What to Do If You Travel Through Time and Become an Adventurer in a Fantasy World

The author should change his focus and write about online games or video games. The writing does not feel like an adventure in another world. It feels like playing a game on a live broadcast or playing a virtual online game.

First of all, you are doing a time-travel live broadcast. Unless the time-travel live broadcast is already bad in the protagonist's world, otherwise as long as you find it, isn't it better than those garbage live broadcasts, especially when you are desperate, those water friends won't spend money to add points to you? It's just a gift of 100 yuan.

Usually new books just save twenty or thirty chapters and publish them. No matter who reads the four chapters, it's hard to click in... It's a waste of exposure.

The 4-skill setting is so outrageous. Nowadays, few people writing about Pokémon have 4-skills.

The setting of the Gesha novel is that most of the adventurers are poor people without jobs. Because the war has led to the decline of people's livelihood, they have to take risks, because if they don't take risks, they will starve to death. Therefore, new adventurers basically cannot afford armor and helmets (the overturn is because most adventurers have little training and just die to consume excess population), and the protagonist can only afford to wear worn-out and inferior armor, so the animation settings are greatly changed. The setting of the author's novel is the same as that of the Gesha animation. He directly writes the alien world as a fairy tale. There is no daily necessities for adventure, and there is no maintenance of weapons and armor (only infinitely durable equipment is available in the game). There are only game-like upgrades to become stronger. Of course, this is also a common problem with this alien world online novel, and there are basically no good ones written in this regard.

It's a cool article, your strength is improved And it's live broadcast, you have to have a living, and then become popular, and make people quarrel and buy gifts in the live broadcast room

There are a few scenes in the original book that are too flawed to watch, but your writing about the Middle Ages is really okay.