Rebirth in 1991, Stormy Shikumen

It's not enough to be cool. I want to write about my family's story, but I can't write anything special. The protagonist's character is cowardly. There is also a problem with the setting of a bad student. How did a bad student get into a vocational high school? There is also a 16-year-old who has just returned from Northeast China for two years. Before, he could hardly understand a word of Shanghainese, but now he can speak it so smoothly? The reasons for dropping out are more problematic. Although I was only 12 years old in 1991, I know that there was no self-defense in that era. According to the protagonist's case, even if the other party uses a knife, the protagonist will at least be detained.

The protagonist was 53 years old before the time travel and 18 years old after the time travel. If he returns with the same age, his character, life experience, etc., How can he bring some ways to make a fortune? Even if you are 53 years old and have such a good personality, your audience will not be very popular. You will not be lovable and look very embarrassed. In reality, with a character like this, at most a well-off person will not be able to make a fortune. You don't need to say what will happen in the future.

As long as there are no traps, you can still achieve some results. Shanghainese scenes can be included, but it is best to use them in moderation, otherwise the audience will be too small.

What kind of mess, I don't know what it means, he hammers here and there, and he is still a little loser when he is reborn. Opening a bookstore after rebirth is worse than selling barbecue. How can someone with three melons and two dates raise the start-up capital?

A large number of dialects have too narrow audience area, so they will be withdrawn first.

If you were so cowardly before your rebirth, and you are still cowardly after your rebirth, then your rebirth is not in vain.

In spring sleep, the author is running around everywhere. Not only is it not updated, there is very little content. In the beginning, human beings are inherently good, and the author is a bad guy. If you don't update, I don't like it. Let's see what you do in the future. After smashing the pot and selling the iron, it was still less than a cent and a half. If you update it, I will like it and make a lot of money for you. It has become a habit to like first and then read.

The writing is okay and has the potential to be a masterpiece.

The author doesn't know that it doesn't matter if he writes about business. He can just invest in companies and Internet companies that have been involved in fraud for a long time. It's good to brag, pretend to be cool, and pick up girls. It's good to be a witness of the times. The main thing is to write about the changes of the times and less about family affairs.

The pacing is good, but too little.

There is a little less detail in Shanghai, but it is a bit bold and generous in the north, and it is crooked, the essence of Shikumen, seventy-two tenants 😁

This book is not for us country folk to read.

The writing is mixed and scattered, and there are also personality issues. For a young man of 17.8 Years old, that is not to blame the sky and the address, but to blame the air.

Next time you write a book, you can refer to Rebirth of the Wild Era

Hurry up and put it on the shelves, I want to subscribe! I just like to read stories about the short life of a family in old Shanghai!

I haven't watched it yet, but I'm quite interested in Shanghai Start

After reading it, I feel like the story is inconsistent here and there.

It would be boring to wait until the heat is gone.

Just fight for your own interests when it comes to the house. Thinking about buying it yourself all day is not fun.

The pacing is not good, it is not as good as it needs to be, many unnecessary details are not good enough, and the contradictory rhythm is not very good, it is weird. But it has great potential. Come on, I believe you will become a master of urban literature after writing this book.

Why isn't it updated? Are you not going to continue writing? Come out and explain. Check back every day to see if there are any updates