Mystery: Rewriting the Story Starting from Saving Old Neil

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Don't you think this plot is very wrong? The last moment, the protagonist was involved when Xiao Ke was pretending to be a god. When Xiao Ke, as a god, was speaking, the protagonist came and I added and then immediately asked Alger of sequence nine for five milliliters of human-faced fish brain

Among close friends, in addition to destiny, there are multiple pathways under one Sefirot. Judging from the status and distribution of the King of Angels or True Gods under these pathways, there is a core pathway among these pathways that is closer to the authority and symbol of the Sefirot itself. This pathway is easier to communicate with the Sefirot than others, which is very beneficial for promotion to the past. But it is also more susceptible to its contamination, and the revival of the old will is faster and stronger - this is not clearly stated in the original work, and is rarely mentioned outside the original work. The reasons for this hypothesis are as follows: 1. Take the Gou San Family as an example: In the Fourth Epoch, Mr. Men, Amon, and Antigo all face the risk of Tianzun's resurrection, but they are obviously different. After Antigo accommodated Uniqueness, he had to sleep to avoid the Heavenly Lord. Amon was also the 1+1 King of Angels but did not do this (suspected to be influenced by the Sea of ​​Chaos or Adam), and Mr. Men, as the person closest to the true God, was in very good condition. This is a strange contrast. Judging from the authority and symbol of the Lord of Mysteries, fools and errors are closest, while the door is relatively far away. 2. Take Grisha as an example: when he was about to be unable to suppress God's resurgence, he chose to resurrect the Hanged Man first, rather than others. Judging from the subsequent performance of Zhenzo and the Dark Angel Evil Spirit, the Hanged Man pathway is indeed better at communicating with the Sea of ​​Chaos. 3. Take the two generations of Death Gods as an example: the seal seeped out of the tributary of the River of Eternal Darkness in the Second Age, but only the two Death Gods can find and use it, and neither Night nor Dusk can. The above, the core path most likely does exist. The following table is the core path table of the nine major sources of matter: God: The Hanged Man, the sun with low probability (the connection between the sea of chaos, the strict selection of God and Grisha, and omnipotence is also the core symbol. The sun is mainly the "cornerstone") Mystery: The Fool (Heaven) Respecting the Quilt Selection, Destruction Wolf was the first to propose the existence of Source Castle) Singularity: Eternal Sleeper (the God of Death discovered the use of the River of Eternal Darkness) Natural Disaster: Unsure, but more inclined to Chaos (Although the Red Priest was contaminated, the original witch jumped into the sea, and this way has Natural disasters, doomsday and other powers, but from a symbolic point of view, the two paths are closer to parallel and have no core) Knowledge: Hermit (the uniqueness is activated by pollution, and from a symbolic point of view, it is also closer) Brother's Nest: Mother (the mother goddess chooses the moon first and there is no true god. , Secondly, his condition is still good, and the two paths are probably not much different for the living old days) Chaos: Black Emperor (Country of Disorder) Mother Tree: Unsure, but inclined to the devil Key of Light: Wheel of Fortune (Guidance of Destiny)

I personally think that the writing style is adequate. If it can be improved, it will be better. If it cannot be improved, forget it. I think the main problem with the current writing lies in the unclear grasp of the settings or characters. For example, in the episode about Mirror Orochi's divination, it is impossible for 5664 to say those words with his character. He is more likely to directly give hazy, image-filled pictures for him to interpret on his own, or be attracted by 008 and give revelations in a divine tone. The author's writing in this way greatly violates the character. Another example is Lanerwus who openly calls the True Creation God's Descendance Ceremony the Evil God's Descendance Ceremony (yes, it has not been changed yet). This means that the author did not change his mind when writing, and substituted the perspective of the previous character into other characters. To put it bluntly, he just made a habit of writing and did not change it. This is a great imprecision in the book. Also, Wo Wen openly talks about digestion and other matters to the captain and the protagonist, which is obviously against common sense. Even if Wo Wen happens to know the acting method, there is no reason to know that the captain understands this, and there is no reason to mention it to the protagonist. Even if he is really extremely kind, the protagonist and the captain should not have no reaction. I think what needs to be corrected most are the above points, which have a great negative impact on the reading experience. Of course, it may be that I am too picky. If the author is unhappy, please don't care. I apologize in advance. If you have other opinions or reasons, you are very welcome to discuss it. After all, making this book better is our common goal. I think the rest is pretty good, especially the arrangement of the plot is satisfactory. My suggestions for future plots are as follows: 1. Increase the interaction between the protagonist and Xiao Ke in real life. There is too little communication between them now, not like friends or even teammates. In the same way, there is also the Nighthawk Squad. I hope the author can describe this aspect more. 2. Xiaoke has not yet formed a close relationship with Azik, and he does not even have much suspicion or seek further help. This is a bit strange, after all, it has been so long since this line has been established. above

The protagonist's ability is very interesting, and it reminded Mr. Fool of his fear of being dominated by the audience. He cast two to encourage him.

So far, the rhythm and style are very nice, I look forward to it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Apart from anything else, the updates are quite timely. I hope you will continue to work hard 🌹

Killed together with the occult nobles

Looking forward to it😍😍😍

Will the protagonist open another trumpet account in the tarot session? Play foursome with the Fool

To write about redemption, it is best to imitate the original work and redeem one character in one chapter. And redeeming a person happens to be the core theme of this chapter

It really made my worries come true. The content is good, but the results are not good. It's really a eunuch.

Is there any way to have a female protagonist?

This Admissor is too outrageous. You can also read other people's experiences on Source Castle. Although it is said that it is protected by the protagonist Goldfinger, it is not too big.

Is the original protagonist really dead? It's best not to do this. The main character died right after it was released. To be honest, I have never read a novel like this 😰

If the author can finish it, it will definitely be a very good novel.

Good-looking, but too eunuch_(xз∠)_

Shangxiang, a very good book, but a pity