The Ultimate Path: Beginning by Slaying the False Guanyin

Bro, that's well-written, but if you want to write a hardcore fanfic, don't just keep writing about constant brawls. Add a few moments of instant kills every now and then. Combine the satisfying moments reasonably. Or something with constant pressure from beginning to end. Don't just have everyone blasting each other without anyone dying; that would be too awkward.

He talks a ruthless game, but all he does is good; the protagonist is a good guy.

It's well-written, but the description of the visual impact of the muscular physique is still lacking. I'll give you a recommendation vote first. If it gets published without any major flaws, I'll support your book by watching ads.

Daniel Wu fans, remember to check out the related content for his works!

Thank you everyone, you're all my dads! 😭 It's now available!

Was this already signed, or...?

Goodbook

Keep writing, bro. As long as it's fun, that's enough. Don't suppress the protagonist's combat power and level. 😁

The cultivation levels are too chaotic. No matter what cultivation level the protagonist is in, he can always win. It's boring. Besides introducing a genre, the content of that novel is actually quite mediocre.

Keep going! Keep writing! Finish it! You can't please everyone! Just make sure you feel satisfied.