I Was a County Magistrate in the Last Days of Ancient Times

First, the hook is too small. You write a story about rules and ghosts in the introduction. Goldfinger is in Chinese. But Goldfinger is basically useless. There is not much content related to rules and ghosts in the article. You can't fight and you can't run away. Most people read the book and pretend to be the male protagonist. Naturally, no one reads it because it's frustrating. My suggestion is that the male protagonist should rely on knowing Chinese and using the rules to fight against the enemy. Only in this way can he feel happy instead of being a basically useless male protagonist. Secondly, I can't write a book, but I have basic reading skills. The writing is too messy. Anyway, what I read is very messy. It just feels messy. That's it.

What's the difference between Shen Xi asking for half of the territory and forcing him into the palace? For a leader, half of his territory is not in his hands. What a puppet.

The idea is very good, but the writing is not good, so it seems confusing. It is better to express it directly and treat it as an idea.

The subject matter is good, the setting is too funny, the rules are weird, the teammates are illiterate, and you pretend to be illiterate, it feels like you don't take your own life seriously.

The atmosphere of serious fantasy was created so well in the entire 60 chapters. The game system created by one-click upgrade was completely destroyed as soon as it came out. The game system was ruined from serious fantasy to a bad street game system. My mood was also ruined. I actually found a treasure of writing serious fantasy from the book shortage period, and I was ruined to see another author who fell into the pit of cliché cheats. The author is advised to think clearly about what he wants to write before starting his next book, and not to change the subject halfway through the book.

Read Chapter 5? ? If you can understand Chinese characters, why should you pretend to be so stupid and restricted? The problem is that the supporting character or the heroine may have misinterpreted it later. The protagonist keeps filling holes. Can't you do some research on it?

As soon as I saw Xianyu County, I had no desire to read any more. It was obvious that I didn't take this book seriously in my homework!

Why is the county magistrate at the ninth rank? A normal county magistrate is at the seventh rank. Only in the Song Dynasty was the overall level lower, so the county level was also from the eighth level. Under the county magistrate, there are also county magistrates, chief bookkeepers, and patrol inspectors, all of whom are considered officials in the county up to the ninth rank.

The plot is boring, stinky and long. It's better to let the protagonist fight monsters and upgrade.

Brother, did you write this book seriously or just for fun? I won't reward you for just fun 😥

This post collects opinions. After all, this is the first book. The most important thing is to summarize experience. If you have any shortcomings, you can leave a message below this post. The author will try his best to improve it and then write the next book. In addition, this book has at least 600,000 words to complete, so you can read it with confidence. Complete.

You deserve to be thrown into the street, what a mess you wrote.

Not happy at all. The protagonist of the novel can have a low IQ but a high force value, and a low force value but a high IQ. The protagonist in this book needs force but not force, intelligence but not intelligence. He is considered useless but is of no use. There are also inappropriate jokes between the lines.

The map is too small and the protagonist has no highlight. Dull

What's going on? Why is there no update all of a sudden? Did the author want a eunuch? If you want to rush to the street, the author should come out quickly and say something. 😓😓

The current environment is too bad. Many readers are sharp-edged, cutting one knife after another, and basically don't think about suggestions. Fortunately, veteran authors are used to ignoring pressure. It is even more difficult for new authors to make progress and survive, but as long as you can bear it and reflect, the sword will be sharpened.