From a Family Tree to an Eternal Family

I started to follow the book when it only had more than ten chapters. When I saw that it was now on the shelves, I also read a lot of books about family cultivation. This book can only be said to be full of enthusiasm. The protagonist does not have a strong sense of existence. He can only be said to be an ordinary farmer. He does not have the shining point of the protagonist. The characters of the several sons are average and change too quickly. The book looks a little awkward, but it's pretty good.

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I feel like the protagonist is unable to lead a cultivating family with his abilities. He doesn't have the wisdom.

The protagonist is a time traveler, not really an aboriginal. How come the more you write, the more you make the protagonist act like an aboriginal?

According to the current progress, the protagonist's family will die of old age. The upgrade speed is too slow. Not to mention the whole family cultivating immortality together, they have not even started practicing martial arts together. Decades have passed and the protagonist is still making a fortune from farming. Can farming make a fortune? If it is true, the richest man in the world should be a farmer 😒😒😒😒😒😒

The provincial version: Many Children, Many Blessings, Golden Finger, the protagonist restricts family monogamy. over

Don't you really think there are a lot of problems? Not to mention lowering the level, I obviously didn't say that I had tens of thousands of taels of silver. What did I do in the end? They bought land and started fighting. They are not in a hurry to improve their strength. As for martial arts training, apart from the third child taking medicine, the protagonist and the eldest brother have not taken any medicine after practicing for so many years. The eldest brother only took a Qi and Blood Pill when he was drafted! ! ! Also when you get a lot of money and the situation starts to be turbulent, instead of hurrying up your strength, you take out more than 9,000 taels of silver to buy land 👍👍👍 The protagonist himself also knows that his strength is not as good as others and he has to be patient. But can't you improve your strength? After getting so much money, I didn't do anything but just buy land Anyway, I saw the latest one. The writing of the whole book is okay, but what the hell do you mean by stepping on the horse? Pressure! ! ! ! ! Also, Goldfinger is well developed, and Guang Li's time traveler character is even more indigenous than aboriginal It's really like a potato back in the day! ! !

Made with Baidu Mind Map, there is no tree-like template. Xmind also does not have tree templates. (Updates temporarily suspended. Sorry, I'm a little busy lately!)

Modern people travel through the past and are more feudal than ancient people.

In these chapters, is it serious that the Jindan family has a secret method that can create spiritual roots? The spiritual root is born innately, and the thing created by the protagonist Goldfinger has this ability. Normally, the magic cultivator is not very stupid. And I don't understand what the use of this immortal official is? If you have to go to the county and risk the lives of the entire clan, the protagonist's son would be better off pretending to have failed in building the foundation and being injured and hiding it. It would be best to choose a five-spirit root. Even if there is a foundation-building pill, it would not be surprising if the foundation-building fails. Moreover, the grandson is also an official, and those who are well-informed know that there is a foundation-building monk in his family who is not related to him, and he will not provoke his family. The previous ninth-level qi-training family of County Magistrate Lu had few cultivators. He dominated the county for decades, and the Xue family's demon-cultivating methods of alchemy took dozens or hundreds of years to achieve anything. The protagonist's family got into big trouble after building three foundations. Now is it possible that the golden elixir will take action? Does the author not read book reviews? How many people will criticize these chapters?

Your protagonist dies in the body every day to practice, and your eldest son works in the county government. Their cultivation levels are the same, and their qualifications are the same (you didn't mention the protagonist's qualifications). What is the use of your protagonist? Watch less of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan

They are all five elements of pseudo-spiritual roots. Xu Xiaohou built the foundation and became it in a blink of an eye. Your protagonist has been staying in the atomized space of spiritual energy every day for decades and cannot break through the perfection of Qi training. Are you saying that talent is not enough?

The so-called immortal family that can't even live forever for its own wife? Outrageous or not?

Let's change the price or cost of the wine. The price of the wine is 10 taels and the cost is 8 taels. Is this a charity? Xu Xiaoyun's business is like this, and he is also asked to take care of the family's accounts. If it weren't for the author's mechanical magic, this family would not be able to survive for a few years. The cost of wine priced at ten taels is higher than three taels, so there is no need to do this business. It can be seen that the author has never been exposed to anything related to business. No wonder the protagonist does not understand anything and behaves completely unlike a modern person. You can simply set the protagonist to be in a remote rural area in his previous life, and the time travel is relatively early, and he has never been exposed to things like television, so that everyone can make up for it.

See Chapter 186. Overall good. You can take a look. However, the protagonist of this plug-in who has many children and many blessings only allows family monogamy. It is very outrageous. It is stricter than modern times, and modern times even have mistresses! And the plug-in doesn't feel very good. It can only provide exercises and a little life span. How can such a bad spiritual root live forever? It's unreasonable to be able to cultivate to immortality if you have the exercises! I hope some reasonable functions will be added later!

What do you think after reading these pictures? I feel that the two children of the Liu family are more suitable to be the offspring of the protagonist. Xu Xiaohou is like a fool. I was provoked by the Liu family. Stupid, just go and get through the arm door. People are really just eating melon seeds. Look at your bloody head. This person Xu Xiaohou. It feels like I don't want to be the protagonist's biological child. Not caring about raising children. Just give me a meal. Fighting everywhere like a street kid every day. The protagonist also resigned himself to it. It is said that family conditions are better and there is no hardship. So stupid things like that. It doesn't matter whether it's painful or not, right? It's just about tutoring. Portraying Lao Liu with this character only highlights the protagonist's inability to manage the family. I really don't like the character Lao Liu. It's better to use a knife.

Who is Xiaoxia? When I was a child, I watched my younger brothers. The eldest, third, and fourth could all practice martial arts. My granddaughter could all practice martial arts, but Xiaoxia couldn't. He clearly knew that with the golden finger, he would be better off in the future, so he married Xiaoxia to a small businessman early. When you know there is danger outside, let the eldest daughter-in-law go back to the villa. Your daughter can die outside. There is no need to go back.

1. Partial, knowing that he is unfair to his eldest son, but he still refuses to change and is still looking for excuses. Honest people deserve to suffer. 2 Old Green Tea, pretend to be a good person. His wife is just a tool to him. He doesn't want her to practice, but there are many things that he can't hide, so he asks the question. When the wife says she doesn't practice, she immediately stops talking about it (don't explain and don't try to clear yourself with mental activities. There are no honest people now. Your head of the family really wants her to practice, how can she not do it? No one is soft or hard). It can be seen that the author is a good-faced and cold-hearted person. In summary, female readers should be able to understand that for some men, even if you sleep with them and give birth to 6 sons with them and keep them company for more than 20 years, the relationship is not as good as that of a blood-related grandson who has only been together for a few years. "It's stupid and bad. It's too poisonous to tell so many people about changing spiritual roots."

Readers who keep reading are basically patient, so they can write calmly and don't be anxious. There are more and more people of the loyal generation, and the characters are slowly standing up, otherwise it will be easy to not tell who is who. Also, try to explain the world view clearly and don't be vague. For example, Xiaoniu's county magistrate's strength and status were unknown, and the pharmacist dared to drive him out, but the foundation-building ancestor from Fangshi later betrayed his face.

Whoever is the county guard must destroy the entire Xu family With the secret method of Five Elements Zhuang Gong, if you have a brain, you must kill him Otherwise, how can you keep the secret This is not a novel, it is the Analects What nonsense, I voted so many monthly votes I am so stupid

The most important thing for developing a family is safety and stability. Just like a pawn in the sun, not afraid of slowness and always moving forward. What animal has the longest lifespan? A turtle, it has a shell to protect it, it moves slowly, but if you look at it over time, it is fast.

First, it's too watery. It's not that it can't be watered, but that the direction of the water is wrong. It can be covered in just a few chapters about the Chu family, Seizing the Body, and other things. You can focus more on the development of family resources, such as cultivating talents, working on cultivating immortals, Baiyi Talisman Formation, and elixirs, and slowly develop from the first level to the second level. Second, there are too few cool points. Are you going to embarrass the protagonist like this? Every time the protagonist is promoted and every 100th birthday, Golden Finger can receive some benefits or something, or if the younger members of the family have outstanding geniuses or other talents, they can also promote the evolution of Golden Finger. In fact, it is equivalent to the explosion of science and technology in the immortal version. Technology promotes industrial development, and industry underpins technology.

I just gave birth to a daughter tonight. Could you please give me a nice name? My surname is also Xu 😊

In order to support the author, I always subscribe to the original version chapter by chapter. It just ended without saying a word? ! At least give it a squeak, after waiting for so long!

The rhythm is quite good and the writing skills are quite strong. Each segment has a clear goal, including the behavioral description at the beginning to hint at the identity of the protagonist, to the fast-paced concise introduction of what happened during the twelve years, to the description of daily life to shape the character. There is no redundancy or jump, and it is completely impossible to tell that he is a new writer. Especially in the daily life part, a simple greeting from the wife creates a virtuous character, the eldest son catches insects and feeds the chickens to create a sensible impression, and then steals things at the third child's birthday party to show the younger brother a clever character, which shows the author's skill. Especially the scene where the protagonist returns the things after discovering that the child has stolen them. The pace is quite fast, and he leaves immediately after returning the things. There is not much description of the Liu family. It can be seen at once that the author has a strong purpose and the rhythm is very controlled 👍

The book is very interesting. The key is that the author writes the book with great care. We must support such an author Although it is an imaginary background, it is obvious that the book is written with great care. He has done in-depth research on the field tax. Refer to the ancient background. One acre of land is taxed with one tael of silver regardless of whether there is a harvest. Planting fruit trees can earn 2/3 of the tael. It is very sophisticated In the setting, the income from planting fruit trees is higher. It is estimated that growing staple food will only earn one tael of silver. If you pay all the taxes, you can only drink the northwest wind. The author is very ingenious. Plant fruit trees and mix and match staple food to ensure that you can make a living. This world view is very novel. Like it! The protagonist in the book has a superhuman physique from the beginning. He lives on 80 acres of land, but he is very good at hiding himself. He behaves like ordinary people. This low-key Taoist protagonist is also very attractive Big boost for the author!

I can basically guess the reason why this book was discontinued, and that is the positioning of the protagonist. The protagonist's qualifications are too poor, and he basically has no sense of existence in the end. He is all serving as a support, but the plug-ins in this book are bound to the protagonist. If the protagonist cannot become a baby and become an ancestor, how can your family last forever? In fact, the beginning of the book is quite good and the plot is also exciting, but at the end of the writing, the sentences are bland and dry, and the readers must have no passion for watching it.

The pace of this book is indeed slow, but I don't think that slow pace is bad, and fast pace is good. It's like you are a master of tasting all-flavored instant noodles. One day, the cook made a pot of soup and simmered it for a long time before serving it. You didn't say whether it was delicious or not, but you first blamed the lack of seasoning packets. This metaphor was thought up in my head and may be a bit abstract, but I just want to say that this book is not necessarily very good, but the slow pace is not a shortcoming, it is just its taste.

The character plot structure is all middle-to-upper-class, and the writing rhythm is upper-class.