Hogwarts: the Eye Wizard

The biggest highlight is the protagonist's stance against Voldemort. Other fan protagonists have done it, nothing special. The pace is fast and there are few details. It doesn't write much about what the protagonist does in his private time, but instead promotes the plot and the actions of the characters. It feels like it will collapse in the middle.

The four members of the Plundering Four are all beasts except Lupine. They traveled to 71 years and had to lick Potter. It's disgusting!

I came here after reading the last book, but it turned out that the gap between the opening chapter and the previous book is too big. If it is really a naughty child, the so-called siding of the protagonist is okay, but the protagonist is time-traveled, and is it not embarrassing for someone who is decades old to talk about this? Moreover, the previous book was so otherworldly, so there is such a big difference in adding original characters to this book so early!

The Gang of Four nanny article is boring. There is so much content about a Death Eater or their descendants who didn't kill them.

Can the protagonist kill more Death Eaters? For example, Voldemort kills one, and the protagonist kills ten Death Eaters. Pure-blood families will be wiped out if they dare to take sides, leaving a clear sky. Everyone is an orphan. There is no need to coerce the Death Eaters, right?

From the introduction, you can tell that this is a Potter-licking book.

I laughed in the comment section. I can only say that fans who have tried their best to whitewash Snape have become more and more funny in recent years. It is wrong for my parents not to lick Snape, and they also set up Snape and Lily. It is really disgusting to me. When my parents come back, it is not Lily who chooses between Snape and James, but Snape chose between dark magic and Lily Ever since he was in first grade, he knew more about dark magic than the senior students. From the time he joined the small group of dark wizards, and from the time he chose dark magic, he was already on the side of evil. The Death Eaters have killed so many people without seeing him regret it? Who overheard the prophecy of the coming of the savior and reported it to Voldemort? When Voldemort hurts him, he will know it hurts Doesn't it hurt that Mrs. Longbottom's son and daughter-in-law are crazy? Isn't it painful for Neville to witness the torture of his parents with his own eyes? Resolute and brave people still walk on the bright road despite suffering and don't cry out for pain. Why do you, a terrorist, cry out about pain?

The author came from your last book, and they were really disappointed when they saw the protagonist licking James.

The more I write, the more I come back, disappointed. There is no shortage of blood literature like yours, so why go the old way of Naruto? Does the prince, general Xiang Ning have the kind?

The same paragraph is written over and over again in different ways, and half of a chapter is written nonsense.

Are you a eunuch? Eunuch, please tell me so that I can take it off the shelves!

What a nonsense, forcing myself to participate in the Wizarding War. And the timeline isn't right either.

I still like a colder protagonist, but I don't like such a passionate protagonist.

Why didn't you write the last book?

So, your last book entered the palace 😅

Sure enough, it's still unfinished. By the way, why don't you write the next one?

I've wanted to see this timeline for a long time. It's always been the same year as Harry. It's so boring.

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