On a Rainy Night, the School Beauty Knocked on My Door and Begged for Shelter.

It's well written. It feels like I'm reading a suspense novel. It's not very enjoyable. It has nothing to do with the author's label 🤤

The truth that I have been waiting for for so long gives me a very ordinary feeling. The protagonist has been feeling guilty, brooding about this case, and regretting his original behavior, which led to the death of the heroine. My motivation for reading this book: 1. Find the prisoner 2. Want to know Dao was reborn and returned to the past, how should the prisoner be convicted if he had not committed a crime? 3. I wanted to see the protagonist kill the prisoner 4. I wanted to see the protagonist save those who regretted the past It turned out that it took a long time. It was a family problem. The heroine wanted to commit suicide, and a series of events led to her being accidentally killed by her sister. . . I feel like there is an unknown fire and I don't know where to vent it.

It's too fast to put this on the shelves.

😰 This is the first time I have seen so few people. Other authors have commented on it themselves.

The other chapters have eighteen or nineteen pages, but this chapter only has ten pages, which is a bit watery.

This book looks like a pink bubble with darkness and horror behind it. It's so nervous to read, 😒

In the end, I was a little disappointed that Su Yaxi didn't die😔

I feel that the pacing is not bad, I can only say it is a mess. I endured reading the confession part all the way. Overall, it is a sweet love story, but the whole process is too fast, and the details are written in detail but it feels very rushed. It can be read without thinking and boring, but it is not very interesting if you follow it for a long time.

Let me summarize first: This is a high-quality daily novel about reborn love I like the author's construction of the protagonist and heroine's character and relationship because it is very logical. This is the most relevant book among the many new books I have read in the past six months. The clues are all buried, and several main lines have just been unfolded, which looks pretty good. The male protagonist's extraordinary enthusiasm as a teenager who has just returned from youth and the female protagonist's inferiority and shyness create a wonderful spark. At present, I think there is no problem with this. I don't know why there are so few people. Maybe it's because the book has just opened. Some shortcomings that I don't know are considered shortcomings: Firstly, the male protagonist later felt that he was a little too integrated into the identity of a high school student. If it weren't for the fact that sometimes you can't tell that he was a professionally trained adult, I think some of the emotions of teenagers in him need to be weakened. Secondly, the heroine did not give a reason for going to the hero's house at the beginning. I thought that the hero's mother's heart was overflowing to the point of nausea. If I hadn't had a lot of free time today and thought that there wouldn't be many chapters anyway, so I would just give up on it. I don't know if anyone would feel the same way, so I would like to mention it specifically. I don't think there is any problem with the explanation of this later. The male protagonist is not the heart of the Holy Mother, and the female protagonist has enough use to come to the male protagonist's house. It's logical and I think it's well conceived. It's just that as a reader, the first few chapters were a bit confusing. The above is only the reader's impression when reading. Personally, I sometimes even feel that this is an inevitable part of rebirth writing. I always feel that the people who write it are trapped in the emotions of their youth, and even if they are trying to blend in with the surrounding environment, it feels vaguely unreasonable. In short, putting aside some minor flaws that seem to be absent, this book can still be read smoothly and comfortably. It is just too short. The author should update it quickly! ! !

Come on! The author keeps writing, we are all optimistic about you! ! ! !

I'm wondering if there will be any extras later, the kind that you can only watch if you subscribe fully.

Come on, author, the writing is pretty good.

It's beautiful, if you like it, don't go into the palace, I'll give you the tickets