Investigator Strategy

The writing style is better than that of Xiaobai, and worse than those on the monthly ticket list. The level of storytelling is unclear. Occasionally there are some brilliant performances, but in most cases it is suspected of being mysterious. I just threw a bunch of settings for you to look at before I came up, but the way I threw the settings was too rough. The description of the characters is not detailed enough, and the changes in emotions and behavior appear to be very abrupt. I default that the first three chapters are the result of careful polishing by the author. In my opinion, the author has read some books, but this is probably his first time writing a book.

It's a bit obscure and difficult to understand, and you can't understand it if you don't read it carefully. But nowadays, few readers of online articles pay close attention. They just cross out if they can't understand ten lines at a glance.

Are there too many foreign terms in Chapter 1? Moreover, they are all rare transliterated words. Would it be better if the organization name and city name were translated into Chinese?

Too much force, the story has just begun, the plot has not developed, the characters have not stood up, and a bunch of puzzles are thrown out. All the characters are enigmatic, and the protagonists and supporting actors and passers-by are all eager to tell the story. During this period, there are also a lot of fables, dreams, history, and decryption elements piled up layer by layer. The previous puzzle is a little bit There are no clues at all, and the following puzzles are just confusing. Before I can remember the names of the new characters, he suddenly starts telling a story and then involves newer characters. Everything is a mess. All the characters only have names but no personality. The whole story is incomprehensible, and the actual reading experience is not good.

I don't know what it means. The stall is so big that I couldn't even remember the main character's name after watching it for a long time. It's so radio-y.

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that I read this book at an inappropriate time. I couldn't read it calmly when I was outside, couldn't immerse myself in the stories in the book, and couldn't figure out the clues carefully, leaving only a barrier of knowledge.

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The plot is confusing, and too much of it has nothing to do with the main character. Does the author really know what he is writing about?

There are no big problems with the Riddler in the first five chapters. The problem is that after the scene changes, the new character talks to another new character in riddles. There is a lot of information but it is useless. It needs to be used to foreshadow and at least understand a certain character and an organization before it can be brought into the atmosphere 😥 Is there any Shen Nong?

It's a bit of a Riddler, maybe try writing more in the direction of the protagonist.