The Secretive World: I Become a God Through Lies

From the perspective of an old bookworm, Daily Poison is not very good. The first few chapters are confusing, and even after a long time, the background is not explained clearly. I barely finished the first copy. The wit is average, but the writing style is not good. The overall reading always has a weird feeling. It is said that the protagonist has a high IQ, but the actual description is not clear (and the extra is written into the main text. To be honest, this is the first time I have seen it written like this. Isn't this kind of supplementary character setting usually through memories? It reads very strange (different), the settings are just so-so, the skill card can talk, and it reads very strangely, which is a little bit weird (it doesn't have the mysterious and scary feeling of Lord of Mysteries, and it doesn't break down every time I see that card talking 😄). Finally, the settings of the gods are quite low, the ancestor of the vampire is not expressive, and the combat description is not good-looking overall. It's almost time to test the poison here, so I ran away first.

Can't you get through a chapter without a few meaningful words? A battle can be filled with many chapters, a bunch of useless repetitive rhetoric, all the characters are the same and meaningful, and they are all pretending to be sophisticated. They all have the same facial makeup facial expressions. I can only practice it if my writing skills are weak. I can't stand the first few dozen pictures.

The description of the characters always feels like too much effort, the plot is also a bit intermittent, and the plot's support for the characters is always uninteresting. It should be much better if the power is tightened.

Is the number of discussion posts less than a fraction of the number of monthly votes? Difficult to stretch

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Scope of submission This time, we are open to book friends to freely create ** high-level (No.1096+), Mid-level (No.1-6999), And low-level (No.1-9999) Cards! You can freely design your mysterious creatures, legacy monsters, destiny artifacts, and even extraordinary world rules! However, please note that the following set cards cannot be changed: Sealed cards (cannot be modified) Supreme Twelve God Cards (No.1 - No.12) (Core concepts of the three supreme beings) High-level No.4 - Blood Feast Twins High-level No.107 - Tyrant of the Blood Night, Archduke the Impaler Advanced No.864 - Wild Hunting Blood Devourer, Princess Selian Advanced No.666 - Wind of Sleeping Advanced No.724 - Tide Giant Advanced No.749 - The Banshee Glimpses of Destiny Advanced No.290 -Blood George Death Battle Banner In addition to the above cards, all other high-level, mid-level, and low-level cards can be submitted! 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"This is your chance to create your own secret and join our adventure!" Come and submit your article and let your cards come to the world of secrets!

Is there Shennong or not? Comments feel like there are so many people and machines

The world view is not three-dimensional enough and the characters are flat. It is obvious that the author is a novice

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Hey, I love making mysteries too much. Nothing is revealed to the reader, nothing is revealed, just the Riddler. Then I can only say that it's not very representative, and it doesn't look good. One or two Riddlers are enough, all of them, so I can only say, I can't watch them.

It's really well written, I recommend everyone to read it