Sprinting: When I Was in Junior High School, I Outperformed the Asian Trapeze Artists.

Sports should have more passion and less inexplicable belittling and ridicule (nothing is better)

It's not necessary. Why would you participate in a school sports meeting if you are so awesome? Why represent the school? To be honest, are there any worthwhile benefits? Otherwise, why would I give you a discount? If you don't have money, don't talk about anything.

100 Meters 10 seconds 71 ​​at the beginning, What is the main character's purpose? He is still in school after chapter 60, you are not writing a campus article Old Liu's age has changed, many things are different,

Does the author know how Liu Feiren was destroyed? I give you a suggestion, don't sign any agreements randomly! !

It is very unpopular to write purely about sports. I suggest that the author can combine emotional interaction with sports to make it more interesting.

There is also a national first-level athlete's standard for the physical fitness of the protagonist. It is not stated that it is only a national first-level sprinter. This means that the protagonist is a national first-level athlete in the long jump, weightlifting, and high jump. If he does a triathlon, he is a national first-level athlete.

In 2009, the protagonist was only fourteen or fifteen years old, and Liu Yifei was already 22, which is a difference of seven or eight years!

The protagonist is of such strength and age? Su Shen also knows that but he hasn't sent a team to find the protagonist yet?

It is undeniable that the author's vocabulary is too small. He repeats some words in every chapter, which is not only "undeniable", but also repeats something. Besides, the main business is sports, so don't write too many emotional scenes, as it will only be a transition. If you write a lot, you will deviate from the theme.

Liu Yifei

I haven't started reading the new book yet, but I still want to make some suggestions. Don't go the wrong way like the old book. First, the old book adds points to improve, and the points are always reserved for use before the game. I still don't understand what I'm thinking about. This is a sports article, not a game article. Points are reserved in the game to deal with tasks or special bosses, and they are reserved for temporary use. , But if you don't add sports points, what's the use of adding them when you think about it during the game, and what's the difference between using them after you have points, especially if you add too much at once, your body can't adapt, and you're even more speechless. This situation happens once, and you should change it after that. If you have points, you can add them, and you can adapt to the body that has been improved by adding points in daily training. No matter how you look at it, it should be like this. Second, this is a sports article. Although the heroine Liu Yifei of the new book, I am also a fan of Sissi. I can see that the author wants to attract popularity, but I still want to say that sports articles must have enough knowledge about sports. Low-level or low-age sports competitions may be rarely paid attention to by ordinary people, but people within the sports system must be very concerned about it. It will not happen that you win the municipal competition championship and then participate in the provincial competition. No one knows who you are. , Let alone when you break records or outperform many old players at a very young age, no one still knows about you. This is absolutely impossible. The old book has a very bad thing. Even if the protagonist wins the Competition Championship, no one knows about it. Don't treat sports people as fools. The protagonist has surpassed a lot of old players after practicing for half a year, and he is still improving. What should I say about the protagonist's age (actually only one or two years older), poor posture awareness, and no future? ? ? I just don't understand. The protagonist has been practicing for so long, but his posture and consciousness are not good, and he can still make progress and win championships. Why do you think the protagonist has no future? What he writes is that he really treats the people in the sports system as fools. When ordinary people look at it, they will probably think that this is the seedling of a natural sportsman. Why do the protagonists in old books always treat the protagonists as trash? Moreover, sports literature should be publicized when it gets results. Not only does the whole society know about it, at least everyone in the sports system knows about it. What's the use of hiding it? He insists on preventing the protagonist from becoming famous, improving training equipment, and insisting on preventing the protagonist from early contact with the provincial and national teams. Is this the idea of ​​a coach who really wants to bring out disciples? ? Having said so much, I actually know that the author's writing is a bit white, but writing white text should also be logical. If you put it in and think about it, you won't keep making these two mistakes in the old book. I hope the author's new book will make progress and write better. There are really fewer people writing about track and field now. Come on, author

The Liu Yifei who signed the 100th chapter is alive. After the 100th chapter, Liu Yifei feels like she has been written to death by you. She is extremely marginalized and only appears occasionally to cheer for the protagonist. She has completely become an NPC with Liu Yifei's name.

The novel begins in September of the new semester of the third year of junior high school in the summer of 2009! The protagonist Lin Fei was born in December 1994 and is currently fifteen years old! The heroine Liu Yifei was born in August 1991. Her age has been slightly changed. She is currently 18 years old, which is actually three years and four months older than the protagonist. Other settings remain unchanged.

Good, good, good, very good!

Everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens, I personally think they are quite good 🙂

To be honest, the author, I am disgusted by your anti-theft measures. I used to subscribe directly by clicking on a chapter every day, but now it always displays "Read tomorrow", which is annoying. I feel that you are not anti-theft, but you are also anti-theft.

It's pretty good, but the pace is too slow, and the plug-in settings seemed a bit weird and complicated to me, and if I thought about it carefully, there seemed to be loopholes.

Lin Fei

I personally think there are several reasons for the poor performance of this book: First, it is slow to update, and second, fans of sprint novels are probably a large part of the population, but there is almost no description of the technical aspects. For example, after becoming a coach, in what aspects did Huntington focus on improving the protagonist's skills to improve his performance? The third is that there are many bad sentences and inappropriate words. The fourth is that it takes almost the same amount of text to cross the water, the Olympics, the protagonists and the supporting characters, and several chapters are written for each preliminaries. If the book is improved, there should be room for improvement.

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The plot moves too slowly, I can't watch it anymore