Britain, 1994

The writing is sophisticated, the plot is innovative, and the main line of events is quite clear. The only problem is that the rhythm is slightly problematic. If I read this book with 300,000 words, I will rate it as the best among them all. Unfortunately, it is less than 100,000 words now. It is recommended that the author simplify the professionalism in the following, just like writing chronological articles. Appropriate professionalism can enhance the sense of substitution, but too specialized is not enough and is tiring to read. Internet articles are still a fast-selling commodity. Instead of spending a lot of brainpower to build professionalism, it is better to transfer part of the brainpower to updating.

Someone in the comment section complained that it was too boring. My own feelings are too complicated. The first event in the story should be simple, choose either Wetland Park or Bahrain Bank. The author combines two events together, so it seems cumbersome and messy. This kind of complicated events that are linked one after another may be better placed as a climax in the mid-term.

The plot of the Baroness is basically the basis. Imagine that a congressman obtained a bank's financial information due to her position, and then her relative with the same surname immediately shorted that bank. . . I don't even know what to say. Are you ignoring it on purpose or are you unaware of the serious nature of this matter? Once this happens, who would dare to go to London? A game needs to have players. If you cheat so blatantly, will there still be a steady stream of players entering the game? No matter how many reasons you have to justify cheating, the result is that it is committed, and who cares whether you have any difficulties or not. And what was done was not subtle at all, it was even blatant.

Water, private goods, smelly in middle age. . . Made me speechless

Why can't I understand what is written? It makes me dizzy.

No idea, the information is too dense, the professionalism is professional enough, the story is not enough, I slipped away.

As for actual things, the story development direction is too slow and too little, and there is no advantage in writing resources.

It was enjoyable to read at first because of the professionalism, but later on there were a lot of trivial details, for example, the first female character I liked appeared on the stage and she also pursued a professional tone, which made me feel very tired.

After reading Chapter 20, I feel like it's early. Chapters 60 and 80 have a better viewing experience.

Just don't be like the 1987 book next door.