Douluo Jueshi: My Body Was Pierced by the Snow Emperor

Make sure you don't write it wrong, don't make it look ugly. What kind of body should I change? Isn't it okay to control two bodies?

It makes me sick to death, so I won't watch anymore

It makes me so uncomfortable that I won't watch anymore.

If this book has a single female protagonist, it depends on personal taste, but if it has multiple female protagonists, it will be very toxic. From the perspective of the protagonist, md Tianbeng starts, from being a god king to being a 700,000-year-old soul beast. Okay, I admit it, I'll just find my place later. It's really not possible to survive until Dou San and then become a god. Later you told me that you wanted me to be your harem and sacrifice my life to you, but you planned to take it away if you didn't give it to me. ??? You took my life and golden finger and wanted my life. Am I, a time traveler, shameless? The worst case scenario is that we will all explode together.

Emmm, I can't understand it, the toxin is unknown, I'm checking to see if it's in it💩, I feel like you might as well just write about one soul and two bodies.

When I saw the back part, I felt like my brain had been hit by a strong alkali, which is extremely poisonous. I originally thought it was a dual protagonist, but later it turned out that the system was playing tricks on the Snow Emperor. Then why did you spend so much time writing about the Snow Emperor? The Snow Emperor is written like a monkey in heat, stupid and lustful, he might as well have one soul with two bodies and one body with two souls. My evaluation is based on the defense.

Such an authentic female channel, with the same atmosphere. The idea is a little bit. I can't keep up with my imagination in the later stage, and the character portrayal is poor. Go back to Tomato as soon as possible, don't go to the starting point to make money 🤐

Can the male protagonist be given more content? ? I've seen enough Shrek fandom, I want to see the male protagonist use the Snow Emperor's body to kill everyone 🙂🙂 By the way, will you change it back? ? Hope it is a permanent swap😍😍

In Douluo fanfics, most of the protagonists have worse character than Tang San. In the original novel, Tang San is not a treacherous or evil person. At most, he is both good and evil and then becomes a bit double-standard. As for the protagonists of the fanfics, they have done countless bad things. And ha, when they start a harem like crazy, the women become idiots and love-minded. They all look like the protagonists of the fanfics.

The subject matter is quite interesting. Although the introduction is a bit abstract, it's okay. I had planned to start reading it, but then I clicked on the book review and said: 🙂 Is the plot so abstract? The Snow Emperor in the original work should not have this kind of character😅

When I saw the Ice Emperor in Chapter 54, it was special food but there was dirt in it. Especially when it was written from the perspective of the Snow Emperor, it was very uncomfortable. I felt that the Snow Emperor changed too quickly and I accepted it. The Snow Emperor was messing around with the protagonist's body. I watched it from the perspective of the protagonist. It was extremely uncomfortable to watch it. What kind of old maid turned into a shy and innocent little virgin? There is also a system problem. The system is still in the protagonist's body, directly protecting the Snow Emperor from being affected by the power of the God King. It sends tasks and rewards and directly instills skills. The protagonist is still in the far north. After practicing hard, he also said that the protagonist's body is being targeted by the God King (how come the system was not triggered at that time? When the Snow Emperor comes, the system protects the Snow Emperor from being harmed), thinking that the Snow Emperor is the protagonist of Long Aotian. Looking at the introduction, you exchanged your body in order to adapt to the Douluo Law, but there is a system where you can completely change the passive exchange into an active exchange. For example: when the protagonist travels through time, the system pops up and directly explains the reason, and then says that in order to adapt to the Douluo laws, a local Douluo person is required to transform the body, and then a body swap interface appears to choose from, Su Tong little lolita (with the Snow Maiden martial spirit), Miss Meng Hongchen, Ling Luochen's cold senior schoolmate, and Snow Emperor. Finally, choose Snow Emperor to change the passive exchange to the protagonist having the initiative. You can even go one step further and write that the protagonist can issue tasks to the Snow Emperor, turning the protagonist into a role like the mastermind behind the scenes. Instead of using the protagonist's body to mess with interpersonal relationships like now, Snow Emperor also wants to kill the protagonist cleanly and make the protagonist sacrifice to drain the protagonist's value. Is the author unable to distinguish the big and small kings? Was it written this way on purpose? Make the reader uncomfortable to watch. Also, the Snow Emperor has reached the far north, why didn't he capture her? What are he worried about, is he afraid of the Tang Shenwang? Let's not talk about Tang San being able to keep an eye on the protagonist at all times? There is still one day in the world of gods. One year underground, Tang San held a meeting in the God Realm, and the protagonist had already passed a few weeks. And even if Tang San knew about it, he couldn't send Poseidon to the far north. At most, he would send Niu Tian, ​​Titan, and Poseidon High Priest to the far north to find an opportunity to take the protagonist's body away. And neither the Snow Emperor nor the protagonist would reveal the secret of body swapping to Poseidon Tang San. There is also the Snow Emperor who goes to see the Ice Emperor. The protagonist not only does not stop him, but also helps the Snow Emperor to cover up and go to see the Ice Emperor. He is just like xx helping push the butt, right? Why does the body have the aura of the Snow Emperor? Later, there will be a showdown between the Snow Emperor and the Ice Emperor, and then Xiaobai and the Titan Snow Demon King will join forces to see if they are going to rebel, and there will be a three-king battle against the Snow Emperor. When the author writes Douluo as the protagonist, you are not happy at all and don't write it. It's completely abstract. When writing Douluo, you just remember the competition and the bet, right? The protagonists have transformed into soul beasts and have to compete in transformation, right? Are the game rewards useful to the protagonist? Does the protagonist lack fame and soul bones? The fantasy world is about the law of the jungle, and competition is just a way to obtain resources, not just the number of words. I still have a lot of ideas. I don't know how to write them for a while, and I don't want to write them anymore. It took almost half an hour to write this. The summary is that the subject matter is good, but the content is too abstract.

After watching it completely, it was almost average, and I was very excited at the end. It looks very strange. The Snow Emperor occupies a large space in the front. It feels like the Snow Emperor is the protagonist, or two protagonists. But later on, Snow Emperor turned into a clown inexplicably, and it was all a result of the system's manipulation. If you want to take a photo like this, there is no need to give Snow Emperor so many shots. After reading so many chapters earlier, the Snow Emperor gave people a much stronger sense of belonging than Chen Yang, and then the Snow Emperor was forcibly turned into a clown. A bit disgusting

To be honest, the idea is good, but someone in the comment area keeps saying that the protagonist marries the Snow Emperor and becomes a harem. If this is the case, then this novel is a stone. After reading the latest chapter, I want to see when the protagonist takes back his body and destroys the Snow Emperor. The Snow Emperor wants to kill the male protagonist and sacrifice him. Is this immortal? Even if the Snow Emperor is immortal, she still has to educate her so that life is worse than death. If the Snow Emperor does not die and becomes the heroine, this book will be quite poisonous.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is indeed a bit lacking, and the protagonist of this type of subject matter is not suitable for a harem. How can he still have the mind to open a harem after his body, golden finger, and identity have been changed? Shouldn't the unstable factors be killed? It might be better to write it as one soul and two bodies, and are you serious about charging twenty-five? If you charge for more than 20 chapters in Qidian, you will be defaulted to Qidian to collect money.

Let's talk about the author, Snow Emperor has become the main character's tool, right?

At present, it seems that the protagonist is also quite a genius. Although there is not much description, he has taught himself soul tools and cultivation. If you want to pay attention to the author, don't make the conflict between them too big, otherwise it will easily end. You should also pay attention to the interpersonal relationships that Snow Emperor uses the protagonist's body to communicate. If you are not careful, it can be a very poisonous point.

In fact, the protagonist does not need to switch back to his body later on. He can directly control both bodies together. After all, the Snow Emperor's body has been trained by the protagonist to have a stronger system. It would be a pity to switch back.

The protagonist & Snow Emperor don't need to change their bodies again

What did you write about? The hero turned into Snow Emperor was forcefully kissed by Ma Xiaotao. Did you just feed it to me💩?

Good authors don't bother to write about the subject matter you want to read, and authors who know how to write can't write well 🙂

First, the system is a tool. I will gradually weaken the existence of the system and make it almost systemless. Second, the protagonists Chen Yang, Snow Emperor, and the main supporting characters Ma Xiaotao, Ice Emperor, Wang Dong, etc. Third, the reason for body swapping is that Tang Shenwang violated the rules of the divine world and attacked the protagonist, and the system counterattacked. In order to prevent Tang Shenwang from harassing the protagonist anymore, the system exchanged the protagonist's soul with the Snow Emperor. Fourth, why does the system bind the body instead of the soul? The main function is to leave a hook in the Snow Emperor's soul so that the protagonist can snatch the body back later. Fifth, the protagonist will not marry. Sixth, combat power. The combat power in this book mainly draws on the knowledge of Gu. The Dao Mark is the main one, and the realm remains unchanged. But starting from the Soul Saint, it is necessary to condense the first Soul Core, the second Soul Douluo, and the third Title Douluo. The three are combined into one to become a Demigod Core, which can reach quasi-demigod. Converting to a divine core can reach demigod, followed by quasi-god, true god, and god king. Ordinary ----- New Soul Master (with the help of soul guide, it can be significantly stronger than the original training method) Titled Douluo----Soul Saint Ultimate Douluo-----Soul Douluo Demigod----Tiled Douluo Quasi-God----Extreme Douluo Priest----Quasi-demigod Third-level God ---- Demigod Second level god----Quasi god First level god----True God God King----God King Creation God----Creation God Seventh, soul guidance device, six-word and seven-word battle armor will appear in the later period, Abyss may also appear, and there will also be soul guidance technologies such as interstellar battleships, star destroyer cannons, and star drives.

The author hopes that the next few chapters can quickly defeat Shrek and take away the Snow Emperor to regain his original body. After reading this, I feel that the Snow Emperor is too crazy and I need to let her collapse properly.

Hey hey hey, is there such a thing as porcelain chop? I turned into a girl and then hey hey hey with the girl who became me. Damn it, author, you are so weird (tian) (cai)

When I saw Dai Yuhao's second martial soul in Chapter 101, I remembered that the Ice Emperor in the original book once said that before Huo Yuhao condensed his spiritual soul core, Tianmeng Ice Silkworm still had a chance to leave without integrating his spiritual origin into his body. How could we forcefully create a setting in this book that Dai Yuhao will die along with him if he cannot accept the sacrifice?

That is, why does Snow Emperor have more scenes than the protagonist? Author, you are just lazy and want to follow the plot, right? Then what else should I watch? . ? You wrote that the difference between the protagonist's role in the Arctic Land and the Shrek Snow Emperor's role is actually 1:5 What's the matter? Does it mean that Snow Emperor not only changed his body, but also changed the role of the protagonist? The author's design is truly terrifying, comparable to the original god Zhongli's fake death

I advise you not to read it if you are not a fan of novels. Body-swapping is usually about getting along between people who have swapped bodies. In the early stages of this book, everyone had their own way of doing things, the characters fell apart, and the rest of the book is also unfinished. I have no ability, but it is still a good example of hard work.

The author asked, how many chapters are left to finish?

Also, after attacking Shrek this time, the Snow Emperor will definitely be captured. I have always hoped for this part.

Recently, the evil soul masters of the Holy Spirit Sect have been included, and I have no desire to continue reading. Are they of any use? Will readers sympathize with the protagonist who tortures human beings and kills babies in droves?

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