A Lord Game That Starts with Moving Territories

The author has good ideas, but his writing is limited. For example, when introducing the Phantom, he thought he could summon some special people. Instead, he ended up with a group of soldiers and a group of farmers. The introduction of the soldiers was too advanced, and I didn't understand their use. He also didn't introduce the arms, equipment, what the skills and characteristics meant, what their strength was, and the farmers were also introduced in a mess. The author has a cognitive disorder. You know the things in your mind, but others don't. It's like introducing a mobile phone to someone who has never seen a mobile phone. He just said a mobile phone. People who have never seen it will not know what it is. They need to have a comparison object. A bunch of things written later also have the same problem, and they look very strange.

Investigation object: "The Lord Game Starting from Mobile Territory" - Male Protagonist - [Suya] Investigation Result: [Physical Time Travel] (Personal Speculation) Judgment Basis: Time Travel Investigator, as the name suggests, is a person who investigates the time travel situation of time travellers. The profession of investigating and recording the situation, aiming to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time travel situation of travelers in this world, and volunteer to provide observers with fast time travel information query services If there are any mistakes, Wan Wang will correct me ——Zhenjun Wan Ling Feast Stay on February 27, 2025

The classification is wrong. This belongs to another world. If you do this, you will drive away some people.

You are already a eunuch, why are you pushing me?

It feels okay, except that the writing style is a bit green and some parts are a bit vague, but the overall creativity and ideas are no problem, come on!

It was very easy to enter the dungeon in front of me, but it was too grinding and passive.

The setting is too complex and there is too little description of the protagonist's growth.

It feels a little confusing😵

When you open a new book, talk about it, but don't take it too long.

I like this theme very much, but there are too few updates. I will give you three monthly passes, do you want it?

Current Map of Stone Tower Hill (Youth Edition)

Two updates a day is not very impressive, and the classification is not quite right, right?

There are too many unnecessary details, and it is more verbose than some Western fantasy. It doesn't feel like a lord story, and the function of the golden finger (vehicle talent) is not obvious. There are many prerequisites. Territory talent + career selection + career skills + career talents + reward vehicles (prop mounts) add up to a three-layer acceleration effect. It feels very random and useless. The thoughts in your mind should be reflected in words, rather than taken for granted. Don't think too grandly. When it comes to words, it will be dry.

It looks good, it looks good. I like this kind of mobile castle. It is built on land. How about you sign the contract and I will book it all for you? What do you think?