The Book of Wei

The social production relations in this book are the large landowner manor system in the late Southern and Northern Dynasties. As its superstructure, the Northern Wei Dynasty can be understood as an imaginary "Northern Wei Dynasty" because it has no special national attributes and must be deduced to rationalize the system. In addition, the titles, customs, official system, and aristocratic families in the book will try their best to fit the mix of various medieval dynasties. I can correct you if there are some recent mistakes.

I just want to ask you, do you know anything about military affairs? What are the enemy's strengths and your weaknesses? Not to mention anything else, your equipment is estimated to cost a lot of money. You haven't collected it all yet, and even if you collect it, it will be useless. You know all the people under your command. You have never experienced war, you have no one to train troops, and you have no territory. What can you use to compete with others? You need tactics but no tactics. , If there is no population, it is like a novel about the Song Dynasty that said that when a war started, the soldier's gun would swing left and right, and under his arrangement, the blood gun would just stab forward. This is simply a mess of words. It is not clear whether the soldiers of the Song Dynasty could fight or not, but all the soldiers were in the hands of civil servants. Military pay, no matter how great the credit is, is still robbed of a big soldier. When writing ancient texts in modern literature, we cannot look at ancient times with modern eyes. There are many reasons why we can't fight in ancient times. One is that civilian officials control military attachés. The other is that internal corruption is common. The third is that we can't come up with so much money. The fourth is that there is no unified command, especially In particular, laymen command experts, and there are many internal factions and various factors. People nowadays think that winning a battle in ancient times depends on equipment and poor information, such as explosive packs and kerosene, which can directly kill the headquarters by surprise. Otherwise, the results of the second time will not be as great as the first time, and others will have been prepared for it.

Go directly to the Southern Dynasties. I remember that in history, most of the clans of the Southern and Northern Dynasties could get preferential treatment if they fled to hostile countries.

I'm not kidding, this book made my head tingle when I read it. It really felt like reading a history book. Although fictional history seems to have always been regarded as an alien by the Qidian History District, the author has this kind of writing style and will definitely become popular. I don't know if the ancient poems in it are used or written by himself. It's so awesome.

The writing is better than many books on the new book list. Why is it ranked so low?

Good book, I like it. Non-Xiaobaiwen

It's a good historical article, it reads smoothly, and there are no poisonous points for the time being.

Looking at it now, generally speaking, the book is not bad, and the writing is good, but there is always something strange that cannot be described. The author wants to create an epic feeling, but except for the description of the inner activities of the characters in the war, the psychological portrayal seems to be missing and slightly thin, giving people the feeling that no matter how the plot develops, the protagonist always wins as a matter of course, which looks like a novel but not like it. The author can learn from Zhao Ziyue's book. I think your writing style is a bit like his, and maybe you can get some inspiration from it.

How many questions do you have about the author? 1. The main character's direct lineage has only a few thousand troops, and the fish eunuch seems to be inseparable. The other main forces of the Forbidden Army all have ulterior motives Er Zhurong has Er Zhurong in command, and his prestige is unquestionable 2. The key to Luoyang's eight passes has been lost, King Qin's troops are gone, and Luoyang has become desperate A big city with millions of people, how many supplies are needed every day? The Luoyang Forbidden Army has tens of thousands of people, and the people are eating horses, coupled with corruption, how long can the logistics last? Er Zhurong's army blocked the outside of the city without taking action. After a few days, the city was in chaos 3 Historically, Er Zhurong entered Luoyang very easily. Capital cities like Chang'an and Luoyang cannot be defended at all. In a big city with tens of millions of people, the daily consumption of food and materials is a terrifying number 4. As long as Er Zhurong avoids the decisive battle and gradually besieged, there is nothing the protagonist can do

There are too many characters appearing in the first chapter and the amount of information is too much. Maybe the author himself thinks that the design is very exquisite, but this is exactly the poisonous point of not being innovative in the plot and innovative in the setting.