Douluo Dalu: The Douluo Compendium, Starting with Activating Tang Ya

Taking the initiative to expose the secret of martial arts, and inexplicably telling the most important secret of his martial soul to a person he just met. This is enough to make people die of poison. If you mind, don't read it.

After watching Free, I didn't find any skills from the protagonist. I only know that he is a single college student. His understanding is incredible. He also has knowledge about meridians. You know, even doctors don't know everything about them nine out of ten times.

The protagonist is a petty person who is bullied by his summoned beast every day. He also wants to show his toughness, but it has no effect. I don't know who this is written for.

Author, can you be more rigorous? It's okay if I came up with a skill out of nowhere before. Now I've added the Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu out of nowhere. Let's modify it a little. Let's just say that I saw it in my previous life, and I was quite good at it at that time, so I memorized it and practiced it for a while, so that I can accept it. You are so inexplicable. It's too inconsistent to come out. Also, if you want to practice martial arts, you should set the protagonist to start practicing before awakening the martial spirit. At most, it is because he doesn't have enough food, so he practices less, or because he has no soul power, the effect of practice is very little, but you can't tell him to try it after he awakens the soul power.

I like this kind of all-inclusive collection. If I don't accept Douluo fan fiction, I'll accept it if I write about anything else 🙂

Also, there is no need to tell Wuhun's secret from the beginning. You can pretend that they are real people, and you can tell them later after the relationship is better. How can you tell the secret from the beginning! The same goes for improving combat experience. It's all just to provoke conflict. It's just a great soul master. There aren't a few great soul masters in the Ye family who can fight the people you summon? Even if the Ye family didn't hire some great soul masters to fight, it wouldn't be a problem, right? I had to come to Tiandou Academy and announce the secret to the public. I didn't see how it was announced to the public later, but some of the protagonists I saw said they didn't know what department they were in. I felt that the protagonist was about to be summoned in public! The title of the catalog is also written. Qian Renxue knows the specialness of the protagonist's martial soul. If the protagonist is a Contra, you can just ban it. You are so weak now, so you want to make the secret public to the public. I feel that it is too weak.

What this male protagonist did is not something a person with brains can do. Don't make any plot about using wisdom to conquer certain forces. It's so embarrassing. You said he has a succubus physique and took away other people's wives as soon as he entered other people's forces and conquered the entire force. This is more real than conquering a force with rhetoric but no logical words. Please, please, let him act like a normal wise man, and then be climbed into bed by the female partner, fighting and shouting about bondage and hope to win, isn't that good?

Suddenly I discovered that the Douluo book "God of Nature" was also written by you. I feel that the protagonist's intelligence is not as low as this. Why are you making such a big mistake? You don't need a protagonist who is smart and almost demonic. You only need a protagonist with normal thinking and the Douluo illustrated book you set. I feel like you can write a good Douluo novel. But you made too many mistakes and omissions, one poisonous point after another! Brother, please revise it a little bit. I really think this subject matter is very good. I can't do it if you are too poisonous.

Where did the protagonist get his skills at the beginning?

Summoning Gu Yuena doesn't mean she has power and no memory, but she is also the Silver Dragon King.