Beast Control: My Spirit Beast Bloodline Is Overloaded

For the rest of the plot, just write Xiao Bai. The boss of the beast can be the strongest, but the other beasts must also have weight. The rest of the story is like forcibly creating a god.

The only thing I want to know is why there are people with different skin colors and the messy Western countries included in almost 200 photos. If you write a novel, just write a novel, don't write about patriotism, and also include Little Japan and Asan. . He was a cultivator in the world before. Do you think it is reasonable to write about him with a different skin color? .

I have read almost most of the Yuju-ryu novels from Qidian. The plot of this one is really innovative, climax and touching. Whether it is the interaction between people and the beasts, or the description of the beasts' personalities, this book is very good. I ask the author to persevere and at least finish this book!

How did you achieve level 3 with 60,000 words? Is there any book that has been blocked?

The world view is just a handful, so go read more about the so-called secret history of the South China Sea struggle. Confederation or not, centralized power or centralized power, just decide which one, the Guoshiyuan or the Tianshu Pavilion, can represent the ancient Cangyan country. Fighting beasts will betray the country, and assassinating Zhong Nan is even more outrageous. There is also betrayal of the country to the demon clan. Those who don't know better think that the demon clan will not massacre the city. The ancient Cang Yan Kingdom was not fought in the confrontation with the demon clan. The whole so-called high-level struggle is just a patchwork of folk chatter. Big power, maybe I can't say it, but do you know what it is? Don't tell me that big power is big power. Everyone knows that it involves too much. I am filled with the fantasy of being persecuted by the scarecrow I created. It's quite a bit that the failure of a single move is caused by capital, but capital is capital, and you can even use God to do it. The Meaning of Replacement of Capital The only bright spot is the relationship between humans and animals. If it weren't for too many stitches, which are superficial and contradictory, I could still read it. I would like to improve the system of animal control and figure out what you want to write or choose to write. It can be regarded as a qualified and enjoyable article on animal control. The article on animal control must be about animal control＼😭／

There is no need for Spirit Beast to sell chicken wings. The plot is boring and the writing is not good. I suggest you stop it.

They are still selling chicken wings 😅. The protagonist has upgraded and will be very fast in the future. He will have to go on missions more often. Can he take care of the barbecue ingredients? It seems that he comes out for a barbecue suddenly, and there are so many people thinking about it even if he doesn't insist on it every day. It's a little fake. Let's just say that no matter how delicious the food is, you often disappear and you won't miss it if you can't eat it. Is it something that will kill you if you don't eat it? There should be a lot of pet beasts that can breathe fire. Isn't there a real-life beast master in this world? The development is quite simple.

The setting started to become blurry. The setting was not explained clearly at the beginning. Later, when the abandoned bear was taken in, it was said that he wanted to adopt the body of law. The hidden bloodline and polluted bloodline were both average. There was only one main body with low-level bloodline and high, so he wanted to adopt the body of law? The theory of purifying the blood of Niu Niu is also very vague. It feels like adding it randomly, with a success rate of 46%, and the species are different. In the final analysis, Golden Finger is still complicated. The other Shi Yu's book only has one skill proficiency level. This book is about bloodline, law, and mutation, but it can't explain a single concept clearly.

I feel that the greatest use of Bai Ling's luck is to tie up the protagonist, otherwise she would have had the worst luck to get to where she is now. But now it's very frustrating to watch, it feels like she has stolen luck, and I don't know who is the protagonist of this article.

This mysophobia may have gone a bit too far. . Keeping a fox requires Niu Niu's consent. . What does it mean to write like this? .

I've been a bookworm for twenty years, and this poisonous weed made me sick.

The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes. It's the same routine from beginning to end, and the fighting is just the same, it's all about competition. He also said that he wanted to develop in a stable way, and then ran around after being in the limelight.

The crisis of genocide is just around the corner, and they are only focused on fighting for power. If the protagonist doesn't kill all the masterminds of these forces, it would be too cowardly, and there is no need to watch it.

From the very beginning of the beast-control article to the following June chapter about the intervention of Tiandu forces, I felt that the poisonous points in this book began to become constant, and various inappropriate operations that were not in line with the operation of the entire country began to emerge (I suspect that the author has no general outline, and kind of writes the plot wherever he thinks) 1. High-level shaping: The writing of the Monster Tide chapter is very messy, and the enemies are still fighting among themselves after being hit in the face; once the backbone of the National Master is dead, other high-level officials seem to have lost their minds and all want power, as if a dog owner is gone and his dogs are all fighting for a bone. He didn't care at all that he was surrounded by jackals who wanted to occupy and annex this family; 2. Shaping the national structure: Tiandu's power is supreme, and other regions are inferior; power groups are divided into Tianshu Pavilion, four major families, Guoshiyuan, Spiritual Academy, major regional forces, and hunters The guild (which has the most efficient ability to kill foreign enemies but can be easily disbanded); has no unity. Only a strong national advisor can count as a country. An incompetent national advisor is just a big piece of fat waiting to be annexed by others; 3. Plot line shaping: one word to describe it - chaos! The monthly ticket sales for this book started to decline in July, and everyone felt frustrated watching it; you could just go the normal route and fight overseas, but I don't see the point of writing about a protagonist who is at level 40 and has to fight a level 80 war. It can only be said that there is no overall outline at all. I compiled it wherever I thought. Now, the demon clan has temporarily gone offline and the god clan has emerged. Looking back on the previous plot, the demon clan is about to be exterminated in front of us, and the gods are unblocked in the back. What country can have no brains and still engage in internal strife? Totally unreasonable. 4. Maybe skip and read the follow-up, hoping to write a good death for Niu Niu, Little Fox and Big White Bear. (I don't have any hope for the plot line, I just want to see a good ending for my favorite pet beast)

The world view is a bit strange. . In the modern extraordinary era, there is not even an education system? Just 3 years of literacy education, and then rely on self-study. Entering the academy is so expensive that even ordinary spiritual masters can't get in?

This setting of the God Clan is very unreasonable. It is right to respect its monsters. It is impossible to contract a phoenix to become a phoenix clan. It is still human in nature. The discussion among the big bosses of the clan should be where a bunch of phoenixes are discussing. It is right that human beastmasters are just vassals. Then the massacre of the human race is outrageous. It's like you go out to serve as a soldier, and then come back to slaughter your fellow villagers. They are all elites absorbed from the human race. Who hasn't chosen any relatives yet, right?

It's procrastinating, even verbose, and written in trivial matters. Even the beginning is okay, but it's 100 chapters and it's not level 20 yet, and there's no contracted second spirit beast.

I was very happy to see more than 140 w words, but when I entered the comment area, I was dumbfounded. I received a flood of negative comments. The key is that they were all well-founded criticisms. I can't stop it.

After doing this for a long time, I still didn't kill the Gu family. I looked really useless. I just gave up.

It's an average beast-control novel that starts well, but falters in the middle and later stages. The collision of major forces and the conflict between races are all poorly written. I read the first part slowly and skipped the second part. The high-level combat power is also unclear, and it's very sketchy. The arcs of the characters are also unclear. Not enough. The main character is completely flat in the later stage and has no soft uses. He is a pure tool. See other comments about the advantages. I am too lazy to say more. I am very disappointed because it is another good book. I didn't expect it to be too small. I can only say that there is a reason for the limited exemption 🙄

There is a problem with the setting. In this setting, beast masters are really useless. They rely entirely on beast master talents and cannot practice. There is no sense of existence in the whole story. They just rely on beast upgrades and feedback. They have no self-protection ability. If this person is targeted, he will die. If you really fight, who will face you one-on-one and a sneak attack will disappear. In such a huge disadvantage, the human race is still colluding with foreign enemies to kill its own people. It is a miracle that this country can exist.

The plot surrounding Bai Ling becomes more and more poisonous the more I watch it, what is it that good luck brings you, and then all the benefits are given to Bai Ling? So what kind of secret place (? Or what?) Can only be entered by Bai Ling, but the protagonist cannot. I really don't understand why I'm writing about this if the benefits don't belong to the protagonist. Then later, the Imperial Master wanted to accept Bai Ling as his apprentice, and he talked about luck and lack of vision. With such an awesome identity, why not give it to the protagonist. Then Bai Ling has become a reserve member of the next national division. Who is the protagonist? The National Preceptor is also weird. He doesn't let the protagonist become the next National Preceptor, but also asks the protagonist to protect Bai Ling, and then promises benefits, and gives the protagonist a Dragon Transformation Technique, which can be used three times, and then the place you see has been used once to protect Bai Ling. The benefits given by the co-author should still be used when protecting Bai Ling, right? What kind of national teacher? It's just so stupid. It issues a mission to the protagonist, and you use it first and pay later. When you issue the mission, you say that you will be rewarded based on the protagonist's completion. Damn it, you're here to get the protagonist for nothing.

I wrote about how Pig's Foot broke some war chess game, and then wrote about the war in the Southern Territory. I thought I was going to destroy all the power in Tiandu, but Pig's Foot was so smart in the early stage, but when I met Zhong Nan, I was led away by the nose. It's 5202 years old and I have to write a tear-jerking scene for a supporting character. Then there's the God Clan. They've been causing trouble all over the world, and they're still enduring it. The God Clan is always quarreling with heaven and earth. What about Tianjie Mountain 3.0? They had a fight with Gu Ning. The fight with the God Clan wasn't as good as the one with the God Clan. If you want to write about it, just write about it. But the God Clan is still treating the whole thing differently.

When I saw that the imperial beast was an ox, I thought of an up on Douyin named Chengji who had been showing off his affection for the ox during the summer vacation.

I could still see the map in the early stage when I was still young, and then five countries suddenly appeared. There was no trace of them during the battle between monsters and beasts, and there was a bubble after the battle. The most ridiculous thing is the Protoss, which is equivalent to creating a father for yourself, serving you good food and drinks, and letting people poop and pee on your head. What is the purpose? Oh, save the seeds for you. No matter how cheap a person is, he can't reach this level.

Go, go, go, it's a good read~ Come on, come on

All I can say is that it is very awesome. If I could update dozens or hundreds of chapters in a day, I would definitely not talk about the plot.

The author can fix the price problem

The first part is okay, but the second part is a bit off.