We Agreed to Develop Xiaoxiaole, but What the Hell Is the Earth War About?

Let me talk about the conclusion first. This is a very high-quality novel among Wen Chao Gong's novels. There are no big problems in terms of war history. Not to mention how accurate and profound it is, it is pretty much the same. If you are interested in history, I recommend it. If you already know about history, you can also read it to relieve your boredom. There are really few books on Qidian. It is also highly recommended by those who are short of books, so that Americans and Americans will not be confused when they investigate the popularization rate of history education in our country. This book is at least more nutritious than "The King of War Comes to the World"

I've seen about the first battle before, and the more I think about it these days, the more pity I feel, so I came here to post Rating: Good or above, it depends on the author's later performance My evaluation is solid. If you read this book in your free time, you can probably read it in one breath. When you have something to do, you can read it for several hours, but will you come back to continue it when you are done? It depends on the individual. I have voted a lot in the monthly votes. Let me share my suggestions. I think there are still many areas that can be improved in terms of content The first one is the description of scenes and characters, or let's talk about writing skills. To give a few examples, such as the description of the heroine Her portrayal, appearance, character, habits, and emotions are all too few. The few descriptions are all expressed in a straightforward manner. For example, directly write about her character and what expression she shows. Or the military, is she the heroine's uncle? It's too little. Logically speaking, a senior officer who leads his men to experience all the plots of the Republic should not have only such a description, but considering that the author's description of reality is far less than that of the game, let's not talk about it. But in the game, it still makes me gasp. The description of the voice of Berlin, Churchill's speech, the dialogue in the subway, or the Normandy landing, the Finnish Death, the Superman of the Republic, etc., All of these can be Expand, expand, expand again, cg aside, considering that the author may focus on expressing the overwhelming feeling of changing scenes, but for other plots, I can clearly feel that the author has worked hard on these plots, but it is still disappointing for me. It is a pity. For example, when describing the Normandy landing, the book describes the sudden death of the person he was chatting with in about ten sentences? Then the first time I logged in, it took about a chapter or two to get over it. But, since I am a player, the confusion of seeing my own kind for the first time, a living person dying so suddenly in front of my eyes, and the fear that comes with it, mixed with a little bit of anger, I also have to experience that kind of big one after one frame. The living person fell to the ground and wailed in a daze, hiding in the small space of the landing craft, struggling for safety, but desperate to be buried in a thin iron coffin. The red, sticky blood fell on the face drop by drop, or spread out in large swaths. The tip of his nose twitched and smelled the fishy smell mixed with the salty rust of the sea. He lowered his body and lowered his head. Just looking into the confused and frightened eyes of his teammates, Hao's face was covered with mud, his facial features were twisted together, his nose was bleeding, and he was making a huffing sound in his mouth, as if he was begging you to take him home. Tears kept pouring out of the corners of his eyes, and then there was a big hole in his chest, with a lot of tissue everted out, revealing bright red tender meat, and blood kept pouring out as the chest rose and fell weakly. , You could vaguely see the white ribs and rotten insides, and pieces of meat scattered on the ground, which had been pushed and stepped on by others. I wanted to vomit but didn't dare. I wanted to cry but couldn't. The saliva and oxygen were stuck in my throat. At that time, my mind was blank, and there was only the buzzing in my ears. Even the roar of artillery fire seemed to be from another world. Then we were about to land, stepping on the corpses of our teammates, and the soft touch came back from the soles of our feet. The blood mixed with the sea water made our soles slippery, but everyone clearly realized that they were stepping on dead comrades, no more than ankles or The sea water on the lower legs made it difficult to walk, and the shelling was like a whip, forcing everyone to move forward to find the few bunkers. If they wanted to survive, they had to hunched over, holding the gun with one hand, or even crawling forward on all fours, until those who were mixed with fighting The friend's dripping blood was slapped on the face by the cold sea water before he woke up. He subconsciously opened his mouth and poured the sea water into his mouth, which was less than ten centimeters away from the person's nose. Then, in despair, hiding behind the steel horse (is it called this), he looked around and could only see dead bodies everywhere, as if he was the only one left in the world. Of course, I remember that some authors wrote about it, which is why I said that the author did spend a lot of effort in describing these scenes. So this book has a foundation. At least the author clearly knows what needs to be emphasized and what should be brushed off. Whether it can go further later depends on the author's performance There are also a few well-depicted scenes, such as rural life, delivering letters, and surviving under siege, but how can I put it, it is still a pity, no Enough doesn't mean that the number of words is not enough, it just feels like it is not enough, and it either stops short or abruptly, or the barrage ruins the atmosphere. As an old reader, I have read books for about ten years from a few years ago to now, and have never written a book. It does not mean that I must describe these things. After all, I am also a layman. The most important thing is: as a reader, I want to receive these things. That is a picture that contains too much information and content. Therefore, as a brilliant author with powerful writing skills, how can I take the low-level person above me who has to describe everything, and write a long paragraph in the novel that obviously exceeds the word limit, and refine it to the point where I only need to use ten sentences? After you read this A whole scene will reappear in front of your eyes, and those touching and hurting things will seem to be in your heart. The book says "he really took it in", which means you really took it in. I have never written a book about that kind of immersion. I can only say that readers expect such a scene and such an author. This is the first one, what else is there, it is the main line, or in other words, the conflict. It is directly written in the plot, or the reader can directly guess it based on the content of the book. I don't think it can be considered the main plot. From my experience, there are too few conflicts. The only conflict in the book is that a major company prostituted the protagonist of the game at the beginning. However, firstly, the plot is mainly portrayed in the game rather than in reality. Secondly, within a few chapters, the major manufacturer's game was torn apart by the protagonist's plug-in. Therefore, either increase the portrayal of reality, or find out in the game. When a new conflict point comes, there must be something new that leads the content forward in the distance, and it does not necessarily have to be a conflict between people. For example, the author wrote, what is the motivation for the protagonist's hard work? If there is motivation, what is the resistance? Is the motivation enough or not enough? If it is just to make games, make good games, and bring things from another world, I think it is not enough. Another thing, why don't everyone use AI to make games? It is written in the book, because AI is not omnipotent and cannot be directly used, so why can the protagonist do it? Because the protagonist is stuck, a huge amount of information packages from another world are input into it, and things that could not be done before can now be done. But the problem is, it is also reflected in the book, the protagonist does not have a lot of work, how can it be reflected? Scenes, characters, plots, music, modeling, action, rendering, and AI are all covered. Just give them a general direction and you can be the shopkeeper. After completing the accumulation of original capital, for the realistic protagonist in a different world, life has basically been speed-passed. The follow-up is nothing more than money making money. It's just a matter of time. There is no resistance. Reality Life is naturally as dull as water, and there is nothing to be done about it. Then you can only switch to games. However, the plot of the game is fragmented and complicated, and you have to rely on players, anchors, and the heroine and her uncle. This will inevitably lead to the main character taking over the role, and the protagonist's sense of existence has plummeted. He can only maintain it through other people's constant mention of old dogs and old dogs. Therefore, it is still necessary to shape the conflict so that the plot can continue to advance naturally and the protagonist can jump up and down naturally. In short, looking forward to better development is ultimately eye-catching.

The first is the Hall of Fame, where players enter the Hall of Fame. And it is unreasonable to be ranked in the same place as those famous generals, because the player has no record. You cannot write that after he enters the Hall of Fame, his historical record is that he shined shoes for 15 days in a certain battle, and survived for 15 days in a certain battle. Or open another player hall of fame

It's a pure trap theme. The "anti-war" label is too restrictive and thankless. It's easy to harmonize if you write a little in-depth content. If you don't write it well, it will easily deviate from the theme. It has nothing to do with the theme of "anti-war". To be honest, you might as well just put the "anti-war" label and just write it as a patriotic article or a game military article. It feels better. You can write more things and it is not easy to deviate from the topic. Multiple such labels just feel like a hindrance.

To be honest, I have been a pirated reader for more than ten years and have never read the original version. I came to Qidian just to look for good novels and then pirate them and read them again. This novel is considered to have lost its virginity. I couldn't stop after reading this. If you look for pirated copies, they are full of garbled characters. The most important thing is that they are new books. For the first time, I enjoyed the feeling of waiting after reading a chapter. It was uncomfortable. Tell me your thoughts. I think the first advantage is that the protagonist's realistic emotional line is very good. It would be better to keep it understated, but recently my senior sister and I have been suspected of feeding me poison. In my personal opinion, I don't care whether you are a blessing in reality or not. After reading too many harem novels for more than ten years, I have become tired of aesthetics. The World War II series is a bit of a peak appearance, while the China series is a bit on the decline. Or maybe the author can only add a little bit to the fictional force of Chinese military generals? I don't know, but it's not that good-looking anyway. Based on my many years of experience, I feel it will be a mess. I hope you can give me some surprises. In addition, genuine reading is really expensive, and now 20 yuan is gone. Chapter 500, 2 million words, I can't spend a hundred? Monthly tickets are offered

The idea is very good and the subject matter is very novel, but the framework is too big and the content becomes confusing and difficult to grasp.

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The beginning of this book is pretty good (≧∇≦*)

Just bring the army here. Do you want to start a world war? The bad thing about this book is that it lacks the description of the battlefield atmosphere. How to highlight the cruelty of the Normandy landing in 500 People must be added to let the players see the miserable state of the AI ​​soldiers. How did they shoot? By the way, those who have shortcut keys must take the shortcut keys and let them practice how to shoot.

Personally speaking, history fans will be ecstatic when they read this book. They don't care how ups and downs the plot is. At least it depicts many famous historical scenes from another angle. It also cleverly conceives many if lines. Different actions trigger different endings. This is not like a novel. This is simply a compendium of world war history.

In fact, we can still write a lot about World War II and the First World War. There are many stories and wars in Eurasia, Africa, and Southeast Asia that we can write about.

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I just read the beginning, and I think it's okay. Those who are interested in history and war can read it. It doesn't have the boring feeling at the end like previous military history series novels. I would like to recommend it 😡😡😡

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The author said that it is true if you have never played the game. A game with too high levels of frustration will not become popular at all. There are currently very few hard-core games on the market that are highly realistic and can become popular. They can only be said to have won the favor of some players due to their characteristics. It is simply a joke to expect mass players to continue playing.

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The gameplay of your article is not important at all, the educational nature is more important. You can enrich things like plot and CG more. It will be fine if more than half of the game is plot. Write a complete background story and plot details for the game, so that players can truly experience the history of another world. For example, the D-Day invasion plot. You can start somewhere else, complete a few tasks, and then switch to the plot and talk about why such a plan was made. The details of the plan (such as high-level meetings and the like) will increase the player's sense of involvement. For example, in the Defense of Moscow, you can first let the players live in Moscow. In conjunction with some Russian songs and movies, the game CG shows the beauty of Moscow, and then is thrown into the defense battle to be chewed up. In addition, some political systems of the Soviet Union and Germany can also be mentioned more. I read books about federations, so red ideas shouldn't have appeared? In short, the text should be copied thoroughly, including music, movies, poetry and history, to increase the artistry of the game. In this way, the text will not be established. In my humble opinion, if anyone feels uncomfortable, please ignore it.

The protagonist just needs to be a tool maker for making games. He doesn't want to watch boring business wars. He just wants to watch players being killed in the game.

If you are anti-war, please bring out Warhammer 40k. I guarantee that everyone who has experienced it will be extremely eager for peace 😌

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To be honest, is this really an anti-war game rather than a soldier training game?

Crossing the Chishui River four times was too much. . . There are too many coincidences and irreproducible factors here, which reflect the top-notch on-the-spot response and grasp of the psychological character of General Guo Jun. It makes no sense to move in. Moreover, the name is called Sidu Chishui. A fool can guess by looking at the answer and guessing the process that he has crossed Chishui four times. Why does it feel like the people in the other world in the novel are all mentally retarded? The fact that a bald man flew to the front line and was surrounded is so speechless and the meteorite smashed 100,000 and caused the loopholes in the encirclement.

The subject matter is really good, and the early writing was pretty good. Just World War I and World War II are enough. Now I am writing about World War II with a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. The war is not yet out at Chernobyl. The history of China is here again. It is too scattered. In fact, this part of China can be saved. I read a little bit. The author is not strong enough to write that kind of feeling, and it feels a bit forced.

How could the whole world carry out anti-war propaganda without a world-class war? It would never be possible for a place that has not experienced a large-scale war to carry out large-scale anti-war propaganda. How could a person who has not been hit by artillery fire know pain?

Battle damaged version of D-Day

To be honest, it is a good novel, and I can completely accept it emotionally. But if you step into the perspective of the Blue Star people, it will feel far-fetched and embarrassing, just like someone made "Showa America Story". No matter how realistic it is, American players will not feel ashamed, and Japanese players will not feel proud (probably). Most people will just laugh it off. In the same way, no matter how shocking the history is, Blue Star people will only think of it as a game. When they see a famous person, they will say something awesome! When you see a big scene, you will say something awesome! The number of casualties can be said to be awesome! That's all. The political systems are different, and we haven't experienced a real war. The gap in historical accumulation and political acumen is huge. It's really difficult to bring it in. If you can't take it in, you won't understand it. Without understanding, you won't be moved. Talking about the novel itself, would it be more passionate if it were set as the only boy with memory who aspires to become a game designer, restore history, and help the entire civilization find the blank century-old memory? The fragments of memory are slowly pieced together, and the truth of history is slowly restored. When the lost century comes to light again, this kind of romance feels more tearful than a simple game!