Eternal Fetus Transformation Sutra

It's well written, but updates are very slow. Alas, I don't know what year and month it will be until the end.

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The writing is very good, but there are too few updates. In fact, the writing on Birth Sect is average, but the amount of updates is really large.

It actually looks okay, with no big flaws, but the pace is a bit slow. Looking through the opinions in the comment area, some said that there was too much emphasis on the supporting characters, and the other said that cheats had no sense of existence. These two points are actually the same problem, that is, it is not cool enough. In fact, it makes sense. The author's writing style is not very attractive. If it is not exciting enough, it will not be attractive enough to readers. If you can read it, it's not bad. It can be seen that the author really wants to write a good story. But this is an online text, and if you follow it up, you can only read a few thousand words a day. The story is still slow, so it is normal for readers to have opinions. The personal rating is about 77 points. The advantage is that there are not many disadvantages. The disadvantage is that the story is too slow.

When Ma Liu first met, Lu Dabao made it clear that he was a troublemaker. If he expected to help him, would he also ask for help if anything happened? Pure white-eyed wolf, there is no need to invest, just stay away. I helped him so much, but in the end I wanted to kill the protagonist, but in the end he was killed by the protagonist. I don't know what the protagonist was trying to do.

There is a man named Lu Dabao in the book, and it is suspected that the author's father is also named Lu Dabao.

In fact, what I want to see more is reincarnation. The first part is too long. Moreover, the way you write about the fox clan is too strange. It is no different from the human clan. Moreover, you transformed directly not long after you were born. Then you are a monster, so you are just trying to trick people. If you are so eager to become a human, why are you writing about a demon? To be honest, I feel that writing about a group of little foxes without transforming is more beautiful and novel. You are too strong in the smell of sheep-headed dog meat.

If the Heavenly Emperor of the Upper Realm mentioned in your introduction is the Jade Emperor, the Jade Emperor has experienced a total of 1,750 kalpas, each lasting 129,600 years, and the total cultivation time is about 226.8 Million years.

Author, I would like to ask, is Lu Dabao the protagonist's father? Are you so concerned about him? The protagonist is worried about reincarnation. That is to say, the protagonist will be reincarnated as Lu Dabao's grandson in the future. Should he start fulfilling his filial piety now? I had feelings after reading Chapter 13.

From the introduction, reincarnation is the key point, but until now, I have been describing the flying camp and the dog dog in detail, and I feel like I can't distinguish the priorities.

Revealing the biggest secret of his own reincarnation to a fish that must be extraordinary, I don't think there's anything interesting about it. The biggest attraction is the reincarnation into a different species. However, the reincarnation into a fox gave me a very bad impression! What everyone wants to see is that there are too many rules for being a human being, but alien species can grow wildly. As a result, this reincarnation is not even in the shape of a fox, and it is also a slave to others. It is no different from the previous life. It is just that it has a pair of ears and practices fox skills. It's even better to write about being reincarnated and being caught as a demon pet, so at least the look and feel will be novel.

It's too toxic. The author's father's name is Lu Dabao. He protects her from the beginning to Chapter 12. The characters are poorly created. Is the protagonist some kind of Madonna?

Chapter 12: Dissuade! Extremely poisonous, the Holy Mother has given her wisdom. A brain C has nothing to do with the protagonist Mao. The protagonist treats him like his father and does everything for him! Shacha

The reincarnation stream is about reincarnation in a small place. Time has not changed much, and even the name of the reincarnation has not changed. Is it necessary to be so lazy when writing a novel?

I came in after reading the introduction and read more than 20 chapters. The protagonist has a father and a mother, a licking dog named Lu and a green tea who can't see himself clearly. These two people have nothing to do with the protagonist, let alone a blood relationship. No need for this plug-in

Your mother, your surname is Lu, your father. Damn it, you dote on him so much?

The writing is good, the plot design and transition ability are also good, the writing control is also good, and the price ratio setting is logical, but there is one thing. The protagonist's income share collapsed. Maybe it is the author's resentment at being exploited and squeezed by the company? That led to excessive force here? The spiritual land belongs to the owner, and the seeds, spiritual stones, and spiritual farmer inheritance are all provided by the owner. The average yield per acre is more than 100 kilograms, and the owner harvests 70%. No problem. The problem is that the owner has to spend money! ? After becoming an official spiritual farmer, the protagonist's yield per mu is more than 200 kilograms, but the owner's family only harvests 30% of it, and they have to spend money to harvest it... The harvest is even less than before. Is he running a charity?

A man turns into a fox, a fox turns into a python, and he goes around and around between several foundation-building families, unable to move?

You're done embarrassing me, you're trying to be smart, that Lin Yue is done disgusting me

Stop writing your crappy thank you line. Why don't you read what you wrote?

I can see where the problem lies. At the beginning, the author wrote a bad guy with no talent, no brains, and no qualifications. The protagonist did not help him too much, but wasted too much pen and ink on him, trying to shape him into a ruthless person like Li Feiyu, alone. He managed to find a way through his hard work (similar to the desperate efforts of ordinary people without golden fingers), but it was obviously a failure and untenable at all. Because his brain was too poor, he was ugly, and his connection with the protagonist was far from deep, which made readers unable to stand it 🙂

The writing of the protagonist is too slow. The author can take a look. The protagonist written by the author of My Simulation Road to Immortality is also like Baisheng Qi, but the way the protagonist treats the supporting characters is much more vigorous and resolute. After all, sooner or later the protagonist will be reincarnated to focus more on himself, or should be said to be more selfish.

When I read Chapter 10, this and that are supporting characters, and this is the protagonist's father. It is estimated that the big treasure will take off later... With such a character and temper, the protagonist will probably have to drag him to take off.

Either a few female protagonists, a few tool men, or even a few enemies who have been chasing each other will be enough to increase the contradictions in the plot, advance the main line, and let us know the goals of this week, the implementation of the goals, and the results of the execution. Even if we live fast and die fast, it is more fun to be a pigeon-type novel. Or just run around, not afraid of death, and read it as a road article. Now, I am writing about a fight between a few little shrimps. The protagonist lies passively throughout the whole process. The map does not open a few places, and the background cannot be explained clearly. Then I hold it in for a long time, make a breakthrough, and then die and reincarnate. Everything is water. What I write now is purely stubborn. There are no particularly attractive characters, no particularly interesting plot, and there is not even a bit of fun. It is not exciting at all 😒

I don't understand why the protagonist has been protecting this guy, either to comfort or to advise. This guy also implicated the protagonist because of his astringency. The protagonist has no complaints. Instead, he wants to comfort him when he goes back. Do you comfort you? Were you so filial when I comforted you? With a golden finger, instead of rewriting the growth of Gold Finger or the protagonist's own growth, I keep writing this bullshit plot. What do you write? Have you ever written something like this?

It's getting ridiculous. The demon believers who are in the realm of transformation into gods are separated by a realm of Yuanying. To catch the protagonist of the golden elixir, do they still need to set up an array?

Is this a eunuch? ? ? ? Nmd keep writing

The author of Immortal Immortal? Stop being a eunuch, meow.

He died from the poison, and anyone who can accept Lu Dabao is invincible

Reincarnation and immortality writing, compared with conventional reincarnations, you can reincarnate into demons. Reincarnation has a global lifespan limit. The setting is to consume lifespan and choose the reincarnation race independently. The stronger the one, the more consumption The first life is human, Gou Daoliu writing method, farming + learning skills + mixed cultivating immortal family The second life is demon fox, monster wilderness survival writing method, relying on the accumulation of previous lives and relying on learned skills to develop in the demon clan The story is well written, but there is a problem with the beginning. The living environments of humans and monsters are different. The writing and style are also different. But novels need to be as unified in style as possible Human beings are too comfortable, and it is easy to practice and learn, so they are naturally suitable for Gou Daoliu. Monsters, on the other hand, fight among themselves and naturally want to survive in the wilderness, prove the Tao with force, and develop the magical powers of the demon clan. Therefore, the starting point of human beings is still too high at the beginning. It is still a weak race. The upper limit is low + the death is fast, which is naturally suitable for the reincarnation stream. When writing about human beings, they should also live in mountains and forests and avoid contact with other human beings. In terms of combat power, one focuses on the supernatural powers of the demon clan and follows the path of demon gods Summary, reincarnation flow, but the living environments of humans and demons are so different that it is difficult to unify the writing style. At the same time, the human race is still too supermodel at the beginning, and it is not in line with the coolness of all races in the world. And the global lifespan limit is too severe In the end, the author couldn't control it, and gg became a eunuch