The Outcast: Lu Linglong Begs Me for a Massage from the Start

First of all, the writing is a bit unclear about what the protagonist does. He said something incomprehensible to Lu Jin, and then he was protected by the Lu family for no apparent reason. Also at the beginning, the protagonist's predecessor was beaten to death by Quan Xing, then Quan Xing was caught and executed by the company, and then the protagonist was resurrected. In the end, Quan Xing threatened the company to kill Quan Xing at will? Killing Quanxing means he is innocent by default? And the company also blamed the protagonist afterwards? It made me look confused😅

It's too wordy, and many of the plots are too blunt.

As soon as I saw the title of the book, I went to the comment section to see what the great sages Akaashi had to say😏

After reading the comics recently, I finally understood the meaning of the opening. Aliens interfere with ordinary people and follow the law. When the people involved are aliens, there is no death penalty. The maximum penalty is the destruction of meridians, so the opening is awkward. The company's trial results are like setting a precedent for the death penalty.

No, buddy, let me know where you are.

Catch-up reading is very important for new books😭

It's not cool at all. The writing is not bad. Write a cool article and let us know what's wrong? Still want to grow slowly? Want to write a long story? I'm running out of patience

I subscribed to some of Nm and drank it. It was all water. Liao Zhong also said that he would be given three days to see Chen Duo's illness. What next? I thought it was to treat Chen Duo's illness and then go to play games together and massage him to improve his strength. Now he's talking about a sect that plays drugs. You can't push the plot like this. I don't see how much improvement is made by improving the strength. Instead, the protagonist's information keeps spreading, and then the protagonist finds his own source of information. You decipher one chapter, decipher the key points of 2 sentences, and the rest are all water, and it makes it so tense... It is better to just write a relaxing daily novel, which can improve the strength, and position yourself as a female. You honor the senior brother, build a network, and finally go to the entire Chinese medicine center for massage. If you don't improve the strength, who will improve the strength, and make a group of urgent...

I hope the protagonist's strength improves quickly, otherwise the plot will start to look like crap if it's not strong enough. In the original novel, there were too many masters at the beginning of the plot.

In chapter 54, the protagonist's strength is a bit low, and the plot has already begun. . . The protagonist is a bit bad