Family Cultivation: I Use the Five Poisons to Create Immortality

The inexplicable choice of skills. If you don't take the main road to the sky, you have to take a side path. It's better to have a choice. The protagonist should not have the Pacific in his mind.

Copy the poisonous cultivation setting of Shuidao. Anyway, he is a eunuch, so why not give you more experience?

Overall, it is very comfortable to watch, except for three places where the writing is a bit stiff 1: The horned lizard is awkward, but it is understandable because of the relationship between the five poisons. 2: The hatred that pulls down the brim of the hat seems a bit immature and does not match the character of the protagonist in front. 3: The biggest stiff point, the family exercise conspiracy, is a bit abrupt and urgent. It was written in two chapters at once and the protagonist's eyes were opened. It would have been better if there were some previous chapters that set the stage for asking the elders for advice and filled in a few hundred words to let the protagonist notice anything unusual.

I couldn't stand the chapter when I saw the protagonist choosing a skill. You either give the protagonist only one choice, or you make the other two choices more difficult and more fatal than this choice. Otherwise, why would the protagonist choose such a fatal skill when he doesn't have a golden finger? You are raising a baby, and you are using drugs to refine your qi. The baby may have backlash, and practicing drugs may kill you. There are also many resources to raise 5 babies. You don't need to think about it.

Except for the sudden family conflict, everything else is actually pretty good. There is nothing wrong with the patriarch's idea, but it is too much of a conspiracy theory to add that the parents were killed by the patriarch. The second is that the protagonist has opened his eyes. If you don't point it out, I didn't find this problem. The protagonist guessed it as soon as the patriarch finished telling the elder. It's a bit funny. The recent writing is a bit too extreme. I don't know how the author coordinates the subsequent conflicts. Overall, I think it's good.

The family is in trouble, and now they are about to break up with the family 🤔. The patriarch is indeed written as someone who cares about the family, but in order to put him on the opposite side of the protagonist, he is written to have harmed the protagonist's parents and wants to take away the body. It feels a bit forced.

I suggest changing the title of the book. Judging from the content, it is definitely a break with the family, so it is not a family stream, and the family stream is not popular now.

The training part is well written and very detailed, including training spiritual beasts, making poison, etc., As well as the principles of the protagonist's practice of poison skills, etc. However, I feel that the focus is a bit too focused on training and fighting monsters to accumulate resources. It is better to have some daily life, such as the protagonist's interests, the protagonist's social interactions, and the protagonist's improvement of his residence, etc. The story is slow and urgent. They are all dungeons for fighting monsters and training, which makes people feel a bit too tight. They have turned into training machines. A little daily addition will also show the popularity of the protagonist and enrich the content of the novel.

The synopsis is quite interesting, but unfortunately I hate watching family stories.

Seeing that the protagonist knows the truth, I won't say anything blunt. I just want to know what the protagonist will do next? Revenge? I really hope that there is no conspiracy in the title family, but now, apart from being okay at the beginning, I still have a feeling of hoping that the patriarch will succeed. I feel that the patriarch is very successful and more interesting. Now there is a kind of pushing the plot for the plot.

Write well. If you get good grades, you must first finish what you want to write.

Flying Sword 😁😁 A set of swords from Wutai Zhuxian in Shushan. 😜 One-on-one, group attack, formation, integrated attack 😜😜😜 The magic weapon is a hundred poison glazed cold light shield that integrates attack and defense. There are 9 poisonous dragon spirits inside 😜😜 Once the person is covered, they will be poisoned to death😜😜😜

I won't be the first one to see it. Be wider, keep it, divide it into more sections.

The training content of the Five Poison Spiritual Pets is more detailed. The traditional practice of cultivating immortals and meditation has become the daily battle of wits and courage with spiritual pets, which alleviates the emptiness of cultivating immortals and refining qi. It is quite innovative. I hope to remove the title of the book Family Cultivation of Immortals. Family Cultivation of Immortals can easily be restricted by the family, which reduces the desire to read.

This is the most in line with my taste among the books I have read recently. There is so much tenderness in the process of cultivating immortality. How can I add more updates?

Literary youths who cultivate immortality always don't know what to struggle with. There are a lot of plots describing the psychological state of the characters. The plot is between reasonable and unreasonable. Unlike cultivating immortality, it is like an urban emotional drama. It is recommended to write urban novels.

Why didn't the five poisons be found by my own adventure? Find them one by one and gather them together. If you directly give it to your family like this, you will suddenly lose many wonderful dungeon adventures.

Rating: Grain! As a bookworm for 30 years, I started to read Jin Yong and Gu Long in traditional Chinese characters in the 1990s, then Huang Yi... And then to the starting point now. This novel is on a par with both writing and story structure. I'll give it a 75. Better than many books on those lists. It's worth spending money to read. If you keep updating 6,000+ times a day, this book will hopefully be successful!

The five poisons can also be sacrificed and refined into the gods of the five internal organs. You can open a temple space in the five internal organs to survive without the beast-control bag. You can also use the five poison transporting techniques.

The writing is good, there are ideas, and the power system is also perfect. I look forward to continued updates. All recommendation votes are given to you!

The protagonist looks a bit poisonous at first glance. He dared to choose the Five Qi and Five Poisons Manual. The other two books complement each other. No one has been chosen in 60 years. The other two books have so much money and so much experience. Do you think you are the chosen one?

Evaluation: Barely Liangcao The writing is good, the male protagonist and other supporting characters are well constructed, and the warm undertone of the interaction between the five poisonous pets and the pets does not appear to be blindly indifferent, but they complement each other. What makes people feel awkward may be that first of all, the family cultivation in the title of the book can easily attract many people who want to read the family style of beast control, and then after reading more than ten chapters, they find that they have been deceived. Just like me, before the male protagonist left the hospital, I was thinking about going back to solve the problem of the clan leader and then return to the main line of the family. I did not expect that the more remote and overlapping plots the invisible sadist could easily persuade these readers to leave, resulting in a decline in performance, because I came to read the family style of beast control. The vast majority of people don't come to see the so-called real world of immortality in Dark Wind. They all come to see the interactions between pets and even those bonds in the second grade. This is probably the reason why the results cannot be achieved, and it is not that there are no family stories about Dark Wind. But at least the design will allow the male protagonist to have some positive interactions, whether in the family or with friends and lovers. Nowadays, except for the Five Poisons, no one can really believe it. Others are either stupid or bad. The reason why they can treat the male protagonist well is because the male protagonist is in a dominant position. It is not uncommon in the beast-controlling genre to only trust pets. However, the pet beasts are generally designed to have intelligence to ensure that the male protagonist has basic positive interactions. Unlike the Five Poisons, which do not have any character development other than being obedient, I am not sure whether the author will design interactions in the future if the intelligence is high, but it will definitely be difficult to change in the short term. It seems that the author's efforts to portray the image of the Five Poisons and the previous battles are all superficial, and it is difficult to give positive feedback As for why most of them are written in this way, it must be that the results will be better. At least most people who read novels are not violent people and like to read the truth. Even a dark novel needs positive feedback. The embarrassing thing about this book now is that there is almost no positive feedback from readers. Writing a story about an abusive protagonist who feels aggrieved should at least give the male protagonist a reason to persist. Now the underlying logic of the so-called pursuit of immortality and freedom by the male protagonist is in this reality. The design of the dark environment seems very thin. Even if it starts with revenge and finds out the truth and then changes to the pursuit of eternal freedom, it would be good. My superficial opinion is that I don't know how to write a book. I just want to communicate with the author and book friends who read this book from the perspective of a bookworm who has read the novel for so many years.

Quick update, this is my first time, and all my votes for recommendation go to you.

I thought it was a family story, but it turns out he killed his relatives and went solo.