The Reincarnation of the Eye Begins with the Hyuga Clan

Will it be a disaster and start the game against Akatsuki members?

It turns out to be garbage washed by weasels, disgusting

How dare Yunpi write about Naruto? How dare Danzo, a thirteen-year-old Hyuga clan member, ask him to join Gen? The caged bird represents Hinata's distortion of the attention paid to the Byakugan leakage. The protagonist, a genin, actually leaves the village to perform a mission with Team 7? Just to make fun of the plot, it's outrageous

When I saw Danzo asking the Hyuuga clan to join the family, I was so poisoned that I died. The clan is a caged bird. Controlling the clan means mastering most of the branch members.

Rubbish, he revealed the secret of the Tsangyan after being threatened by Jiraiya. Abuse of the main text

In the opening three-kilometer water break, Tobirama had to worship you as his teacher. He mocked Uchiha Sasuke for no reason and pretended to be righteous. I didn't want to watch it anymore. You even made the protagonist so disgusting, how could you attract readers.

Has the author never read the original work? . . He can't be the author of Yun Hokage, right?

Itachi Uchiha was as good as Madara, and laughed at the fact that Jiraiya was so evil, and Jiraiya's death was not a plot kill. The author went to see Naruto more, the three ninjas were about the same strength, the Raikage, and the Tsuchikage, they were not beyond the Six Paths. The main character is trash.

The patchwork of plot, unprovoked provocations, and bad character are all put together, which is really rare. I haven't seen a fan like this for a long time. The last time was when the editor couldn't think of it and planned to have fun together.

Fireworks into sparks? Are we still going to beat Nohara Rin into Nohara Rin? Several new Naruto books are like this, I feel like there's something wrong with it

To sum up, it's just disgusting, and the writing is the same as 💩

In fact, the Hyuga family has one and only one lineage, otherwise the Rizu twin brothers would not be separated from each other. The same is true if Hinata is not Naruto's wife and Hanabi is still too young, she will also be separated from the family.

Can the kaleidoscope illusion be possessed by the reincarnated eye? These levels of ability are not the same class.

This cloud reader's writing can also appear in the editor's recommendation, it is outrageous enough

The system comes with a training space, and you can gain unlimited experience in Byakugan and other abilities to improve your level. The information given at the beginning is that the protagonist does not practice in the Hyuga clan except for training in the system's training camp. As a result, he is considered a waste of the clan. Combined with the subsequent battle with the Rizu, it can be seen that the experience does not increase in the battle in reality, and there is no hint to gain experience in the subsequent battle in the reality. In summary, only by training in the space provided by Golden Finger can you gain experience. (Additional note: The article mentioned that using the Hyuga family's training method in reality has very little improvement in Byakugan, and the protagonist himself is not willing to practice in reality.) Then the question is, the author designed this system that can continuously become stronger while lying at home, why go out and fight for life and death? Just to add drama? Since you want to join the plot, you should design the system from the beginning so that you can also gain certain experience during real-life battles or have other functions that can be related to reality. Now for some reason, the protagonist suddenly wants to take the chunin exam, is suddenly assigned a mission to leave the village alone, is suddenly attacked by members of the Roots, and suddenly encounters the Akatsuki organization, all of which are inexplicably added to the plot. Summary: The flaws in the design of Goldfinger lead to a disconnect between the protagonist's ability improvement and reality. Development in reality does not help improve his own ability. If there is a problem with the underlying design, it is basically impossible to change it. If it is changed, it will become another book, unless the author has no idea of ​​what to write in the outline.

Let's not talk about anything else. There is one thing that I really don't want to complain about. Even if a water bomb ninjutsu can hit an enemy three kilometers away, water break wave can also hit someone three kilometers away. A high-pressure water cannon with a range of three kilometers?

Seeing that Danzo asked the protagonist of the clan to join the root, you can't stand it. You don't want to think about it. Asking Hinata to send the clan to the root. This is not forcing Hinata to rebel. Originally, people looked down on their own family, so the entire clan split up to protect the clan. Then you sent the most talented ninja of the clan to the root. I'm really convinced. There is no contradiction in writing. Danzo is bad but he is not stupid. I think the author is the other way around.

Why doesn't 7:00 have a function to block the author?

He's like a retarded person. He doesn't want to be Hokage and still makes trouble everywhere. Even three generations are dead. He's still making enemies of the whole world in Konoha. It's just a disease.

I can't stand the second chapter, a 3-kilometer water gun

No, after reading the first few chapters, the protagonist's character is so annoying that I wish someone could slap him. I can't stand it anymore. 88. You're in the mood.

Speechless, defeating an enemy three kilometers away with water escape is even more outrageous than throwing a shuriken from three kilometers away.

The writing is so poor that I have no desire to read further 😰😰

After opening the reincarnation eye, the subsequent plot becomes more and more uncomfortable😣

I practice PK with NPCs every day at the practice ground. If you don't know your strength, you have to go out and play for a while to find out. You, a genius from a clan who just started to show his talent at the age of 13, go to the Kingdom of Waves by yourself if you want to? It's too taken for granted and illogical. If you say Rouquan is bad, then it's bad. We won't argue with you, but we can't change some common sense issues

I just finished watching the fourth one. Let's just say that the protagonist and Sasuke have never had any interactions, so why did he provoke Sasuke for no reason? Just to show off in front of others? This plot is too forced and too brainless.

It's okay but there are too few updates

It's really not that good. It doesn't matter what I write. The main thing is that the book makes me unhappy.

You haven't read the Chicken Book or Naruto, right?

Rubbish, the Hyuga clan has just revealed their talent, and the Hokage has designated him to go to the Land of Waves.