Heavenly Martial Saint!

Big Pineapple, Ye and Xue, and Zuoyou

Harem novels have always been written around women, and you can't write pornographic novels, so they are too watery and very disappointing to readers... Because I like Yakuza-type novels, I like you as an author, even if you often eunuch. Now that you have given up on Yakuza, you have given up a large number of old readers... Do you know why Korean dramas and Zhou Chu's "The Three Evils" are so popular? Because everyone enjoys watching it. There is revenge and injustice, but there is a bottom line... Go away and write a new style. I have already fallen off the pedestal. . . Although you remained decisive in this book, you were drowned out by the woman's hydrology just after you climaxed.

Do you want to follow the rhythm of a eunuch? Fighting doesn't show off your skills at all. It would be better for Big Pineapple to write about the protagonist's initial difficult situation. What kind of spiritual realm? Oh, people who come to watch you fight are not looking at your spiritual realm. You have cultivated to the level of the Emperor of Heaven. It's still not good if the performance is not good in fighting and smashing pits.

The urban stallion is circulating in the extreme. The women meet one after another.

The author hasn't written a book for a long time. This book is really bad and watery.

You have to inform me whether to write or not. Finally, the eunuch's reputation has improved a bit. Has he relapsed?

Night and Snow, Bears, Dogs and Wolves, Get Out, I have read all the books about x, City + Monster + Secret Martial Arts

Now that Qidian Quanqin has been changed, how can I pick up Hengtui Martial Arts? The results of this book are not good anyway.

The beginning is generally unremarkable, but the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. The author can spend a month to create an attractive beginning next time he writes a book. Many of the author's books can't be published in Sanjiang, but they can be high-quality. I think this is much more difficult than Sanjiang, but you can't be published in Sanjiang. There is something missing in it.

I will never spend money to read your books again.

This book earned me 11 yuan, so I cut it up. I was very conscientious and didn't spend 50 yuan.

I suggest the author make a big cut. The golden finger of this novel is too mushy... It feels unattractive and not very satisfying... Then, the author, your male protagonist often takes the power route, but he also has to write it as a pretty boy, which is a bit weird in the Yakuza style. Your side is even more ordinary than this one. Of course, this is just my personal opinion.

I have read every book written by the author, and I hope to have one that is written seriously to completion. The key to online novels is persistence. Come on.

Now I don't even say a word about asking for leave. Is this a sign of unfinished business?

Too bland, no sense of crisis, golden finger not strong enough, it is recommended to dive

I'll give you 10 of them

I can't help it anymore, I haven't read a single book without chapter names.

There is too little written. Too much impact on grades

Why don't you continue writing the kind of muscle-busting novels like Journey into Mystery? This kind of article should still have traffic, right?