The Body of Douluo Dalu Becomes a God

The original martial spirit is stronger than the second awakening. Before awakening, it is not a particularly powerful martial spirit.

Let me explain first, I have read a lot of Douluo fanfics, including those that teach three and those that torture three. Personally, I think the writing is good, but I personally don't like some parts of this article. I feel that the overall quality of the article is okay, but the characters in it almost perfectly explain what it means to do one thing on the surface and another behind the scenes. Some of the protagonist's behaviors are also quite speechless. When San was going to Shrek, Mouse was always around. Do you think he can see the power of hidden weapons? A reckless person can tell the age of a soul beast, but you still take advantage of the opportunity to strike, and you also lay ambush from time to time.

If the Xuanyu hand is transformed into Xuanyu, the defense will be even stronger! Also, if the Blue Silver Emperor's 100,000-year-old soul bone can be assembled, it can greatly increase the vitality! There are also the blood of the Golden Dragon King, whale glue, living gold, fairy grass, ice and fire eye alchemy body, Qi and blood soul ring, thunder and lightning body forging, etc., Which can enhance body defense and vitality!

Level nine innately, level ten in two months…

Laughing to death in the early stages. The young master of a noble family. He directly fights the protagonist to the death over a trivial matter. The families behind and the Qibao Glazed Sect did not stop him. Then his cultivation speed is not as good as Zhu Zhuqing's. Especially joining Shrek is really poisonous.

Ning Rongrong

The author is very good at characterization and details. However, Yu Xiaogang and the others are too shady and a bit of a drama. You can just dislike them and just kill them in the end. There is no need to be so shady. Everything else is good and gives a sense of immersion.

You don't even have to pay for it, you can poison people to death for free. In the previous chapter, there were a few people with innate soul power of level 9, not to mention, but then there was a super genius who improved his soul power to level 7 in 2 years. He was really amazing, and he created conflicts without thinking. In order to create an enemy for the protagonist, he directly created a genius grandson for Bone Douluo.

What is this? This second soul ring is just a lump.

I saw that everyone had strong opinions on the original Gu Feng. When I wrote about it, I had already thought about its ending. It's not written for no reason, but it will be written later in the plot.

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Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

You are a little expert when it comes to the word water.

Are you a eunuch? Actually, I feel like having a single female protagonist, Maomao, is pretty good.

The writing is not smooth and many sentences do not make sense. Not to mention description. Come on, author, practice more.