How Come You Really Ascended?

Why does Mao Daily Guide always push these newcomers' works to me? Obviously I click ❌ every time

I have been criticized a lot recently The author is a newbie. Although I have read online articles for many years, this is the first time I have written a book The major poisonous points are definitely not the abuse of the protagonist, and I don't like reading them myself. Some plot twists and character images are blunt. I really have limited writing power and cannot achieve the desired effect, but I have to write in order to advance the plot After all, there is no There is no storytelling in ups and downs. If written step by step, it will be completely flooded. Some readers have suggested that the world view is unreasonable. In fact, it's up to me. There is actually a design in the outline, but the foreshadowing is not good enough. The first sixty chapters are not well reflected. Let's vent my anger, there will be at least ten chapters, and there will be more updates in the future After sixty chapters, it is almost the end of the first volume, and many unexplained places will begin to be wrapped up. I am not sure if I can write it well, but I promise to do my best here If you have any opinions, please tell me here. If you can change it, I will change it. By the way, I would like to know which part the readers who have read so far like the most and which part I think. The worst part is the worst, but I will use my strengths and avoid weaknesses in the future Since I started the book, as a newcomer, I never thought that so many readers would be willing to read the stories I wrote, and I am so grateful Even if one day I am really criticized to the point that I can't continue writing, as long as there are still people who like this story, I will insist on finishing the book After all, after creating these characters, I should give them an ending Thank you again, fish

Does the level of spiritual veins correspond to the realm of cultivation? The protagonist feels that the first-level spiritual pulse is not strong enough just after condensing his energy. The worst in daily practice is the third-level spiritual pulse. How many levels of spiritual pulse training does Bailu Zhenren need to use to achieve breakthrough and ascension 🤔

6 You're done right after you take a break, right?

Is it the Xiu Chat style?

The author's writing is good, the plot is good, it's worth watching

It's quite interesting. Don't send me monthly tickets and rewards 🙂

Take your time! This is only a few chapters,

Can't people who ascended to the immortal world come down? Not even helping the world of cultivation🤔

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Try to keep updating as much as possible these days, don't worry it won't be interrupted 😓

I'm curious, is there any way to store 100 million immortal dollars without interest?

See you in a month 🙂 We threw it on our bookshelf.

Chapter 11 shows how good Taoism is and how bad Buddhism is, as if cultivating immortals is the exclusive domain of Taoism.

If nothing else, I was really drawn to these first two chapters. If you write it well, I will definitely book it all for you!

Where is Shennong!

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I was flipping through the bookshelf and suddenly came across this book, only to realize that it has been almost a year since it was finished. Are you not going to start a new book?

Have some

It looks pretty good so far 🙂 The two worlds are about to collide, which should be the breaking point.

Try to drag the climax point to the point where it is stuck on the shelf. The two worlds are about to collide, I'm quite looking forward to it. The latest content begins to reveal the history of the fiasco. I feel that the news that the protagonist, a little Karami, can know, is equivalent to the knowledge that most people in the cultivation world can know. With the "historical conspiracy theory", the tone of the book seems to have begun to become a bit cruel, giving people a sense of crisis. It is a bit different from the happy atmosphere at the beginning. I feel that it is better to slowly lay the groundwork and let the protagonist discover some clues on his own. Then it is actually good not to disclose the content of cultivation to the public, to prevent those who "violate the prohibition with force". There is also a lot less fighting for resources. This seems to be a restraint on ordinary people, but is it not a kind of protection?       ， I've seen it all the way from Miao Miao. If you update it as soon as it's on the shelves, I'll definitely give you the first order. Come on.

When will it be released? Will there be any updates?

Does this book have a female protagonist? Single and more than nothing?

The writing is okay, it's not uncomfortable to watch, and it's casual. I've never read books with few fans before, but it's still okay

After reading a few chapters, I can see that the thinking is very good, the writing style is relaxed, and the logic is relatively lacking, but this is the part where it is easier to improve. Generally speaking, it is suitable for readers who want to read ten lines at a glance, and it can be read in Daodu.