An Old Man Cultivating Immortality in a Time of Disaster

How about writing an 18-year-old protagonist from the beginning, with a funny old-age beginning that emphasizes a stable structure, and you're so fucking slapping yourself in the mouth. Author, do you want to read what you wrote next?

The most annoying thing is that the character designed is a sophisticated and experienced person, and then he makes some expressions or actions like a young person or child who has never experienced anything. The old man has never experienced anything in the apocalypse, you are so surprised. There are also bad sentences. Author, don't you read it after you finish writing it? Write whatever comes to mind, regardless of whether it fits your character's worldview or not. Are the sentences smooth?

There are too many places where intelligence is forcibly reduced.

This is the logic of the young passionate protagonist: Young 18-year-old boy: You killed the father of my personal maid, and I will beat you to death. Monster: Huh? Just shoot a poacher to death and offend you? I have a background, you dare to touch me? Young man: My woman cried all night yesterday, and I must beat you to death for revenge. Monster: She's just a maid. I'll grab a few beauties from nearby and give them to you. That's enough for you. You want to start a war? Is this why? ! Young man: She helped me fall down. At first, the whole family despised me as a good-for-nothing, but she was the only one who never left me. How could trash like you understand true love? ! She is my reverse scale, if I touch her I will die! Before the monster died: Come on, it's just you, you are still against the scale... Hey, wait, this may be a trap... We may all be plotted, wait~ah (die) The monster force: The nature is very serious, humans may be looking for reasons to start a war, prepare for war first, fight on a small scale to test the attitude of humans... Prepare monsters to attack the city. Young protagonist: The demon is evil, I must defend my homeland. Other nearby sect monks: Ah, yes, yes, let's fight. Then, this is the protagonist with an old mentality: The concubine cried: Master, my whole family was killed by the monsters nearby last night, please seek justice. Protagonist: As far as I know, I gave your mother-in-law a few hundred taels of gold and silver after you got it, and they all live in the city now, right? Then, he was killed by the monster from the mountain? Concubine: Yes, the demon sneaked into the city... Protagonist: Except for the death of someone in your family last night, no one from the rest of the family lost a single one. Can you tell me~ why they killed people in your family and nothing happened to others? Concubine: This... I don't know either. Protagonist: Is there a treasure in your house that the demon can like? Are there any people in your family with ancient bloodline talents that can be upgraded by monsters after eating them? Tell me, the demon sneaked into the city to kill a few mortals. Why? The concubine cried and chirped: I don't know~ Master, you promised to protect me for the rest of my life... Protagonist: Provided you don't betray me The concubine shook her head wildly with disbelief: No, I didn't betray the master... I only have the master in my heart~ The master actually doubted me? ! Protagonist: Oh, tell me, what do you like about me? Besides making money, what do you want? Picture: Am I several decades older than you? Pictured: My white hair and wrinkles are not as handsome as the young scholar? Tell me, you left your ex-husband for preferential treatment before, why can't you betray me for more benefits now? Concubine: It's different! The master is special to me, and no one can compare with me. I believe that I... Protagonist: Wait until I go to the nearby mountains to negotiate and find out the truth. You are not allowed to go out during this period. One day later Protagonist: I found out, this is the situation. The nearby cultivating sect released their spiritual beasts to pretend to be monsters and provoke a conflict between me and the Tiger King. They wanted Huangque to get rid of the two stumbling blocks between me and the Tiger King. And the disciple in the sect who has come into contact with you is your cousin. Concubine: My cousin is just here for a normal visit~ Protagonist: Then I gave you the elixir so that you can embark on the path of cultivation. Why didn't my relatives in the sect treat me so well when I was a mortal? The concubine broke down and cried bitterly: No... My cousin didn't want me to plot against the master... I only care about the master! No matter what temptation you face, you will never betray me. If you don't trust me anymore, just... Kill me. Life is meaningless, so it's better to die. The protagonist shoots the concubine to death: How should I treat you? What did you do to me? ! Do you think I will believe your performance? I've lived to this day and no one believes it! Die! Three days later, the blocked sect disciple was tortured before his death: I was forced too, the sect insisted that I come up with a plan, and that cousin was just a distant relative. I just found out that you liked her very much, so I chose her house as a target, just to attract you, and she didn't even know it. The gift of the elixir was purely because I wanted to impress you and try to hook up with you, but she refused immediately, saying that her only light was you... Stop it, it's already this time, why did I lie to you? The protagonist remembered the concubine who knelt down and pulled up her trousers and cried, and did not escape or resist at all until she was beaten to death: Alas... The human heart is the most unpredictable... It seems that I am not clean anymore, and I can't keep anything. But, if we don't do this, how can we live? What do you think? Sect disciple: This... Senior, you have experienced so much, you don't need to ask me a junior, right? I'm just a little guy, life and death don't mean anything, I'm also forced, just let it go~ah~ (die) Protagonist: How do I know if you are successful? If you say no, then there is no? But maybe it is indeed... Alas~ helpless. Is there any person who is more psychologically reasonable than an old man who is passionate about being a teenager?

Well written, find more heroines

The way a man, a woman and a dog are handled is really hard to watch, it's too rough:

People who are several decades old don't know how to keep their wealth secret?

After reading the comments, I guessed what the author would write. It would be too tacky to write according to what they said. Goodbye.

What's the point of Gou being killed all of a sudden? What did Gou do? Gou Dan?

It's so beautifully written, let's take a look together I can't be the only one who is depressed

Collect it and keep it for a while before looking at it.

After reading two pages, I started to buy monthly tickets😏

The storyline and characters are unsatisfactory, and there is a strong sense of dissonance

A big beauty came up and attacked the old man. This is the first time I heard that if you use mind-controlling techniques on others, you will become his slave if you don't fall for it. This book also gave me new knowledge 😥

? Why hasn't it been updated for 7 days? Make knitting,

It's very well written, please add more chapters, it's not enough to read.