Hogwarts: on the Relationship Between Clow Cards and Curses

It feels like Hogwarts and Capricorn are not on the same level.

1. The protagonist speculates that a descendant of Elio traveled into Harry Potter and did not know the story of Harry Potter and the Clow Card 2. The story is probably about learning magic in Harry Potter and then trying to make Clow Cards 3. The protagonist is close to invincible because of his strong talent and learned a lot of knowledge 4. This is the story of a lonely child with powerful power who grows up in a magic school 4. The writing is smooth and the plot is innovative. It does not follow the original work. The current evaluation is good.

I rarely write book reviews, but I couldn't help but want to give this book a thumbs up. At present, this book does not completely rely on the original framework, nor does it contain a lot of daily life, and the description of friendship brings me a feeling: no one teaches how to get along with others, I can only imitate it carefully. Although I don't know what friendship is like, I am looking forward to it. If the writing can be kept smooth, I will keep reading!

In fact, it is entirely possible to write that you obtained a complete set of Clow cards and then accidentally blew them away at Hogwarts. There are more than a dozen cards for each grade. Each card will cause difficulties for a certain character, and then help him solve it and conquer the cards at the same time. Wouldn't this make it possible to write a book?

The setting is interesting, but the characters and plot description still seem to be unsatisfactory. First of all, when I saw the protagonist's two friends now, I suddenly realized that I couldn't even remember their names. It was as if these two people were some kind of background panels, with no three-dimensional image at all. If you delete all the words about them, you will find that it will hardly affect the progress of the plot. This shows that the author's writing skills in character creation still need practice. We all know that when writing fan fiction, the last thing to do is to create a bunch of original characters but not have the corresponding writing power to make their images vivid on the page. Why? Because fan texts have impressive original characters, you can create original characters, but if you don't have the writing power to express the character's image, you might as well not write it, because readers only need to compare these original characters that take up a lot of space and are not vivid enough with the three-dimensional and vivid original characters to feel your poor character creation ability. Secondly, as a fan fiction, the interaction between the protagonist of this work and the original characters is too rare. The interaction with the original characters is a major feature of fan fiction. If there is no intersection with the protagonist of the original work, then why bother writing fan fiction? Wouldn't it be more convenient to be original without taking into account the conflict between the plot and the protagonist of the original work? In the end, the plot is as bland as water, like a running account. It is separated from the interaction with the original protagonist, but it follows the main plot line of the original work, and there is nothing new. The only shining point is that this game uses the high-quality golden finger setting of Cullo brand. However, using this setting is not necessarily a good idea. Cardcaptor Sakura is a children's animation, and using its setting on a decisive and murderous protagonist always feels strangely inconsistent.

Even if the invading dark wizard carries "Standard Spell" with him, only one hand is left after being blown up by an alchemical bomb, and this book is still intact 😅 You seem to be insulting the reader's IQ.

The writing is good, but the book I was looking forward to last time has already been released 😒 I hope the author can work harder and finish it.

The writing is quite good, but I personally don't like Aboriginal literature very much

Take your time, don't rush

It's written very smoothly and blends in very naturally.

Will there be Penelo as the heroine? I'm just asking. The book is very interesting. Come on.

What's going on now? Stabbed the eunuch's nest

Broken? At least a click of completion will stop people from having unrealistic thoughts.

Come on, author, it seems that the writing is great so far, and the characters are well understood. I will always support you in maintaining the standard. I also try to update as much as possible. Now I only save a big event to read.

I think it's acceptable to slowly collect cards, but if the protagonist is capable of handling the original plot, there is no need to find reasons to rationalize the protagonist's actions! Because the protagonist's personality is obviously a fun person! It's easy to do whatever you want, isn't it? It would be better to let the main character deal with the original plot based on his interests. Look at the three-headed dog and the basilisk, aren't they good alchemy materials? 😏 According to the protagonist's personality of fun-loving person + alchemy madman, will he let go of the opportunity?

Food, food, food, please be sure to write it down.

It feels a bit similar to the book by 🍅. I wonder if the author has read that book.

There is a common problem in fan fiction. It is understandable that the protagonist has the ability to defeat the villain but forcibly lets it go in order not to change the plot. After all, most fan authors do not have the ability to control the plot. But it is very annoying to have to find various reasons to explain the protagonist's motivations in an attempt to rationalize the protagonist's behavior.