Traveling Through All the Heavens and Worlds at the Same Time

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Please, please don't write about Honghuang. I don't know who was the wise man who brought Honghuang to Zhutianliu. It's just like rice rolls and Assam milk tea, they don't go together at all.

These chapters of Zong Wu Ming are so licking at Zhu Yuanzhang that I can't stand Ming's criticism. Zhu Yuanzhang was indeed very powerful in martial arts, and he was able to expel the Tartars and conquer the Central Plains. But Wenzhi is really the worst

No jokes about France are allowed in this book

Patriotism is very strong, author. It affects the plot.

We saw in the comment section that Zhu Yuanzhang's civil service was a piece of cake, and I thought again of the popular opinion till now that teachers are not good at economics, but they are good at wars. I can only say that their rhetoric has always been this way, and I ask a question, how does the army develop and grow? Can an army be run if it cannot be governed by civil service? The Red Army had the healthiest economy during the same period, and the treatment of soldiers was the best. All tactics must rely on organizational strength and mobilization capabilities. And this requires real money and benefits. On this basis, it can only be tempered by a lot of measures such as military literacy and ideological education. Production must also be organized. This is civil governance. Some people will not think that they have won the battle and reward you with troops out of thin air, just playing a game. There is no such thing as a leader who can build a country without the so-called ability to govern by culture. There is no leader who cannot lead an army without the ability to govern by culture. Those who do not have the ability to govern by culture will lose in the struggle of forces. The difficulty of going from 0-1 is different from that of going from 1-10. Many people know this sentence, but they only know it.

Author, which version are you writing? There seems to be no concept of magic in the versions in movies and novels. More inclined towards idealistic superpowers.

This is the first time that the author blows up the flower garden. I find it very interesting. He blows dozens of pictures at once. I feel like he is doing hydrology.

The author's writing is not bad, on the contrary, it is better than other "Dong Chuan Liu" writings, but it is not possible to "revolution" every world 😅 The first few worlds such as "Naruto" and "Pirates" are very good at writing "revolution", and the writing is not bad, because these worlds really need "revolution" and "unification" in order to develop better. "The "Hunter" world awakens the telekinetic "Fantasy World" for the purpose of "propaganda ideas" and "revolutionary transformation of the world." I can't stand it when I see Leorio and Kurapika starting to start "revolutionary" actions according to the protagonist's ideas. Like other readers' comments in the comment area, the author's patriotism affects the plot.

You graduate from world to world too quickly. . It's a completely pointless consumption of copies. There are obviously many plots that can be unfolded. Besides, what will you do after you finish writing the popular world?

As for this book, I have read about forty chapters. Let me talk about the advantages and disadvantages of my personal understanding: Advantages: ① Plot: Upgrades quickly, the plot is neither water nor ink, similar to traveling through the world quickly. ② Character design: The protagonist is not a loser, not confused, has ideas, and is not aggrieved. Disadvantages: ① Plot: A bit soft-handed, although it can't be considered too soft-handed, but I feel that the author is as focused on communist ideas as Kayaking. This is not to say that this kind of thinking is bad, but the protagonist is practicing the same thing in all the worlds. From the perspective of Zhutianliu, it is a bit boring. ② In terms of character: the protagonist is a "nanny", a "nanny" in every sense of the word, but not as extreme as being a dog nanny in other novels. The protagonist's nanny is similar to a "shading tree", but... Still a nanny. The point of view is purely subjective. I can only say that among the 99 streams, except for the founders, what I have seen is considered to be top-notch. However, because I have seen too many Zhutianliu, at this stage, what I have seen is not as exciting as some novice Zhutianliu. Suggestions: ① Either make the plot of each world more detailed, which is also commonly known as writing longer. Take the world of "Under One Person" as an example. This world is indeed not very confusing, but the author has participated in two chapters, and it has become not a participation in the plot, but simply to add an eight-magic plug-in. Moreover, the author of the DC world, Harry Potter world, one-person world, etc. Are all engaged in scientific research - affiliated with the country - improving the national strength. It does not mean that you cannot be patriotic, but you can't do this in every world, right? This seems very boring and the plot is like an assembly line. ②Either choose "The Black Beginning of Jiang Yuyan" or "Is it normal for a lunatic to be a father to someone else?" That kind of routine, I go through it quickly, but the main line is people who make trouble and have fun. This is interesting enough. Although the plot may be nonsensical, it is at least "novel" enough. There is also the issue of the heroine. I don't care whether there is a heroine or not. It doesn't matter to me whether there are none, single, or multiple. As long as you don't engage in poisonous things such as 🐢, licking, or pornography. The most taboo thing is licking. After all, if you can't write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them. I just came to see your protagonist pretending to be a slap in the face and having fun. Other supporting characters don't matter, but the author's treatment fascinates me. In the ordinary world, Louis opened his harem but said that he only sleeps with scumbags and does not harm good families. Louis in other worlds has no contact with women at all, but you just let Louis in other worlds act like a little virgin who has never seen a woman, longing to sleep with him. I don't know what you think. You are already a Hokage and a lieutenant general. Is it difficult to find a good wife from a good family and bury your girls? Either you say that you are devoted to the Tao, or that you dedicate your life to the cause of communism and don't care whether you have a woman or not, or even if you have a harem or have pure love in some world, what does it matter? But you can't write the protagonist as sexually repressed as if he hasn't seen a woman in his life, right?

I don't know what kind of 78 stuff I'm supposed to write when I'm watching the Naruto chapter. The fights look like gifs and I don't know how to write them at all. Are you writing about politics in a hot-blooded series? (I'm not a postgraduate student, and what I wrote is incomprehensible), just let's all farm together This book makes people uncomfortable to read, there are no fighting scenes at all, only the author's ideal farming

Daily poisoning is unreliable, and Shen Nong has to protect the common people!

The poisonous points are gods and demons, the advantages are gods and demons

Okay, I can see that this is your first time to write a book, because you are not good at all, buddy, which makes it look a bit dry. In the past, when I read a book and saw the author not pushing the plot, the first sentence he said was, "It's so fucking bad. After reading this book of yours, I have nothing to say."

Hey, you are too correct. You should restrain yourself. The main reason is that it is too idealistic (in fact, I understand it, after all, you can't say anything that is not conducive to unity), and the national reform is written like child's play.

No, the writing is as bland and tasteless as boiled water, and I have no desire to follow it.

The speedrun version is also great, it's cool

It's very cool, it's imaginative, the pace is fast, and the butt is pretty straight. Those who like 99 can enter without thinking.

The same wear itself is a hodgepodge, and you also add weird secondary creations?

It feels like looking at an assembly line. There are no details, just an outline.

It's not interesting, it's not cool. The point is that the content is boring and dry.

Later, I felt like I just wrote about fantasy, and it was no longer interesting if I didn't write about heaven.

After reading the first few chapters, the thinking is okay, but the writing is a bit poor. I wonder if my writing has been improved in the later chapters.

There are more than forty chapters. Is it wrong? Abdel in JoJo 3 is Egyptian, not Indian.

Zhu Yuanzhang did it to strengthen his imperial power, okay? I don't know why many people praise Zhu Yuanzhang all day long, but if the hero has done great service, his son will not be poor in the end. Only the Zhu family can be rich.

Let me borrow a book of recommendation from my elder brother: You can still make wishes through time-travelling battles. "Immortality Begins from Dou Po" Surprisingly, the wishing dragon is actually nothing special.

Shen Nong tastes poisonous grass 011

The young master, Liu Angxing, and his father are immortals in the sky. The young master himself has cooked for Pangu. Recently, he has gone to the underworld to cook. Why should he go to a distant college to study at this level? Do you need to go to kindergarten than someone who graduated with a Ph. D.?

Recently, besides yellow waste, there is still yellow waste, which is quite boring.