Bestowing Blessings Across the Heavens

I really dislike Demon Slayer. The plot lacks originality; it's just about killing all the demons. The main storyline is too clear, making fanfiction less interesting unless someone specifically likes certain characters. I bet your fanfiction's stats won't be great.

Is this book going for a comedic style? Or what? Also, could you make Muzan into a humanoid firearm? After all, the female boss Muzan is quite beautiful.

Is the author writing to make money or simply to express their thoughts? The first couple of volumes were alright, at least many people had read them. But things went wrong starting with "The Great Gatsby." Large sections of existing plot and characters are used without any introduction, completely relegating the author to a niche audience. Who writes books like this? Are you still wondering why nobody's reading them? ⊙⊙

Of course, apart from these issues, there's nothing else. Why did you fail so badly?

Gintama: Overall, it's not bad. The character development and plot in the early and middle stages fit the comedic and satirical style well. The protagonist transforms from an ordinary person into a swordsmanship master in a year. However, it lacks a sense of realism.

Judging from the synopsis, Demon Slayer has an infinite amount of blood. Why not just put the blood into the sea? Since it's infinite, the whole Earth would be covered in blood, and the entire atmosphere would be filled with blood. Wouldn't that be fun?

Main character picture

First of all, let's be clear: the author is capable of writing good stories. The protagonist is charismatic and has a great personality. The endings of the various story arcs are quite satisfying. However, the author tends to use a technique of building suspense before revealing the true essence of the story.

It's a stretch to make Shimizu Kagami Hokage; he killed so many people.

The Naruto arc's plot and dialogue are truly excellent, but the pacing is problematic. It's slow at the beginning and suddenly accelerates in the middle. Many potentially exciting plot points are abruptly ended. It feels like a waste of the creativity and character development. I've seen many Naruto fanfics that create such a stunning plot, but this is rare.