Naruto: a Conversation Across Time and Space with the Fourth Hokage

Namikaze Minato met the time-traveled Naruto in the third battle, and learned a lot about the future from Naruto's words and deeds in the future. Namikaze Minato did not take the initiative to explore the future, and finally sealed things about Naruto from himself and his teammates.

Don't write about the same time and space. If sperm and eggs are not born at the same time, they will not be the same person, let alone a series of changes. Do you think it is all a good thing?

Not all the information was given, Kakashi's Sharingan, Kamui effect, how can Obito win if he has mental arithmetic but no intention, even the jinchuriki was sealed back by the Tailed Beast, and if he is still alive, he has to give it a chance. What do you want to do with Daidomu next?

Seeing that the plot of more than 30 chapters so far is relatively smooth. The protagonist is actually not Namikaze Minato's son. It's only been over 30 chapters and the father and son are about to meet. I don't know how to make things happen next.

Yeah, it was probably the Four Shadows who joined forces to attack Konoha again. Minato was defeated and then seriously injured and killed by Obito in a sneak attack. I just don't understand, why do you want to say what will happen in three months? The enemy is not without brains. Even if they don't have brains, they will attack tomorrow if they lose their brains. It's good that you know this information and pay more attention to it. Akatsuki doesn't have a flying thunder god. Can it teleport with so many people? As long as you have time, convince the four shadows to use their clones and Minato's shadow clone to use the Flying Thunder God to go to the battlefield. Will they believe it when they see it?

Minato is an idiot, the author is overthinking

Did you forget something? On the night of the Kyuubi, Minato couldn't hide Obito anymore. The second flying thunder god was marked, and he could be stabbed at any time when he thought of it.

It is actually very simple to win over the Hyuga clan. You can go to Hyuga Hizashi and say that it is okay to relieve the Hyuga clan from the fate of being a caged bird, but it requires the Hyuga clan to plan a bloodline marriage with the Leaf Village. You can also tell him that he has reincarnation eyes.

It's very easy to deal with Obito, it's really easy, especially Minato Namikaze is the easiest to deal with Obito.

If the war between the Akatsuki organization and the ninja world is still going on In the absence of Nagato's Rinnegan, he can only reveal that there is a pair of reincarnation eyes on the moon The huge reincarnation eye, The reincarnation eye and the reincarnation eye are of the same level If the huge reincarnation voice can be brought to Konoha Village, it may be comparable to the reincarnation eye But the problem is that no one knows the way to the moon now

Isn't this a story like Black Hole Frequency and Butterfly Effect? ​​But why should the protagonist be set as a time traveler? Only the natives can feel like solving puzzles.

What's standing in front of you now is Minato Minato

The first chapter gave me a lot of things to complain about. I really can't imagine how many bad things I'd like to complain about if I read further!

Butterfly effect? But you are writing about Naruto, and I feel like you are not familiar with the story. It was fine in the beginning, but Danzo died, and the plot got out of control later on. The original story was about Itachi's death and the plot went crazy. Please refer to the setting, but don't mess with it. Either refer to the butterfly effect, where every change has a consequential change, or leave the story to the characters. Nagato and Konan were written as idiots, Obito is also a great character, but not written well. It is impossible for Nagato not to be convinced by Jiraiya who knows everything. If you watch their plot, you will know that he will, because he is Jiraiya. Obito is crazy about love, he will miss Lin on the third tail, and he will also be turned away by words. The fourth generation never dies, it is natural choice to die for love. Danzo's writing is okay, but he still feels a bit weak. As for the current class, I guess he will be written as a former Obito with enhanced abilities. The protagonist's abilities are also difficult to arrange, because the protagonist of this book should be Minato. In a time and space setting, the villain must be strong enough and smart enough, otherwise it will be boring. The setting at the beginning is good. I stayed up late to read it in one day. I still feel that there are many places that are not good, but keep going!

The writing is good so far, let's see what happens next!

Black hole frequency. Although it was a work in 2000, the idea of ​​the interactive influence of dual timelines is really very advanced It can be seen that the author has done a lot of homework, although there are many people who want to be black and black, and Naruto has not seen everything. Wait, wait, wait But it is a sign of a new trend after all This idea can definitely give birth to new boutiques and classics So say cheers!

Chapter 72 is written unreasonably. Obito would rather suffer Minato's attack, rather be captured alive and have his eyes gouged out than use Izanagi. This is very unreasonable.

With your avatar and style, why do I feel like I've seen you in the QQ group? Little Naruto's group

Are there any good Naruto fics to watch recently? Don't be too conspiratorial.

Time is too chaotic. Every time the past type is changed, the protagonist works unilaterally, and the fourth generation never does anything to help the protagonist.

I was thinking that in so many parallel worlds, there must be Naruto who wants to destroy all parallel worlds. The only reason is why I can live happily in other worlds, but I can only live miserable 😊

The beginning was good, but after the big crisis was resolved, there was no new matching plot to continue.

Reminds me of a previous Hong Kong drama starring Guo Jinan

The writing is quite good, but the plot progresses too fast. Does the author have an outline? I feel like I can't write many words.