People Are in the Night Market, Activating the Life Script Reader

A daily writing about darkness everywhere. Can we ordinary people survive outside?

If you don't call the police when something happens, do you think it's magical or not? You have to solve it yourself

Nowadays, urban novels are all about everyday prose, who still writes about such warm-heartedness🙂

The protagonist you wrote is too cheap. The novel's routines are also too deliberate. It's not even trash to talk about, and it's uncomfortable to watch. Abandoned!

If you have this kind of cheat, don't be a bounty hunter or detective, and waste your time setting up a stall.

I don't know what the meaning of writing like this is. Let's just drive the screws.

The writing is too deliberate. There are so many bullshit around ordinary people. They happen here and there.

The city where the protagonist is located won't be the Chinese version of Gotham City, right?

Write well, don't be sloppy, and have some suggestions for cheats and outline directions Cheatfinger functions 1. The cheats are well developed and have great potential. Upgrading allows you to look directly without limiting your eyes. You can search for people in the nearby range, slowly increase the range, and use deviation values to make up for information~for example, you can use a photo, a video, and the last paragraph of description~~You can add some restrictions to locking 2. The star rating can be perfectly set. Each person's star rating can be regarded as his own effort value. For example, Asan Mo Laoxian may only have 2 stars, but Brother Shengtian Banzi in the public name is properly 5 stars. There are too many similar characters. Status is only a stage, and personal efforts are the only way to change the star rating~ 3. You can add some restrictions to give the protagonist a driving force to continue in the night market, such as selling system recipe food in the night market to give causality points, or eliminate the causality points that affect others~ 4. In terms of the main plot, based on the remote lock after upgrade, you can use the intelligence organization to take several main routes. Anyway, you have bound people, don't do big things or bad things, no one will care about you, and there will be early warnings if something goes wrong. Choose a detective: Find people, find things, solve cases, provide clues Be a stickman: This will blur the direction of efforts and affect decisions. What I want to write more about is the content. The protagonist is curious, and then locks in some TV and news stories, and there will be more plots to write. The deviation value is used, the mall has been customized, use it, and advance the plot~Many books will become cold without the deviation value in the later stage After reading it for so long, I just wrote some ~~The overall balance between daily life and the plot of Goldfinger usage is good, this book still has potential~

It has an old-fashioned taste, a bit stiff in some places.

The writing is messy, and I have too little life experience.

You can write it sincerely. Good luck to the author.

It's so good that I couldn't help but stay up all night to read it. Good luck, author.

I don't know if it's dark or not, but I can't get into the role of the male protagonist because suddenly one day I have this golden finger, and I don't care about his life or death. It's like the trolley problem. Regardless of whether there is anyone in the other lane or whether you are going to be crushed to death, I will just leave it alone without touching your lane change pole. It is none of my business.

I don't know what to say, I just feel a little awkward looking at the text.

It's an interesting setting, but the protagonist's handling method has many flaws. It would be nice if this book was written so that the protagonist, Goldfinger, can find problems, but can only use conventional means to deal with them.