I Refresh a Post Bar with Super Powers Every Week

Many friends have mentioned that the plot is a bit messy. I have reviewed myself and it is indeed the case... So let's briefly summarize the story line: Chapter 1~7: Red Knife Incident Chapter 8~16: Awarding Event, Jade Buddha Incident (for the institution) Organization's debut to pave the way) Chapter 17~26: The banquet kidnapping incident and the agency's investigation into the Pinocon company incident unfolded in two directions Chapter 27~Now, the dream copy, the dream world of cyberpunk immortality, is currently in the midst of the protagonist group's prison escape incident. The main story of this article is probably Tieba superpowers + the setting of a certain luxury goods organization + some strange anomalies. It is more inclined to unit dramas. The main style is still abstract and humorous, with some elements such as Cthulhu and Iron Collapse, and the label also has modern mysteries. Because the ingredients are too complex, this book is destined to have a niche audience. There are many reasons for writing this. For example, I initially thought of some urban love stories but found out that I have never been in love, my writing skills are insufficient, the outline is too messy, some plots unfold too fast and too early, etc... This is the first book signed by a newcomer at Qidian. There are indeed problems with ability at the beginning, but I will work hard to finish this story and write it well, and I will not let down the support of all my friends who have seen it now. Thank you everyone.

It feels like there are traces of DS's involvement, maybe it was polished with DS, but it feels like DS generated a first draft and then someone else wrote it. Apart from that, the writing is quite interesting and worth reading. After so many years, it's rare to read luxury jewelry novels. I hope to continue writing them.

Everyone knows that there is a saint in China and abroad, a Confucius and a Jesus So who is more powerful among these two saints The answer is Jesus, why? Because Jesus has two Confucius☝🏻🤓

Who are the three greatest chemists in world history? Answer: Jesus, who turned water into wine; Answer: Goering, who turned butter into cannons Answer: And Himmler, who turned Jews into soap.

God must be a black man Because everyone calls him dad but no one has ever seen him

Question: If people turn into stars after death, what will Shang Yang become after death? Answer: MacArthur

The arch dam brother who is rich in xp, the nuclear bar brother who knows how to play in the city, and the picture bar brother who turns spicy chicken into a magic, There are also ps, Yang Chaoyue, Li Yi, resistance... Now that the matter is over, let's experience +3

So pretty, I pooped everywhere when I laughed 😋

One day, I'll give him a random argument and stack boxes. Then he won't be invincible.

1500-Day Bookworm Credibility Guarantee Tieba superpowers are actually rule-level abilities created under Tieba skin (currently it seems) There may be microgram background (doubtful) The foundation was sewn, but most of them borrowed from the framework setting of the foundation, and the author made the abnormalities corresponding to the numbers himself. The latest chapters also include dragon settings, you will know just by looking at the chapter names (laughing) Overall, it is quite crazy, and the writing style is more relaxed. But currently the protagonist group is not so relaxed. Eleph was forced to lose his intelligence due to excessive use of his abilities. The protagonist has just entered the extraordinary world, and most of his abilities are only auxiliary systems with relatively weak rules and regulations. He has not yet developed and is still a little Karami. Although Xia Renai is a rich woman, she only lives in the mortal world after all. Combined with what the Buddha said before, this world may be in some kind of extraordinary recovery. At present, the official strength is not very strong. The protagonist relies on his own ability to get in touch with the official and becomes a non-staff civil servant. Eleph happens to be a relatively high-level official (I just remembered that Eleph can be regarded as a rich woman in the extraordinary world. The protagonist hugs two rich women on the left and right, and the resources of the extraordinary and mortal worlds are all covered???) But the role of the protagonist is still great. Because his rules-based abilities are effective against gods, he can help Eleph suppress the side effects of listening to the gods' ravings. He is not considered a bastard (laughs), and he is currently in an equal partnership. But again, I feel that the strength currently shown by the official is average, at most a first-class force (otherwise there is nothing wrong with the protagonist) In short, the above is a rough introduction to the subject matter. The author's writing and plot IQ are online. It can be read by those who are on the airwaves. It is not recommended for those who prefer the traditional upgrade monster killing flow and pure brainless fun. Of course, the writing is quite enjoyable. Why is it not recommended to join the traditional upgrade and monster killing stream? Because this book is as confusing as his imagination. It's not suitable for people who like to follow the book step by step. The feeling of this book may be daily life one second, and then switch to the style of supernatural combat the next second. Currently it feels a bit like unlimited streaming. Why? Because every abnormal event caused by related things can be regarded as a "copy", and the plot basically relies on the "copy" to unfold. In terms of pure quality and regardless of update speed, my evaluation here is for Category 1 literature (I divide it into six categories, The Only True God only has one copy, Category 1 literature can be updated with a monthly pass, Category 2 literature is updated, Category 3 literature is additional and wait and see, Category 4 literature is pure and pure, Category 5 literature is waiting and watching, Category 6 literature, my suggestion is to rush into the palace for junk books to die early and be reborn, generally not in my bookshelf) The following content contains spoilers 4.27 Uploaded. I have to say that the author's emotional line is really interesting to me... As expected of Xiao Chunan, only Xiao Chunan can write such a sweet and pure love. But when I thought that the author was going to take Eleph and Yang Ke'er, and Le Nai would still have to be frustrated and cry, I would... I won't say any more, I will go all-in on Le Nai's stocks first. The situation is really great. From the current point of view, even if it is a harem, Le Nai's status is that of the main palace. 5.3 Now it seems that this book should have three female protagonists 5.6 I don't know why the impression seems to have declined. Maybe the sewing is too complicated? 5.21 My current feeling in this volume is... There are too few mechanisms and not comprehensive enough, but there are too many ✍🏻 and it is really unnecessary, the whole thing is very tangled Yang Keer's plot doesn't know what it is about... To be honest, it is better to slowly fade away the edges, the characters are average, and even the names are not as good as the first two heroines 6.3. Gu, I regret, I have not subscribed for more than 10 days

The introduction is a bit difficult to explain. In fact, I am mentally retarded if I don't accept it.

When the other party states a point of view, whether it is right or wrong, say "Dian" When the other party supports someone or something that you do not support, say "Xiao" When the other party debates or starts to explain in detail, say "Urgent" When you have difficulty understanding the point of view expressed by the other party, say "" When the other party asks you to express a point that does not exist, say " "Clam" When the other party has a point of view that can be called a position, say "criticism" When you say something that you think is to the point, say "win" When you cannot effectively refute the other party's remarks, say "hem" When the other party does not exist and just wants to start a fight, say "Genshin Impact"

The author can give me a boost, or you can give me 20,000 gold coins.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 54. The beginning is still very attractive, but the copy of Dreamland is so messy that I can't stand it anymore. Give the author some ideas. Personally, I feel that the problem with the dream dungeon is that the transition from "daily to dungeon" is not handled well. When the reader takes the protagonist's perspective, the dream dungeon is a sudden event that has nothing to do with the protagonist from the beginning to the outbreak. In this process, the protagonist has not made any preparations, and the reader is not mentally prepared to face a long dungeon. There will be confusion when an unexpected event turns into a long dungeon. Serious misalignment of expectations makes people feel confused. Before this, there are not enough details and hints to prepare readers for reading a long copy, and the content of the copy is different enough from the main world. This leads to the inevitable impatience of readers when facing dual unknown world views. After all, the world view of the main world has only just begun to unfold, and readers face too much unknown information in a short period of time. The second point of separation is that the "organization", as the first institution in the book that can handle abnormal events in an organized and systematic manner, did not show any behavior in line with its positioning in the first half of this copy. I think it is an acceptable transfer to induce a copy due to a member's stupid operation. However, the subsequent processing of the organization has a great sense of fragmentation. As an organization with containment experience and capable of airdropping dream-type anomaly handling tools, after shouting the slogan "For Humanity", facing an anomaly that affects many people, the only response is to let a person who can lucid dream come in and play house. I looked at the catalog at the back, and there was mention of some Shenhao system that had appeared before, but it was too late, and it affected the shaping of the organization. Judging from the content of the text, I did not see that the members of the organization in the dream had any ability to deal with this abnormality. In reality, the character who commanded the team and disliked his brother entered the dream and even relied on the male protagonist to protect his chastity. This contrast made me keep thinking about a question when reading the first few chapters of the dream copy - what is the organization doing? The focus of the description is too concentrated on the protagonist, so that all the breakthroughs are driven by the protagonist. So what if there is no protagonist? Separated from the actions of the protagonist, the members of this mature organization did not show any problem-solving abilities, and the author's description outside the protagonist did not give a picture of "the organization in action." This separation leads to a very intuitive problem, that is, "organization" has become a label on the background board, and its only function in the plot is to label the character "from the organization". This kind of separation greatly destroys the reader's sense of involvement and reasonableness of the worldview. From the reader's perspective, the dream copy is an accident that is an extension of an event initiated by the organization. It is reasonable for the reader to have "plan expectations" for the event initiator. After all, it is an organization that handles contained objects. How can it not have a mature plan system? So the organization should show its unique emergency response capabilities in the dream copy, and expand its worldview by showing the organization's containment measures. Is it official or unofficial? Just or unjust? Which is priority: containment or utilization? These are all world views that can be revealed through the specific performance of the organization, while the main text only shows the memory point of "the organization did nothing." Likewise for the protagonist, as an unprepared and involved party, readers' expectations for him should be "how to deal with unexpected situations with unique superpowers." In this process, the way the protagonist handles things and the way the organization handles things, two completely different ways can not only show the details of the organization to express the world view, but also show the uniqueness of the protagonist and give free play to the author's imagination. The collision and even conflict between the two can naturally lead to the protagonist's exploration and development of his own abilities, the organization's suspicion and evaluation of the protagonist, and so on. In the current text, the members of the organization have completely become appendages to the protagonist, causing the story to become a "spotlight performance" rather than a real world. That is, the story only takes place where the protagonist is, and other parts have become unmoving background panels. Finally, I hope that the author will get better and better as he writes. The subject matter is still very attractive, so I must finish it.

These recent pictures seem to be trying to set up the protagonist group as a serious salvation group, but at the beginning you used funny and abstract content to attract people. The core of these recent pictures is different from the previous ones, and it is not attractive at all.

Sure enough, Tieba has also become a kind of golden finger? Those who corrupt circles and engage in abstraction the most eventually become new abstractions.

Sun Ba's greatest ability is to surrender before fighting.

If you don't know how to write about female protagonists, don't write emotional dramas. Instead, describe the protagonist himself and the interesting things happening in the world.

Then you should mark fan tags like Bengtielong Clan in your profile😅

Q: What kind of bee can't fly Answer: Kobe (Ko a bee)

Chapter 22 is a bit witty, don't you need to open the box? If you don't know the basic confidence, go straight to it? ?

The progress is too fast, one hundred pieces will involve the universe and change the world on a large scale. The protagonist's own fighting ability can only be said to involve rules, and it is difficult to say whether he can suppress the protagonist or not The second dimension has come to the real world later, and I suspect that the author has let himself go in writing In fact, it is better to delete the ability to change the world and write the book slowly. Slowly expand from the world view, do tasks and write about daily life The first one looked good, but after buying it, I felt like I was losing money by buying more than a dozen pictures.

After Xia Renai was defrauded of money by the protagonist, her behavior was really not like a normal person. It was exactly like the wise girl in an idol drama. Someone used a plastic bracelet to cheat you out of 5,000 yuan. Not only did you not call the police and blame the protagonist, but you didn't mention the money and paid back the 5,000 yuan. You also found an excuse to follow the protagonist and sided with the protagonist for no reason. It was too idol drama, so blunt. Yesterday, the two of them were strangers, so they talked to her to cheat her out of money. It felt like you were writing it based on an idol drama or anime.

The writing is very good, with a lot of interesting jokes If it can catch the airwaves, it will be a masterpiece. It will be as relaxing and enjoyable a reading experience as laughing and joking with friends. Ps: The content is too big. People who haven't seen it may be confused.

A series of miscellaneous pictures

The writing is good, but maybe the subject matter is a bit niche, and the author is a little bit self-indulgent, so not many people read it and it is not popular. I hope it will continue to be updated, don't be like this!

Don't I deserve to be included in the profile if I'm in prison? 😡

World Famous Painting·"Charlene Sleeping" Haji is so angry Probably visiting Tieba Cute Current performance

Rabbit pajamas

A friend mentioned that posting pictures will affect his imagination, so in the future, pictures of some important scenes will not be included in the text and will be put in the fan section... Let's make it an unofficial fan creation Anyway, this stupid AI can't get into the position I want Xia Renai·First Kiss Original Chapter 79 fan fiction Xia Renai·Just ordering takeout Chapter 153 fan fiction