
Mortal Chaos Cauldron
凡人之混沌鼎
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In fact, if you don't know how to write love scenes between men and women, you can directly write about exchange of benefits or protection. You can also become a Taoist couple. Han Li also has many Taoist partners who are protected by benefits. Of course, protection cannot be free. In order to get something in return, you have to give something, such as exercises, magic weapons, or your body, etc.
Nowadays, novels are either pure eunuch training, or a large harem, with four or five in the middle is no longer popular. Writing about mortals with mortals is a dead end. Fans want to be happy, the protagonist must be invincible, get all kinds of treasures and beauties, abuse the master and suppress the fighting power, no one will read it
The only theme of mortals is immortality. I hope the protagonist in the author's novel is not a walking Teddy. At the same time, the skills should not be the same. Otherwise, it will be too homogeneous. Just interact with Paopao normally. Don't lick it.
The author still can't figure it out, this book is probably about Barbie
Author, you have to decide what genre to write in. If you are a harem, you should collect all the famous and beautiful ones for your enjoyment. Female nuns are also resources. If the protagonist is attractive, senior female nuns will all fall in love with the protagonist. If you are writing about the eunuch training stream, or if you are only good at writing about this kind of thing, then don't write about women, as it will get annoying when you see it. If you write about a harem and then only include two or three women, and it fails without the interaction between the two cultivators, then it is still the eunuch cultivation style, and it is better not to write about women. Don't look at these guys shouting cheerfully, but look at how many books they have supported. I think based on your level, writing about eunuch training is most likely a running account. Of course, you can decide how to write it yourself. Look at some guys who say they will take two or three girls, and then consider whether they are of use to them before taking them. It's really funny. This is not about the marriage of sons-in-law, Gui Nan is everywhere 🐢. The main character is written so well that anyone can make it fly, but the main character collapses, and even the weak and young characters in the beginning are just bad. No matter what genre you should focus on improving the protagonist, it must be fun.
The technique is rubbish. Lao Mo's Qing Yuan Sword Technique alone can wipe out a group of protagonists like this rubbish.
Bonus points for having double spiritual roots, bonus points for the heroine Dong Xuan'er, bonus points for handling the incident appropriately (no killing indiscriminately, no force to show off), bonus points for not worrying about whether to take the bottle or not. I'm still watching. Keep the pace until the end and it will be a hit
When they met for the first time, they gave Han Li two high-grade magic weapons, which was even more generous than the golden elixir period.
I recommend you read Mortal: The Immortal Path of Immortality, which is also a decent fanfic, at least it doesn't lick the male protagonist.
I feel like I should try to be like a casual cultivator, come and go as I please, and not be bound by the family
It's not bad. It suits my taste. There are very few books about mortals. Nowadays, most of my fellow mortals are trying to seize opportunities and women from old demons, and they are not too censorious. This book is still worth reading.
Let's leave a passerby like this to Old Demon Han.
The only ones worth accepting are the Young Master of Star Palace and Yuan Yao. Needless to say, the first one is a rich woman.
It is recommended that the protagonist learn from myths and legends, immortal evil, nuclear physics knowledge and electromagnetism to create the true fire of samadhi, the Five Thunder Zhengfa and the Baji Tao, practice the Five Elements Divine Thunder and refine his own wishful spiritual treasure.
It is recommended that the protagonist learn from Journey to the West, The List of Gods and Fighting to Break the Sky to induce the stellar fire of the Nine Heavens Sun, or learn from nuclear physics to create a modified version of nuclear weapons to detonate the fire with a temperature of hundreds of millions in the nuclear explosion center, the fire in the center of the earth and the three elements of his own essence, energy and spirit to draw out the real fire and various strange fires in the heaven, earth and universe (such as the emperor's flame in Fighting to Break the Sky, Green Lotus Emperor Heart Fire, Pure Lotus Demon Fire, Xuanhuang Flame, Fallen Heart Flame, Void Swallowing Flame, Golden Emperor Burning Heaven Flame, Bone Cold Spirit Fire, Sea Heart Flame, Creature Flame, Fire Cloud Water Flame, Volcano Stone Flame, Wind Fury Dragon Flame, Netherworld Poison Fire, Yin and Yang Double Flame, Ten Thousand Beast Spirit Fire, Eight Desolation Flames, Nine Nether Golden Ancestral Fire, Red Lotus Karma Fire, Three Thousand Flames Fire, Nine Nether Wind Flame, Nine Dragons Thunder Gang Fire, Turtle Spirit Earth Fire and Dry Blue Ice Flame in Mortal Cultivation Legend, Sun Essence Fire, Taiyin Essence Fire, Tiandu Corpse Fire, Golden Light Divine Flame of Eight Gates Golden Light Mirror) and pure Yang Qi and the power of thunder (such as Five Elements Divine Thunder, Nine Heavens Purple Thunder, Jin Gang Demon-Destroying Divine Thunder, Tianluo True Thunder) and Haoran Zhengqi Smelt and combine the fire in the air, the fire in the wood, and the fire in the stone to create your own Samadhi True Fire (the internal energy can smelt and absorb the material, energy, and spiritual soul of the heaven, earth, universe, and nature to strengthen your own essence, and the external energy can destroy the heaven, earth, and earth and burn the essence of all things in the world, the universe, and nature, that is, the matter, energy, and spiritual soul will)! ! It is recommended that the protagonist learn from the body-breaking invisible sword energy in the Hong Kong comic Wen Rui'an's Legend of Heroes, the purple and green double swords and the Nanming Lihuo Sword and the Golden Fire Sword and the Invisible Sword in the Hong Kong comic The Legend of Shushan Swordsman, and the peerless swords and The Ten Thousand Thunder Heavenly Sword and Zhu Xian Sword in Hong Kong Man's Legend of the Emperor and the Demon Sword, Demon Sword, Xi He Sword, and Wangshu Sword in the game Legend of Sword and Fairy, and the Ancestral Sword and Dragon Abyss Seven Evil Swords in the game Ancient Swords and Legends and the movie Legend of Shushan The Heavenly Fencing Sword and the Thunder Flame Sword, the Heavenly Crystal Sword, the Nine Heavens Thunder Sword and the Tiger Soul Sword in the Hong Kong Man Shen Wen Xuan Qi and the Gaiden, the Counter War Sword and Moment and Eternal Calamity in the Hong Kong Man Mountain and Sea Counter War, the Ruyi Golden Cudgel in Journey to the West, and the Four Swords of Killing Immortals in the List of Gods. The characteristics and principles of nuclear weapons, as well as the Devouring Starry Divine Weapon and Star Tower, Tribulation Armor, and Wu Yuyi to refine your own Ruyi Divine Weapon that is consistent with your own mind (for example, called Wanxiang, Wuji, Tianxuan, Yuanshi, or Ultimate)! ! It is recommended that the protagonist obtain Binghuo Yanglei (Five Elements to Fire God Thunder---Binghuo Yanglei, also known as the Purple Thunder of Life and Death. Binghuo is majestic in the world, illuminating Liuhe. In the sky it is the sun and electricity, and on the ground it is furnace and ye, called Yanghuo. The Binghuo God Thunder burns the sun, so it is fierce, burning everything in the world, and burning the sky. The power of boiling the sea is extremely destructive. This thunder is accompanied by the most powerful fire in the world. Once the thunder fire comes out, everything will not appear. This thunder can be born in the underground magma, or it can originate from the nine-day scorching sun. They are all produced by the ancient divine fire burning for countless years, such as the Suzaku Stone that has been burned by the Six Ding True Fire for countless years, and the Seven Stars that have been forged by the Ziwei Heavenly Fire for countless years. Yuan Jing, etc.), Gengjin Tribulation Thunder (Five Elements to the Golden God Thunder--Gengjin Tribulation Thunder, Gengjin is evil, the most vigorous, Gengjin Tribulation Thunder is the most powerful thunder in the world, blunt and strong, this thunder is very powerful, the most powerful in the five elements of thunder technique, it can overcome all formation restrictions in the world, once the Tribulation Thunder comes out, it is extremely destructive, and it is mostly born from pure Yang things , such as obsidian, ghost fairy cinnabar, etc.), Wu Tu Ming Lei (five elements to the earth god thunder---Wu Tu Ming Lei, also known as Chaos Magic Thunder), Wu Tu inherits the chaotic energy of heaven and earth, and holds a trace of the original energy that created the world. The five elements of divine thunder are the most defensive. These thunders are mostly born in places where the earth is solid, such as the ghost soil of the underworld, the crystals of the lunar sky, etc.), Guishui Yin Lei (the five elements to the water divine thunder---Guishui Yin Lei, also known as the Dutian Ming Lei. Guishui is generated by gathering the yin and yang energy of the sky stems for a week. It has the power of moistening the earth and nourishing all things. It also has the virtue of flooding the ocean. , The power of cold air to kill people, this thunder is born in Gui water, there is infinite power of yin and yang, it can spread the vitality to nourish all things, and it can also overflow the death energy to destroy the sky and destroy the world. The five elements of thunder are the most flexible. Because they gather the two qi of yin and yang, they can harmonize the elements and defeat all the poisons in the world. This thunder is born from many things of Gui water, such as innate dark water, glazed water, etc.) , The evil-dispelling divine thunder (the Five Elements to Wood God Thunder---the evil-dispelling divine thunder, also known as the evil-killing divine thunder, Yimu Zhenglei, Yimu is Riqi, Tiande, Xiangyang is the most prosperous, Yimu Zhenglei contains the most righteous and yang-sharp energy in the world, this thunder is born according to vegetation, its energy is endless, the Five Elements Thunder is the most restored, because it relies on vegetation to absorb the pure energy of Yang Qi, so it can conquer all the demonic energy and ghost energy in the world. Once the righteous thunder comes out, the ghosts and demons will be dispersed. Most of them are born from the long grass and trees, such as the three sacred trees Golden Thunder Bamboo, the ancient sacred tree Fusang Divine Tree, etc.) And combine the five thunders into one and the five elements to generate the Five Thunder Dharma. In the future, you can devour the thunder and lightning of the universe, heaven and earth, and develop the divine thunder of the sky, the purple sky divine thunder, etc.! Recommended protagonist: Gravity in "The Immortal Rebellion": a low-level spell that Wang Lin learned during his Qi Condensation period, which can control objects through the air. Secrets to Huangquan's Ascension: High-level exercises, divided into nine levels. Taking the extremely yin place as a training ground, he will be in a near-death state during practice, and the extremely yin spiritual power he cultivates is infinitely powerful. The cold elixir produced through later cultivation will be of great help to the success rate of elixir formation. The important technique in Wang Lin's early days was also an opportunity for him to reach the extreme level. Taught by Situ Nan. The Ancient God Technique: A technique known to every ancient god since his birth. He swallows the energy of the universe, and uses the power of the universe, such as the pressure of the sea and the earth, storms, hail, lava, magma, lightning, and tsunamis to hone himself to cultivate his physical and spiritual will and vitality. The physical body, spirit, and vitality can be continuously strengthened, reorganized, sublimated, and even the physical body can be sanctified to prove the Tao. Nirvana Finger: The main magical power during Wang Lin's transformation from infant to Yangshi. Situ Nan learned it from a defective and low-grade magic. It can absorb vitality. Wang Lin once used it to restore the vitality taken away by the ancestor of the Xiang family. Demon Transformation Finger: The main magical power during Wang Linying's transformation into Yangshi. Situ Nan learned it from a low-grade immortal technique. It can transform the magical power into demonic energy, or even into demonic energy. Huangquan refers to: The main magical power during Wang Linying's transformation into Yangshi. Situ Nan realized it from a defective low-grade magic. It is infinitely close to low-grade magic. It is powerful. It is even more powerful when it is exerted through Taoist Huangquan. Great Teleportation Forbidden Technique: Utilize the momentary difference produced during the movement to seal oneself with the forbidden method. At this moment, the teleportation technique is used continuously, and the seal is released when a strange force is generated. This causes the distance moved to change countless times. Nine Revolutions of Immortal Refining Technique: A technique of using immortal power, which causes the immortal power in the body to slowly rotate in a strange way, forming a spiral shape in the body and then released, which is equivalent to the power of a golden immortal. A total of nine rotations can be produced. The longer it is contained in the body, the greater the power after leaving the body. The Immortal Killing Technique: Learned from the clone of Tianyunzi. The Immortal Killing Technique refines vitality and transforms it into a brand. If the brand is not destroyed, the vitality will never be destroyed. Wang Lin discovered that Tian Yunzi had evil intentions, and was forced out of the body through the cracks in the Demon Spirit Land to merge with the First Immortal Guard. Later, Tianyunzi was injured in Qinglin Cave, the land of demon spirits, and he was able to kill the source and practice this magical power again. Taohua Huangquan: The substantial product of Wang Lin's Taoism, which is the ultimate in Taoism and can form an independent reincarnation. One of Wang Lin's main magical powers after he aspired to the throne. Lei Yuan Shu: The remnant of Lei Xia's Immortal Technique, which extracts the energy of heaven and earth from the thunder into the body, thus condensing one's own energy more quickly. This technique is extremely overbearing, and the thunder from the sky directly penetrates into the body. The monks who are taking the first step of cultivating the Taoism cannot bear it and cannot practice it. Wang Lin obtained it after killing the messenger from the Thunder Immortal Palace. The Immobilization Technique: An immortal technique passed down from the Immortal Gang Continent. The Immortal Emperor Qinglin was left by the female Qingshuang and was accidentally obtained by Wang Lin. As its name suggests, this magical power can immobilize people, but the immobilized person can still think. In fact, it was the immortal magic that the Feng Zun brought from the Immortal Gang Continent. People who know this trick include Immortal Emperor Qinglin, Immortal Emperor Qinglin's daughter Qingshuang, Feng Zun, Shui Daozi, and Wang Lin. This technique is extremely powerful and can fix the body, the soul, the immortals, the origin, the movement of heaven and earth, the flow of stars and rivers, time and space, and changes in space. This technique is related to the rules of heaven and earth, and is one of the few magical powers that belongs to the fourth step. Zhan Luo Jue: The previous generation's Immortal Sword of Rain is rich. The inherited sword skills contained in it can cut through space and break rules. It is a sword style that breaks the rules and is astonishingly powerful. Eighteen Forbidden Plum Blossoms: A mysterious forbidden art derived from the ancient mysterious forbidden art of breaking the forbidden art. It has unpredictable functions, and few people can master it. After the forbidden arrangement operates on its own, it looks like a blooming plum blossom, hence its name. Year Forbidden: One of the four ancient forbidden arts, it is mysterious and unpredictable. It absorbs the power of the rules of time. The longer it goes, the more powerful it becomes. Life and Death Ban: One of the four ancient forbidden arts, it uses the vitality of all spirits to turn into a death ban, life and death, life and death, life and death, unpredictable. Ancient Soul Binding: One of the four ancient forbidden arts, it can bind the souls and bodies of ferocious beasts. Third Eye: Obtained from the exchange with the ancestor of a family in the Luotian Star Territory, it contains the original power. Later, it absorbed the original power in the third level of the Immortal Contest, "The Pass of Heaven", and evolved again. Breaking the Forbidden Technique: One of the Four Forbidden Techniques in Ancient Times. It is the culmination of all forbidden techniques in ancient times and possesses the unpredictable power of ghosts and gods. This ban must be combined with the inheritance of the Heart Taboo Compass and the Destruction of the Heart Taboo in order to fully exert the power of the Destruction Taboo. After the great achievement of breaking the ban, it can be used to seal all things in the world, from immortals and demons to ordinary beasts. Suzaku Nine Mysterious Transformations: Learn the first transformation of the Nine Mysterious Transformations in the Four Saints Sect. Shrinking the Earth into an Inch: The Second Step: The monk senses the heaven and the earth, which is one of the four magical powers that can be understood by oneself. Wang Lin's magical ability to travel between planets has been used by Wang Lin many times to stay away from powerful enemies. It can be used after enlightenment in the cave world. In Xiangang Continent, if you want to shrink the land to an inch, you must reach the level of Jinzun before you can use it. Call the wind: call for wind and rain, scatter beans to form soldiers, crack the earth and collapse mountains, and the moon will be clear. One of Immortal Emperor Bai Fan's Six Paths and Three Level Techniques, learned from the Collection Pavilion of Thunder Immortal Realm. Using the Immortal Essence, it transforms into a huge black dragon, a hurricane. The dragon spits out the evil wind from its mouth, which can extinguish the fire of all spirits. Its power is astonishing. Calling Rain: The second of the six three-level techniques of Immortal Emperor Bai Fan, taught by Immortal Lord Qing Shui. It has the inheritance meaning of the technique of calling the wind. One drop will lead to death, ten drops of yin will die, a hundred drops of yang will die, and if there are more than a thousand drops, the nirvana will have to be retreated. This technique can further evolve into the Rule of Ice, which is extremely powerful. The world of calling wind and rain: calling wind to cover the sky, calling rain to cover the earth, forming a world of its own. The Immortal Body of the Ancient Clan: Created by Wang Lin himself, it has super recovery ability. One step to the sky: Wang Lin realized the fourth step to the sky and defeated the Great Heavenly Lord of the ancient way with this technique. The Supreme Technique of Devouring Spirits and Devouring Body: The magical power created by Qing Shui is only granted to Wang Lin. It can suck away the soul, soul, all vitality and vitality of the recipient. The ancient divine technique of destroying life and summoning spirits: exchanging life for power, was once used in the battle with Shuidaozi. Throwing beans into soldiers: Immortal Emperor Bai Fan's third of the Six Paths of Three Techniques cuts off the rules of reincarnation between heaven and earth, extracts the souls of those he personally kills from nothingness, and imprisons them in a space without entering reincarnation. This soul is controlled by the person who casts the spell to attack the enemy, and its magical power is similar to that before death. The power of this technique varies from person to person. Landslide: The fourth of Immortal Emperor Bai Fan's Six Paths Triple Technique, which means the collapse of the mountains of heaven and earth. Immortal power is integrated into divine thoughts. The collapse of mountains is also the collapse of divine thoughts. It can materialize huge volcanic peaks out of thin air, which is very powerful. Can Ye: Wang Lin's first self-created magical power contains the original rules. He first cultivated it when he realized the beginning of Shuiling Star. He used the Sun of the Prime to tear apart the night, which was extremely powerful. During the battle in the Land of the Ancient Gods, he used this technique to kill Kongzi and severely injure Tianyunzi. After possessing the cultivation level of Kongjie, he transformed into Xinjutsu, and became more powerful after realizing the origin of Taichu. Liuyue: Wang Lin's second self-created magical power contains the rules of time. It is understood at the gate of the ancient fairyland of the Wind Fairyland and can reverse time. Wang Lin even used this technique to send his murderous body, Lu Mo, back to the past to find a way to resurrect Li Muwan. Dream Dao: With the help of the Lord of the Sealed Realm, he entered the Tao realm and realized his first Tao technique. Once he entered the Dream Dao, he could detect reincarnation and could be used for enslavement. He used this technique to kill the shadow during the three-step calamity and passed the self-tribulation. He used this technique to know Tianyunzi's 99 reincarnations and finally found the location of his original roulette wheel, destroying Tianyun. Hou Lumo used dream magic to deduce the method of saving Li Muwan, causing the Immortal Ancestor, the Ancient Ancestor, and the Daogu Guoshi (Qi Ling) to all think that the Immortal Gang Continent was Wang Lin's dream. Taoist fusion: Taoism of Taoist Master Lanmeng, all magic weapons, magical powers, rules, artistic conceptions, and everything in the world can be integrated. When he was in the Lansi Clan Star Territory, it was taught by Taoist Master Lanmeng. Wang Lin used it to combine the three major immortal arts of calling the wind, calling for rain, and scattering beans into soldiers and the magic weapon sealing immortal seal, making it a world of its own, with incense inside, but Wang Lin had not refined the power of the incense. Light and Shadow Shield: Taoist Master Lan Meng has the magical power to melt all the light around himself into himself, turning it into a light shield, blocking and reflecting enemy attacks. Heaven-turning Seal: Lanmeng Dao Zun's magical power, taking it means turning the sky into the earth. The earth became the sky, which was the strongest seal in the world. Yu Ling Seal: This is originally an immortal art in the immortal world. Under the opportunity of the Yunhe Star Region, I relied on my own understanding and acquisition of the incomplete art to obtain the incomplete art. Later, he designed in the Nether Beast to obtain the real Immortal Magic Service Spirit Seal from the "madman" Lian Daofei. Its origin is the Dao Demon Mahamudra of the Dao Demon Sect in Xiangang Continent. Colorful Taoist Spear: Immortal magic, designed in the Nether Beast and obtained from "madman" Lian Daofei. There are three seven-color changes. The seven-color gun condenses from seven-color light into black, which is the first change; the black light turns to white, which is the second change; the white changes again, and becomes gray, which is the third change. Burning the Ancient Umbrella: Immortal magic, the second-generation Suzaku once said when teaching Wang Lin the "Burning Ancient Umbrella" that "this technique was secretly learned by the ancient immortals." Hou Wanglin learned the more authentic Burning World Ancient Umbrella from "Madman". This technique originated from the Immortal Clan Zhongzhou in the Xiangang Continent. The cloudy moon has a clear sky: one of the six immortal arts for which Bai Fan, the Immortal Emperor of Thunder, became famous. The first form of the Yin Yue Sect's magical power, the second form in the orthodox tradition is Yin Yue No Rain, and the third form is Yin Yue Cold Wind. Cause and Effect Seal: The fourth magical power created by Wang Lin when he achieved the origin of cause and effect in Transformation. Seal of Life and Death: The fifth magical power created by Wang Lin after he achieved the origin of life and death in Transformation. Seal of True and False: The sixth magical power created by Wang Lin after he achieved the origin of true and false in Transformation Mortal. Daogu Immortal Body: In his dream, Wang Lin used the super-recovery ability of the ancient clan in the Daogu inheritance and the seventh magical power he realized through the Immortal Immortal Body. That is, the recovery ability exceeds the power of collapse and destruction and keeps the body indestructible. With the power of ancient times, only one finger can remain immortal for the time being, so it is also called "the ancient immortal finger". Baji Dao: The Immortal Ancestor Lianyun Jue was obtained from Tian Ni, and the Ji Shui Dao, Ji Jin Dao, Ji Mu Dao, Ji Mu Dao, Ji Fire Tao, Ji Di Dao, Ji Tian Dao, and Ji Ming Tao are the Baji Tao that belong exclusively to Wang Lin. The first five paths of the Eightfold Path are based on the five elements. The last three paths vary from person to person. Among them, the sixth and seventh paths are opposite to each other, and the last one is the path of one's own destiny. He was highly praised by Wang Lin in "Three Inches of the World" as one of the immortal inheritances, capable of countless achievements, and was later passed on to the protagonist Wang Baole to achieve his own path.
When did the Dong family become the three major immortal cultivating families in Huang Maple Valley?
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It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Wen Madam, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Hanzhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Gongsun Xing, Shidie Fairy, Xiao Cui'er, Nie Ying, Yan Ruyan, Bingpo Fairy, Song Yu, Tianlan Saint Lin Yinping, Master Le, Feng Bing, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Holy Ancestor Yuancha, Holy Ancestor Baohua, Dai'er, Fairy Black Phoenix, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Leer, Bai Suyuan, Mo Caihuan, Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, Mohist Family Four ladies (Yan, Li, Liu, Wang)
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When you take in a daughter, your feelings are also taken care of in one go. Oops, it's so sad to watch. After a few years, the relationship became deeper and deeper, and the conversation was very pleasant. You didn't tell me any details? The protagonist's teasing and personality are not written out. Emotional growth depends entirely on one mouth. The writing is too soft and submissive. After reading dozens of chapters, the reader has no expression on his face and no mood swings at all. It's too idealistic, and the relationship with Dong Xuan'er is really awkward. Directly set as a childhood sweetheart, this is no longer Dong Xuan'er's temperament, it is completely the feeling of a well-behaved neighbor. . . Oops! Accepted There is no side description
Can you take a bowl and kill Han Li directly? Everyone knows that the wife holding a bowl is Han Li's reincarnated wife. If you mess with his wife, you might as well kill it with Han Li and still get a little golden finger.
The dual spiritual roots of fire and wood, it's okay if you don't practice the Qingyun Sword Technique. Later, you will refine the Qingyun Sword. The protagonist also practices strange skills. He has no background or strength in the human world. He doesn't practice the top-notch Qingyun Sword Technique. The author has to do it all, and he still doesn't understand the bunch of poisonous points 🙂 made.
Has the cultivation level improved too quickly? It feels like the protagonist has not practiced Taoism for fifty years and is in the late stage of pill formation 🙂
Mortal fan protagonists all like to do robberies. No matter how big the cheats are, they have no bottom line.
Mortal settings, chaos is supreme, and the sky bottle absorbs the law of chaos and escapes from the bottle. In ancient times or today, it is also for the law of chaos to break away from the shackles of heaven and control the fairy world.
The map data problem is quite big. The distance of thousands of miles is too small for cultivating immortals, and the spiritual stone is also unreasonable. The leader of a Danjie sect has an asset of 100,000 spiritual stones, which is comparable to the family property in the early stage of Yuanying. How can he be so poor? In addition, the awesome skills of Pig's Foot Cultivation are not shown, and the magic weapons are described too little in terms of various instant kills. After reading them, I don't feel very awesome In fact, it is difficult to show the awesome feeling of original magic weapons and skills without the foundation of skills, unlike the original magic weapons, ancient treasures and spiritual treasures that everyone knows Therefore, when writing fan fiction, be less original. Original writing requires a lot of specific expressions to express the awesomeness. For example, Qingyuan Sword Technique, one is a third-turn Heavy Yuan Kung Fu with many times the same level of mana, Nascent Soul Hou and a leapfrog sword formation Your technique is said to be a spiritual world technique, but there is no description of the relevant mana fighting techniques and other characteristics, which is very empty In general, this book only contains one highlight, and the image of the protagonist has not been established. The overall article is assembly line after all, passing the plot. Shuhuang barely took a look at it, but it's not considered a high-quality product. It's a waste of time to read it
Aren't the three major families the Chen family, the Lei family and the Nie family?
You're so bad. Han Li is already in the middle stage, but you are still in the early stage.
I saw that the protagonist in Chapter 56 looks like Linghu Chong. Being a monk of the Dong family has the advantage that the family does not get any glory. He knew that the servant was from the Yuling Sect, and he did not tell the family sect that he was a stronghold of the Yuling Sect. All the monks who went there were dead except for the three elders. The summary is that I deserve the benefits of the family sect, and it is impossible to take risks. There will be a demonic invasion in a few years, so I might just run away, not wanting to take any responsibility at all.
The most important thing is not to lick Han Li. You have traveled here. If you don't have a golden finger to cultivate immortality, you should grab the small green bottle. There are some that are not afraid of reincarnation. Then you might as well just be a mortal. The original work of "The Legend of Immortality" itself lacks resources. If you don't have a golden finger, you are better than Han Li. That's not bullshit. It seems like a mortal's scientific cultivation of immortality. There is no golden finger, some bullshit. Anyway, some novels like to lick Han Li and send women to Han Li. Damn, what kind of licking dog is it? You are better at licking a woman than a man. I think your man will be dead if you stay by his side. What good is it for you to lick him? It is not like the immortal next door. If you lick him, you can still be a king. Even if you die, you can be resurrected.
I feel that what the author wrote in the first few chapters was not liked by most people, and he probably directly dissuaded a large number of people.
There is no problem with the Dong family. There is no Dong family in the comment area. It is a misunderstanding. When the Foundation Establishment Pill was earned, the headmaster Zhong only said that Dong Xuan'er was the only relative of Master Hongfu in the world. Around Chapter 240, it was mentioned that Dong Xuan'er was her brother's daughter and the reputation of the Dong family was also mentioned. So this does not mean that there are no other Dong families. I have read Chapter 26 so far. It's okay, so-so. The protagonist trusts women more and is a bit naive. Watch it carefully.
In fact, after reading the novel for a long time, it feels very divorced from reality. Apart from lust, the protagonist doesn't have many other emotions, and he doesn't feel depressed, confused, or angry. These are very strange as if he was born a saint.
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Find the original process and go through it again. To practice the fire-based skills, you still need to refine the Qingyun Bee Bamboo Sword.