Lords: from Ashes to Salary King

But it has no special features, and it does not show the special advantages of the soul/fire transfer series of troops, or the bonuses obtained from the difference in rules. Now the protagonist's route can be replaced by any low-cost arms, such as undead/golems/elemental creatures, and the plot development will be almost the same. I look forward to showing more obvious features of the transfer fire/soul travel in the future.

After reading about ten chapters, let me share my feelings. Advantages: 1. The first chapter started well. I wanted to leave when Yin Yang came over, but he passed by very normally. To be honest, it was quite normal and not annoying. Second, the protagonist doesn't have any deep hatred or anything, which is rare. He feels aggrieved in various ways before he gets to the point, which is pretty good. Disadvantages: Logically there is a problem with family. What is family? A family is a force that seeks survival and development together through blood ties. As long as the value of a force's existence and survival factors are important, it will not treat the children of the victims well. Otherwise, what do people think? This kind of behavior that is not conducive to unity is illogical.

And the setting of a non-Emirati protagonist can only disgust people.

Nb After returning to the city, I sold some things in bulk, bought a key, bought a knight profession, and prepared supplies. I wrote 20 chapters on these and haven't finished yet. I'm really good at it.

Investigation object: "Lord: From Ashes to Salary King"-male protagonist-[Lin Feng] Investigation result: [Reincarnation] Judgment basis: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, investigates and adds information to the time-travelers' time-travel situations. With the occupation of recording, it aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all the worlds know in advance the traveling conditions of the travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast travel information inquiry services If there are any mistakes, Wanwang will correct me ——Feast of All Souls Zhenjun Stay on March 18, 2025

Others put them on the shelves because they have wonderful plots and keep people interested. The author is a deviant. It would be okay if he just released the set world view, but it is all Che Lulu's words repeatedly said.

Um, how should I put it, the beginning was fine, but why did it suddenly turn into an adventure when there were only a dozen or so pictures? A troll spoke in a polite manner, what the hell, is this still a troll? There is also the part about chanting the incantation. If you feel embarrassed, just remove the chanting. Just talk about the fireball technique, the holy wall, etc., Isn't it good? All in all, even though the writing was a bit dramatic, it was quite embarrassing for the viewers.

Author, your main plot is that the protagonist kills everyone, isn't it a behind-the-scenes story? The last few chapters have been all about explaining the background of Game of Thrones and adding their own narration. The scenes where the protagonist appears are less than 100 words long. I paid money to read what you wrote here, why not read the original work myself. If you continue like this, you will lose many readers.

It's okay. I suggest the author remember to post pictures of the military units. You can post pictures of some important protagonists or supporting characters.

Many peripheral books about Black Souls emphasize that the main reason in the Black Souls world is that there is no new world energy. There were originally trees but they were burned down by greedy fires. If there is a new source of world energy left, the world of First Fire will still be very powerful. I hope it will be well written.

It's pretty good. I feel like the setting and plot are serious. But the subject matter is difficult and I'm worried that I won't be able to persevere in the future. I feel this is the best one written on this subject so far.

I saw the protagonist return to the main city for a while, and it took almost 10 chapters just to buy equipment. It's obvious that the author doesn't know what to write. According to the current situation, shouldn't we find dungeons to quickly travel to accumulate resources? In this process, we can introduce the world view instead of introducing it through water alone. Not every copy needs to be written out. If you really want to write a plot, shouldn't you look for war-themed dungeons, such as Lord of the Rings or Warcraft? Not to mention that there is a god in the dungeon, but there isn't one behind you. There is an audience for Japanese fantasy wars even if I don't write about them. Isn't it obvious that I am not writing about horseback riding and slashing? In addition, I don't know if the author of the first copy thought that the dragon summoned by the protagonist and the bonus brought by the protagonist's war attribute should be stronger than the troll general, instead of being killed. When playing low-level dungeons based on the background of the protagonist, it would be easier for ordinary lords to fight at level 1 than level 2, but it would be more difficult to fight at level 3. Elite lords should fight at level 4. This obviously belittles the background strength of the force.

You write this in one day and take my monthly ticket to ask for leave. Are you ashamed?

Like the title, let's reduce the content in the Eternal City a little, or simplify it.

This book seems to have recently become an in-depth interpretation of "A Song of Ice and Fire"? There are many plot details or background settings that can be quickly explained in the introduction text, which is enough to support your plot. As a result, you couldn't wait to use five or six chapters to explain one of the protagonist's guesses. Why am I paying to watch you write a paper? The funniest thing is that after analyzing and analyzing, I finally came to the conclusion that it doesn't matter. Whatever the reason is, it doesn't affect the protagonist. Anyway, he is strong enough. It's really a mouthful of blood and I don't know where to spit it out.

Just like the title, it's too watery. There are not many words in one chapter. There are more than 30 chapters and it takes less than 40 minutes to read. I still need to keep reading. And I have absolutely no desire to vote monthly.

. . . So after a long time of fussing, the key to the world won't be used for a while, right... The pace is too slow, and the plot doesn't advance at all.

The main world is well written, but the mission world is too one-sided and cannot hit the reader's G-spot. Logically speaking, lord novels can be straightforward and straightforward about attributes + skills. Don't be secretive about the characteristics and effects. Everyone is here to read the enjoyable articles. Only those who enjoy reading can get monthly votes and recommendation votes. Otherwise, they can only be kept on the bookshelf.

It was pretty good at first, but then it didn't taste that good anymore.

There aren't many updates, and the content is still the same as if you haven't read it yet.

Will it be updated once a day once it's on the shelves? ! TNND

The rhythm is very good, keep it up, author

Brother, do you still have such lords of the heavens? I've read this one and that one. War Lords. Are there any others?