Douluo: Talent Entry, Awaken Seraph at the Beginning

What are you writing about? It's bullshit. Qian Renxue is 5 or 6 years older than Hu Liena. How is it possible to awaken the martial spirit together, and Qian Renxue's identity is kept secret. Shouldn't Yu Qiandaoliu secretly awaken in the Pension Hall? The awakening of the martial soul is written like the awakening of the Holy Soul Village. What is the scene of the awakening of a god-given martial spirit? I suggest you read the original work. If the timeline is changed randomly, sooner or later it will be thrown into the street.

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I feel like the characters are not very intelligent and the settings are messed up. Qian Renxue can be the same age as Hu Liena, but Hu Liena will not be able to become a saint in a short time. An eight-year-old boy is going to do a difficult task, right? He deliberately gives him a weakness. How can he be a leader? The subject matter is good, but I can't bear to write randomly.

He was born with level 30 soul power, but only reached level 37 in 2 years. He also absorbed 3 soul rings, each of which gave about 1-2 levels of soul power. He has not practiced at all in the past two years? This is not the way to level up. You either don't play any big tricks, or you have some common sense. What do other people think if you do it this way? Did someone else practice at level 99 for nothing?

There are too many private settings, and you dare to change the clear settings in the original work, so why write a fanfic?

Every normal Douluo fanfic is written by MD. They all say that the third young master who lost his wife is bad at writing. As a result, the fanfic is even worse. The writing is not good, and the logic is even worse.

This seedling is about to test the waters, and the only indicator of staying alive during the same period is to read it. What is pursuit reading? The follow-up reading is the support and love of all your babies (the last page of the last chapter every day, if you turn it again, there will be a number from 1 to 100) Please pour some water on it, the child is really unhappy. As long as you can test the water and recommend it, I will come back immediately to add more to reward you! If you like reading books, please do so after the new book period is over. Thank you all, woohooo(╥╥)o Oh, by the way, the update time will be changed to 8:08 (20:08) every night in the future. Babys, don't let waiting become a regret.

At that time, it was Tang Hao's father who made the decision in the Haotian Sect. He died because something happened, okay~_~

In the remote and peaceful Damai Village, six-year-old Dog Yaer is undergoing an awakening ceremony that changes his destiny. When the mysterious crystal ball touched his palm, soft golden light bloomed in an instant, "Wheat Wuhun, innate soul power level nine!" The excited voice of the deacon of Wuhun Hall broke the peace of the village. Dog Ya'er looked at the plump wheat-ear martial spirit emerging in his hand, his eyes full of confusion and expectation. Although he was born in a rural area, this rare innate soul power made Xiaohu the hope of the whole village. He knew very well that he was about to embark on an unknown path as a soul master, to explore the mysteries of martial arts, and to face the ups and downs of the soul master world.

The introduction is written like shit. Qian Renxue is nine years older than Tang San. You said that you started with a collapse of heaven. Tang San's survival to the end is partly luck and partly the support of God Shura. In the early stage, Tang Hao was a bodyguard, in the middle stage, Xiao Wu sacrificed. In the later stage, the two sacrificed divine beasts, and Bo Saixi sacrificed for free.

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I would like to ask if Qian Renxue was actually randomly checked (inserted?) At the beginning?

After reading three chapters, I can only say one thing: the protagonist's IQ is relatively weak.

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Let's start with a big one. Innate level 30. After two years, I absorbed a soul ring and reached level 37? Do you want to read what is written? Just read it if you can.

When will I start the latest novel?

Qian Renxue and Hu Liena awakened martial arts souls together with the protagonist... Second Creation... You might as well make a big change and the protagonist awakens together with Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Qian Renxue Qiandaoliu, Tang Yuehua, and Bo Saisi

Brother, if you write about the angel spirit, you should also read it. Well, that is called the Bible. Seraph spirit is a big eye with six wings, okay?