to find an entry. Let's go to the factory and drive screws.

All I can say is that there are no big poisons, but there are constant medium and small poisons. Even though he is a first-class author, he listens to people's advice to eat enough. If he adds more poisons, no one will read it!

It's better not to write the emotional drama, and it's better to be a monk than to have a romantic girlfriend. It's quite poisonous. Really, the rest is fine.

Your power-increasing entry is one-time 🤔 and should not be the basic attribute x. You wrote it as one-time +, so what is the use of it 😅

When I first read it, I thought it was Ben Liangcao. After becoming a first-level warrior, I fell into a cliche and started to pile up data. The plot also turned into a diary. Miss Yu appeared again. She was quite bloody. The writing was really average, like boiled water. That is, the setting of Goldfinger was okay. I can look forward to it a little. There is no intelligence at the moment. I don't know what will happen if it is put on the shelves. It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

The protagonist and his brother are orphans. After the brother got married, he and his sister-in-law raised him together, and they both treated the protagonist wholeheartedly. What is the difference between the sister-in-law's parents and the protagonist's parents? Now that the uncle is sick, some people scold the protagonist for spending money to save him? Are these people antisocial?

The first 40 or so is fine, but the back is poisonous. It's not the protagonist's parents. His brother's father-in-law has too many scenes in 114 chapters. He's still sick and the treatment costs 6 billion. There are more than 100 chapters in the pig's horns, so I have to help memorize them. If you are sick, treat yourself. What kind of novel should you write?🥱

Don't do it, buddy, you really speak regardless of the occasion. Can you please create a suitable occasion before speaking on important matters? How can I think of saying something regardless of the occasion?

I felt fine before Chapter 40, but the characters in the last 20 chapters have been quite stupid. First, the supporting characters mocked without thinking, and then apologized and transferred schools. An NPC in the novice village wrote about what he was doing, and then the classic monster came into the city and the protagonist rescued people.

I finally participated in a national competition, and it was a good opportunity to show off. I waited for the second place, and was pretended to be the first place. Who is the protagonist? Let the young people go to cure it. You can't win even if you cheat. I don't want to say anything. You pursue your rationality.

The protagonist is as good as the captain and only gets 10% of the profit. Later, if he is better than the captain, he only gets 20% of the profit. Isn't that stupid? Also, the entry for the latter part is not written. Have you lost your golden finger?

Chapter 300 is still a level 1 number. You will know what the ingredients are. Big poisons are not as constant as small poisons, and they also affect your mood. The most disgusting thing is the heroine named Yu, who is all kinds of utilitarian and also forces herself to show affection. To be honest, I didn't see the protagonist having any emotion for her, and writing it like this is completely poisonous. There are more than 100 chapters in which the protagonist has a teacher-student relationship, a brotherly relationship, and a family relationship, but he doesn't have any male-female emotional tendencies with any woman, but he can't just find a heroine who is so utilitarian and whose description is so bad. It's not your fault that it's utilitarian, it's your fault that it's written so poorly.

Let's talk about the issue of girlfriends. The protagonist's girlfriend was just interested in his talent in exchange for benefits at first, but eventually she developed a real relationship step by step. I don't think there is a problem. The comments in the comment area are just that there is a better one, but the article also said that there is no need to sacrifice oneself in order to win over the protagonist. A few words with the protagonist in a training camp are called emotional foundations? Then the protagonist hunts sea beasts with his current girlfriend for more than a month without having a better emotional foundation.

It's a bit poisonous. How can people practice martial arts in the water? Does it mean that as the martial arts becomes stronger, the amount of water will decrease? It's better to have extraordinary abilities

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I just want to ask, isn't psychic blockage still psychic? Why is it useless? Just like Sun Wukong, wouldn't it still be digested after eating the golden elixir? There is an entry on adding strength, and the description says that adding strength is based on the original. It looks like a technique, but the physical quality has not been improved. The Tao is the Tao, and the technique is the technique. Judging from the fact that the protagonist's stats have increased significantly, is the author sure that the protagonist's physical fitness has kept up? After all, is it possible to become a martial artist once the strength is reached? Or are you physically fit enough to become a martial artist? Is strength skill plus strength, or pure strength? I really have a big head! !

The emotional drama is inexplicable, and suddenly I have a girlfriend

It's so poisonous. Use double shields in the water. No wonder no one subscribes.

In other words, traditional high-level martial arts is basically the same except for the changes in style and environment.