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Both the pacing and the way the settings are developed are very good, but the details start to be a bit inappropriate after acquiring extraordinary powers. The potions and blacksmithing that the protagonist does not want to major in are written in too much detail. Some unimportant NPC dialogues are too many, and the protagonist's pretentious scenes are so many that it makes people feel sick Next, the personality of the current number one villain is very good and very charming, but the following scenes It's very boring. First, arrange a racist to be the mini-boss of the next stage (strictly speaking, from the perspective of the people of the sky, he has done nothing wrong at all, so what's the point of creating a confrontation like this?), And then the plot during the entrance... It's really low to the core of the earth, and it can even be said that banning that chapter may be better than releasing it I hope the author will carefully plan and restore the plot to the previous level.

There is a female protagonist, I chase her 😍😍😍

It's finally here, come on, Lailai

The writing is okay, but the plot is too average. What the "Jin Yiwei" saw from the perspective was not a hero, but an "untouchable" who killed the "Jin Yiwei". The protagonist actually wanted a reward and directly believed the person he killed. All clever. And it was such a coincidence that despite all the misunderstandings, an uncle was enough, and everything came to pass. The white dragon happened to appear, and when she entered the forest and found danger, she still had to go forward. It happened that she was about to transform into a dragon but had not yet transformed into a dragon. It happened that the protagonist killed her, and she happened to be a high-ranking man. It happened that she did not become a tombstone but a "fruit". Everyone is a fool except the protagonist.

Maybe new people will come to see it after it is recommended on the Internet, and they are curious about which extraterritorial devil this is Lai Lai is from Mao Station. He used to write Jojo Infinite Flow Fans The main works are "Infinite Creed", "Infinite Gospel", etc. Just search "Levatin"

Laolai, promise me you will survive this time

How to put it this way, when I saw the title and introduction, I thought it was a road movie story like Prince's Revenge, that kind of fantasy world where everyone lives on an empty island, and then the protagonist travels to the past with nothing, and is received and settled by the warm and kind people there. Then after a while, the Dragon Whisperer degenerates and transforms into a dragon to destroy the world where the protagonist is. After the disaster, he unexpectedly awakens the ability to grow into immortality and harvest other people's souls. While traveling and fighting monsters to upgrade, he collects intelligence to prepare for revenge, and during the journey, he gradually reveals the truth about the world view and the power of the Dragon Whisperer. This book was amazing at the beginning, but then it became strange when I met the supporting character who was about to transform into a dragon. The tone of the story turned to plotting and plotting. I originally thought it was an adventure story, but it turned out to be a story about a hero plotting his power. As it was written, I felt that there was no sense of immersion. The motive of killing the dragon was insufficient, not interesting, and there was no novelty in the fantasy world. It was a pity that it was tasteless in reading.

The previous book Eighty Days (called Substitute Creed on Mao. Com) was so good that I won't write about it anymore because I think it's inspiring. The author said he was "simply unconvinced" and "he felt he could write better" before he wrote sixty chapters and told me that his grades were not good. What grade do you want for chapter sixty? He told me that he had used the style before, but he couldn't accept it. After reading it for the second time, he found that it was taken off the shelf, and he started a new book. It took a new track that he had never tried before. At first glance, it was all psychological activities. After looking at the previous revisions, I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I thought I'd give it a try and wait for the author to adjust it, and when I came back, I saw that it was already a eunuch. I was very speechless, very speechless, very speechless. If you are perfectionist, you cannot finish writing a book first. After finishing it, slowly put it on the shelf, and make minor corrections if there are any problems. I prefer not. You said I didn't listen, I thought I wrote it perfectly, but then I cut it again.

Instead of writing novels, why not find a class? There are so many eunuchs here.

I did a little research and found that Qidian seems to have a term called "work interaction value". You can just check in every now and then when you think of it, and just send a reply. You don't need to swipe every day or swipe continuously. Just let it happen. Thank you all.

The evaluation is that it is better to work part-time. I want to make money by writing novels but I can't finish the novel. How can I accumulate fans and writing skills? It depends on your starting point. These two books have been written for a while and then stopped.

Give him the framework of the original work. He can play very well within this framework and write wonderfully. But let him play freely, and he will be at a loss and constrained. Why do you think this is?

It's a simple truth, the more you cut, the harder it is to get started. Will the plot overhaul have too much impact? So why not think about it when drafting the outline. Two things are most taboo when writing online articles: 1. Being too bookish. I don't understand that online articles are essentially consumer goods. 2 is a lot of unfinished work. The outline was rough and I didn't think about it carefully. I wrote the article with enthusiasm, and ended up with frequent appendixes due to various reasons. Good things are not famous, and bad things are spread thousands of miles is the most appropriate label for the Internet. Hopefully you learn from your failures instead of taking a short break to prepare for the next failure.

You two have a fight

The results were not good and there were many negative reviews. To be honest, I can understand my lack of motivation, but I don't want to return to my strengths. If I continue to be original in the future, I'm afraid it will still be a Western fantasy. There is an indescribable feeling. That may be wrong. From my understanding, it is not that simple to jump out of your comfort zone and directly switch to other subjects. That was the case with Jiuwu from the Red Mansion. Your protagonists all have personalities, strong will, and strong execution ability, but it is difficult to follow the outline. As you write, you will be unable to follow due to various reasons such as grades and evaluations. I don't even know if you have an outline at all. Let's talk about the last point. I feel like I really don't have much ambition in the Western Fantasy Zone. Although the pressure is low and no one is taking the papers, this also means that the readership is small. If you can't reach the top few, then you really won't be able to achieve good results.

I knew you couldn't keep the two ounces of meat from your crotch. Fortunately, you bought it after it was put on the shelves. Otherwise, you would be deceived into subscribing like this book.

The flavor of Granblue Fantasy and Final Fantasy is so strong, but the author's stitching is pretty good.

Authors should relax their demands on themselves. Sometimes they must survive before they can talk about their ideals. It is good for authors to spend a lot of time revising articles, but if they have no time to update, how can they survive?

You're still a newcomer when you return, right?

Not a black-skinned sports student

The dialogue is long, and the dialogue is not concise enough. A lot of useless words are added, which will not make the paragraph more gorgeous, but will make reading tiring.

I listen to novels, and this book gave me the feeling that 8 is too damn pretentious. Don't like 88

Damn it, Levatin, why did you have some too?

Didn't he say in the group that he would make a living by writing books? Just this, this, this?

The other book is not by the Pope, but it feels like it was written by this same person. The time is right, and it has been eunuch these days. From now on, anyone who sees slow heat with a heavy background will suspect it is him and block him.

I don't know when I got this book? I just saw it today. It's been three months since I was a eunuch.

The endless repetition of pretentious and elegant nonsense is ridiculous and it takes up so much space. It's too long. It's as wet and smelly and long as an old lady's foot wraps.

The work "The Elder Scrolls: The Witch Strategy Guide" visited and borrowed the treasure, thank you. The author's writing is very good, it has been added to favorites and likes 👍.