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I read about 20 chapters. It's basically "Another World Version of Me and Harry Potter Playing Cards in the Dragon Clan"

It should be the trumpet account of the author of Extraordinary Genealogy, so don't leave any suggestions in the comment area. This author is completely immersed in his own world. The previous book has been written as a setting collection. The QQ fan group is not very active, and the suggestions in the comment area will probably not be read. If you can't stand the first three chapters, you can leave 🙂

The setting serves the plot, but the author is obsessed with the setting and puts the cart before the horse. Moreover, there are too many elements stitched together, and they are not integrated, leaving only the feeling of a hundred garments.

This book has an indigenous protagonist. If you like indigenous protagonists, you can read it. Also, there are Harry Potter characters, Harry Potter plot, but a gender-swapped version of Harry Potter. If you don't mind the gender-swapped version, you can watch it But I don't like these two points, so I withdrew it.

The setting is too complicated, there are too many things sewn together, porridge, warhammer, hp, wizard, these are things that can be seen after reading nine chapters, and some things in coc and dnd have a sense of immediateness. The author loves to throw away the setting too much, and the writing is too complicated, gorgeous but empty.

Author, your writing is very good, and the writing style is okay, but I can't tell the difference between the big and small kings. You spent tens of thousands of chapters in the second chapter to repeatedly emphasize the background of the empire and throw out some settings, and completely lost the rhythm of the first chapter. Your second chapter gave me the feeling that you wanted to show off your writing skills and write a picture to increase the sense of immersion, but you used too much force. The second chapter ended for me with tens of thousands of words. I got through it and wanted to read the main plot - delivering the letter, and wanted to see the new characters appear. You are throwing a third chapter like this at me? Anyway, my expectations and interest were completely exhausted, and I was too lazy to read any more. If you want to retain readers, just change it. In the first three chapters, you retain people and drive them away. You are not a master platinum, and you have no readers to do this? It doesn't matter if the writing is good. When I read the first chapter, I still felt that the starting data shouldn't be so bad? You answered my question in Chapter 23. The difference in data is really not just a matter of the title of the book.

The content I ordered later turned out to be boring. They were all about upgrading monsters and gaining favorability. 😓 I can still read a book like Extraordinary Genealogy because the protagonist is always dealing with big events. This book seems petty and can only reflect the characteristics of light novels.

It feels a bit like the Extraordinary Genealogy

I'm a bit tired of looking at it, there are too many stitches, so it's too messy, Terrarella, Yesterday's Round Car, The Witcher, 40k (doubtful), Witch (I can't recognize this one), Dragon Clan, Monster Hunter (doubtful), etc.

Pigeon and salted fish, I recognize you

The author's skills are there, but when the author chooses to stitch things together without changing his name, he is already selecting his audience. I couldn't bear it when I saw the Dragon Clan.

There are so many introductions and useless information

I don't understand. Why don't you just go to the door and kill the believers and threaten them, or secretly take them away? Why would you bother with such a well-educated person? Moreover, if the believers fail in their mission and there is no follow-up, they can still send you a letter slowly and leisurely?

An extraordinary pedigree? Sorry sir, I didn't recognize it.

How should I put it? It's a classic old problem. In a nutshell, setting the party is the best summary. If you get it right, it will stay on the airwaves.

Every time I see this kind of background of pioneering or taking risks, and then losing both parents, I can't stand it. If you have a child and you are so reckless, why do you have a child? Your adventure is over and you're not dead yet.

The setting party is ecstatic, but this book should not be long, please read and cherish it

The writing is great! A lot of world views have been sewn together. The ones that can be confirmed so far include "Harry Potter", "Dragon", "Apocalypse Forecast (uncertain)" and "Yu-Gi-Oh!" But there are too few. Come on, author!

Come on, author, you must keep writing.

Will it be like Harry Potter, where you solve one incident in your senior year, and your graduation thesis is about killing the seven evil spirits?

Come on

Come on, author, don't stop updating

You must live 🤝