Rebirth Is a Must

The first order is 200. How many have been ordered?

It may not feel good to take down a classmate's sister, but it must be very unpleasant for one's own sister to be taken down by a classmate.

Congratulations to the author for finally returning to his comfort zone, but the results are definitely not as good as those of the Champion Arrow back then. Can he persevere? Personal Thoughts: The heroine in harem novels wants to avoid being stereotyped. In addition to personality differences, the most important thing is to have her own "identity." Urban Dragon King novels have to write about nurses, stewardesses, teachers, police girls, and even sales of cars and houses. After earning a harem, the author will not write about the heroine, so she quits her job and wins behind the male protagonist. Without the halo of "identity", it will be unattractive to readers. "Sister", "twins" and "brothers and sisters" sound explosive, come on

This book is off to a good start. Could it be that the heroine studies hard but gets average grades? They are all heroines with incredible grades and good looks. I'm tired of seeing them.

I wrote this book with great care in the early stage, but later on I may not get good grades, so I have to work part-time to write the book, and I am busy getting married and busy with this and that. It is conceivable that I will not be able to write well and will not continue writing. There are two conditions for being able to write books part-time: 1. Your job is very leisurely, such as some civil servants (in the idle department). 2. Your hand speed is relatively fast. Otherwise, I would be extremely busy at my job and would not be able to write a good book part-time.

Don't write about brotherly love. Brotherly love is not as good as ordinary female protagonists. Don't force a pimp to make a match, let the male partner find it yourself, and just take it over with him. Don't suddenly add the heroine at the end, otherwise the heroine in the front will look like a clown.

Honor of Kings is popular because it is a game from Tencent. How can pig's feet compete with Tencent? Even if pig's feet are made and become popular, how can you say that Tencent copied you? Comparing traffic with Tencent WeChat QQ?

Every book is about pets such as dogs and cats. There is a lot of content, so even if it is written, the protagonist still sleeps with the pet. No matter how clean the cats and dogs are, they cannot sleep with people, which can easily mislead readers.

To be honest, the opening chapter was poorly written. The follow-up content refers to chapters 5 to 15. So far, I feel that it is okay. But the first five chapters and the first three chapters are really not very good. I saw some people saying that they thought it was a good start, but I can only say that their vision needs to be improved. This book has less than 10,000 collections before the upper limit is lifted, which can already prove that the opening chapter is poorly written. Besides, it is the reincarnation of the old author.

I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night, so I looked through the authors of the books I had read before, and found that many authors had withdrawn from the industry for several years, and it felt like old friends were gradually disappearing. Later I also read the book Miaomiao, which is the most amazing book I have read in so many years. Although the author is an old pigeon, I still thank you for not giving up writing or book friends. Books like those of the female professor and Wan Liangtian will no longer be seen. So pigeon, you must continue to write, so that we book lovers can have books to read when we want to read love stories, and we can continue to yearn for the love in the book. Come on, no matter how many times you try, I will still pay for your book, just because you are still writing and never give up. 🙏🙏🙏

I felt very sad after 2008, so I hope you write this book well. I will support you by reading the ads 🤓

Only then did I find out that it was written by the author in 2003. The daily characters are written really well, and the rebirth novel is definitely a masterpiece, but why are the results so poor? 😥

It's very well written. Don't do too much with the heroine. Three or four are enough.

Write well. The most important thing in writing a book is persistence.

I've caught up to the latest chapter, and here are my personal thoughts after reading it. I don't have much impression on Xie, I don't know why I rejected it, there is no charm in the writing, and there are no memorable details. Xingzhu writes more and more details, and the images become more three-dimensional. The two sisters are quite active, but they are somewhat similar. The protagonist is a bit like the later part of the 05 book. He has a tendency to change from a scumbag to a scumbag. Some people may like to watch bulldozers and accept them if there is a beautiful character. The PUA method is used very skillfully. But I personally prefer the protagonist to be a scumbag guru like Duan Zhengchun. If you like the heroine, you are really attracted to her, instead of becoming a complete slave of desire, ignoring everyone else for the sake of one, and forgetting your commitment to the other. I suggest you write about the psychological activities of the main character in the Shura Field or his sincere treatment of the various heroines, and improve Xie's character image (maybe because I am following up, I have remembered one of the characteristics of x). Shigekura Stud Xingzhu, since there is a chapter about making up for the past life at the beginning, let's write about the progress of the relationship. Writing a book review at night makes me dizzy. I will make changes when I refresh to the latest progress.

The first few chapters seemed awkward to read. The book review said that this is an old author and his writing style is a bit shoddy. Let Shen Nong tell me what happens next.

Just write what you write and don't be dominated by others. Can it satisfy some people and satisfy all people?

Do you really want to write about building cars? Brother, let's not get sick and keep thinking about cosplaying Rebus, okay?

You can read the book Reigniting the Green Age, it should be some inspiration to you.

I have read several books about The Eunuch before, and I liked them very much. I thought this one would be suitable. Unexpectedly, I persisted. I hope to finish this book, and the traffic for new works may be better

Not a single word was left unsaid. The plot didn't advance, it just seemed like it kept going in circles, with the parents going back and forth about things. I can't stand it

Why hasn't it been updated? Raised to death?

Have you ever been a dragon? Just dare to write this! To be honest, when I saw the protagonist awakening "Abyss Breath" in Chapter 15, the melon in my hand fell to the ground. Author, have you ever been a dragon? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted. You said that this breath is blue-purple, but in reality, the higher the temperature of the flame, the closer it is to white. Blue-purple is rare, but according to the description in the book of "melting black iron like melting ice and snow", is this energy level not going to break the laws of physics? There is also the description of "dragon wings spread out to cover the sky and the sun, with a wingspan of three hundred feet." If we calculate it as one foot and three meters, three hundred feet is 900 meters. This wingspan is larger than three football fields. Are you writing about a dragon or a moving mountain? I know the novel is about exaggeration, but there must be some basic biomechanics involved, right? If the dragon wings were really enlarged to proportions, could they fly just by relying on muscle traction? I'm afraid it doesn't have to have its own anti-gravity engine. And that "dragon chanting causes space oscillations". Can the sound waves of dragon language exceed the speed of light? These settings look lively, but when you think about it, they are all full of loopholes. It feels like the author just thought up the "high-end" elements and lacks a solid sense of construction. Of course, this is not a total denial. The protagonist's ignorance as a young dragon is vividly written, and his sense of curiosity and wildness about the world reminds me of my own cat. But as the plot progresses, there are more and more such "taken for granted" settings, which dilutes the sense of immersion in the story. After all, readers are willing to believe in a fictional world, provided that the world has self-consistent logic. It is recommended that the author either provide a reasonable explanation for these settings, such as "the dragon's innate magical powers are not limited by the laws of physics", or refer to common sense in biology and physics to make the image of the dragon more three-dimensional. After all, the real "dragon" should not be a pieced together monster, but a life with flesh and blood and supported by logic. Finally, I still want to ask: Author, have you really been a dragon? If you have never done it before, I suggest you go to the zoo to observe more reptiles such as lizards and snakes, and at least get a realistic picture of their behaviors. Otherwise, this "taken for granted" way of writing may make readers think that the dragon is not flying in the sky, but is made up in the author's mind.

Come on, I'm just waiting for your book. You're the only one who can read the latest love harem. It took me several months to get through Chapter 11.

This author has become a habitual eunuch. I will follow his books next time🐶😡

It's time to speed up the plot, because I have work, and the updates are unstable, which is nothing to say, but the plot has been stuck, and it's been almost a month, and there is no progress at all. I keep writing from other people's perspectives, which is a bit numb.

It reads so familiarly. The author must have had several vests before, right?

Why don't you write such a good book? 😐