There Are Too Many Planes, I Will Hand over the Doomsday World to the Country

It is too stingy to think of our country. If you compare it with reality, you will know that many projects do not make money, but our country has been doing them because of its foresight. A policy can be implemented unchanged by the leadership for decades.

Although the world is a grass-roots team, if you use the setting of a grass-roots team to write a novel, the impression will be very poor.

I feel that many authors of this type of submission have misplaced the positioning of the relationship. Generally speaking, the irreplaceable ones are the collaborators, and the replaceable ones are the superiors and subordinates. So the relationship between the protagonist and the country in the submission should be the positioning of the collaborator.

Why are there so many conflicts between people in this kind of literature? ? ? It feels like everyone is extremely aggressive, and the protagonist has a lot of conflicts with them. I thought the protagonist was leisurely in the group, hello, me, hello everyone. But the way this article is written is to ignore and control the protagonist. The protagonist fiercely competes for status, but you don't need it? Aren't you looking for trouble?

It feels like the country has to be described as inefficient and incompetent. On this issue of changing the national destiny, there will be low-level mistakes such as disloyalty and easy betrayal. The latest chapters are very confusing. How can the power of the state machine be so weak.

Submitting yourself to the state means submitting yourself to a group of people for discussion. This is not good-looking at all, and the writing style is not good enough to write it.

Can carbon-based organisms resist bullet charges? There is a kind of movie beauty

There's a giant animal ten meters away, right? It's tens of meters in size, and it's still shit when we gather together for a meeting.

All I can say is that the post is better than the book.

Chapter 3, all kinds of complaints, the biggest point is the national regulations: three days, one week, half a month, one month, several years, ten years, it is outrageous, different worlds, synchronous parallel worlds, direct and rigid requirements, the time period is so long, the types of worlds are not known He said (I only asked the protagonist what was behind the door later, but it was also rubbish. When I handed it in, I should have asked the protagonist if he had gone in or something like that. It wasn't until the conference was over and the institute was notified that the protagonist had gone in, and the protagonist was so angry that he retorted), so he forcibly made a plan for the year.

That Liu Wenna is so disgusting. Just like that female judge, she just makes a conclusion without any verification.

Damn it, you closed the portal when the army entered, and you still negotiated terms with the country?

Temeow's trashy novel. Let me fill you in on some settings. First, soldiers who kill monsters will also gain experience. Second, the earth itself is undergoing a spiritual resurgence or there is a big crisis outside the earth. Third, the protagonist should not think about becoming a Buddha or an immortal by himself. You should first create a positive cycle. First, turn your own world into a world of high martial arts, turn soldiers into super workers, and then become martial ancestors yourself. Then you can write a million words in this novel. I can't understand why the protagonist's world will definitely become more and more complicated in the future, yet he's still so petty. Or you can directly apply the cosmology of this world to Devouring the Starry Sky, and the strong have no limits, and you can lead the earth to become a cosmic empire, or you can apply a little bit of the cosmology of the Super God Mechanic. If you don't change your novel, you can barely make a living, but it won't become a masterpiece.

It feels like the national forces have collectively lost their wits, and the best thing to do for the protagonist is to sacrifice him. According to Maslow's hierarchy of needs theory, there are five needs: physiological, safety, social, respect, and self-actualization. Build a small city for the protagonist to act and play with him, and occasionally invite him out to act cool with him to satisfy the emotional value. Want rights? Want money? Want someone to flatter you? Want to show off? No problem, as long as you stay well, everything will be arranged for you.       ， It is best to have a few children who can inherit the portal ability, so that they can be trained from an early age to have greater plasticity. In short, it is life, safety, social interaction, family, and emotional value, all of which will be satisfied for you.

I think one thing, some readers are right, if I kill you directly, or imprison you, and make you my slave portal, wouldn't it be mine?

Throw away your brains and enjoy being brainless.

Let me review it! I like the theme, the genre, and even the ideas are quite to my liking, but there are also many shortcomings. Let me say something here. The first issue of treatment is that it is impossible to put the protagonist in that kind of environment. No matter what, everything will be arranged directly. Money, status, and women will all be in place in one step. Please refer to China's introduction of Ukrainian engineers, drones, and shipyards. Second, in terms of firepower, carbon-based creatures don't have superpowers. I don't think they can defend against modern weapons. If they do, they are not ordinary creatures. Just refer to Devouring the Starry Sky. Third, the soldiers advance, which is not very well written. Fourth, the leadership is not good either. I think at least there will be a temporary deputy position or something like that. In daily communication, I always feel that you think of the country's leaders too simply. This group of people are very sophisticated and will not be like this. Fifth, scientific research, I think it's weird, but I can't say it accurately. My suggestion, just use AI! Give the outline to AI first and let it help you optimize it, and then you can refer to it and write it down. Otherwise, there will be something that makes people feel that something is wrong, the reality is not realistic, and the brain is not enough! Then, let AI optimize it for you every time you write it! Especially the issues of human nature, plot rationality and basic logic. You can also let AI write it first and you can modify it later. That's all I can think of for now.

Is there just so much nonsense in the three golden chapters... How can you retain readers?

I've read Chapter 24. If you're a mid-level reader, just wait. It's a bit mindless to write about the country and the generals of the army! Also, the character design of the protagonist is not very good.

True Six. I deleted my account and ran away and posted today's update. . .

Is this the most useless novel of this kind?

What the hell The protagonist has systematic evolution but can't beat others? So stressful?

The author has never had any contact with the upper echelons in the real sense. He is completely fabricated. He was so sprayed that his mentality exploded. He deleted his account and ran away.

A common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of carrying a jade.

When exploring a new world, you only bring a sniper rifle, rocket launcher, and grenade gun? His IQ is worrisome

I read fifty or sixty chapters, and one word, rubbish

Swallowed the chapters or deleted the book and ran away

My comment has been deleted. Because it's too much to say. Afraid of being banned

The more I read, the more awkward I became. What on earth was written?

If the system is conscious, I will let it select people from the blood clan with the same surname as mine. Each person will have a clone system, and then activate the abilities of my clan on earth to invade another world. At that time, only one branch system needs to be successful, and the main system can reap the dividends. There is no danger yet. When the strength is enough, I can train my fighting consciousness 😌. I am the Li family, the most populous and powerful in the world, and I look forward to one day unifying the world.