My Peninsula Star Girlfriend

I started writing on March 7th, and it was cool on April 3rd. As expected, I didn't last more than a month 😄😄

😏 Guess how long the milk tea book will last this time? A. One month B. Two months C. Three months

Can you persevere? The portfolio is so scary😰

The female is 31 years old and the male protagonist is 23. It always feels like you'll just find a good guy and get married. Women's best years are given to others. Women age very quickly after 30, regardless of how well they take care of themselves. Age cannot be compensated by maintenance. Take a look at those photos of celebrities on the Internet with her original camera without makeup. Even if she is 31 years old, she is still in very good condition. I think she will still be in good condition even when she is 40 years old. What about after 40? At that time, the male protagonist was 32, which is the golden age of men. The age difference between the male and female protagonists is really a big flaw.

What the hell kind of plot is this? I feel numb from watching it

After seeing the age difference between the sisters in Chapter 3, I realized that the author didn't watch much of the variety shows. He asked me to act in the show immediately 🤐 or forget it and stop pursuing it 🤐

Your portfolio is so scary, I don't even dare to pursue it.

There are a few questions that I am unhappy about: First of all, Baicai only knew the male protagonist for 7 days, and then she fell in love with him. Maybe it was because of the author's narration, which made me feel that there was no call between these two people. I had read the book "Artist Neighbor" before. The book is also very fast, but the description is very comfortable and not so abrupt. Like the author, after reading it, only these two were completely lustful, and there was no emotion at all. I suggest the author pay attention to it; Secondly, the male protagonist is 23, Baicai Girl. Girl 26, she has been calling the hero Oppa from beginning to end, and the hero's grandmother has also been calling her grandson. This is wrong, it looks very embarrassing; It would be better to unify the quantity. I suggest that it would be better to use Korean directly for some simple ones, such as Unnie, Oppa, Nu Na, etc.; Finally, there are quite a lot of typos, which quite affects the viewing. I suggest that the author pay attention to small details when writing. Finally, it is really not easy to write about Korean entertainment. Most of it is for love. I also hope that the author can write better and better. Come on 😡😡😡

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Very interesting, please update soon