Doupo: Mortal's Counterattack

After reading Chapter 20, I don't see any intention of counterattack. I haven't seen what layout has been laid out corresponding to the current predicament. The protagonist always talks to others about a bunch of irrelevant things in long paragraphs.

To read his novel, it is better to read the original work of Dou Po

Can you push the plot? The plot advances two or three steps in each chapter, and the rest is a bunch of nonsense. There is absolutely no need to explain so many things.

What does this book have to do with Dou Po? Except that the realm is the same. There is no one in the original work. Although I am not asking you to join the protagonist group. But you have always been original, so you have a bad reputation. It's better to write a new book by yourself and not have to pay copyright fees to Dou Po.

How did such a boring novel survive to this day and still be read on Kuaishou! ! !

A lot of nonsense, still fighting in Chapter 120

Eunuch's posture🤫

It took me more than 130 chapters to break through and become a fighter. The most important thing is that there are no original characters or plots. They are all original and there is no sense of immersion.

One hundred thousand words is too watery. I still don't know what the main plot is.

From the chapters written so far, this book is completely an original novel that just borrows the setting of Dou Po. None of the characters related to the original work have appeared. If you replace those fighting spirit with the spiritual power of cultivating immortals, and replace the fighting skills with magic, there will be no sense of inconsistency.

The fandom does not follow the main story ✓ The fanfic has no interaction with the original characters at all×

I have also read a lot of Dou Po fics, but they wouldn't have written without Xiao Yan's opportunity. Many of them had to compete with Xiao Yan for Xun'er, and they also said that they didn't take advantage of Xiao Yan's opportunity. As a result, they all wrote about strange fire.

I have read many Dou Po fanfics, and to be honest, I feel that this one can be ranked in the top three. Let me talk about its advantages The details are very good, whether it is the environment, the characters, or the social situation. I especially like the anatomy of human nature in it, which means that the people written in it are very vivid and full of writing Secondly, he does not follow the public in writing about Dou Po. There is no feeling of sameness, the plot is very logical and not brainless The third upgrade is not very fast, the upgrade here refers to the fact that his current environment does not allow him to appear as a fighter, and his star rises inexplicably There are also shortcomings, just like some novices who like fast pace are not suitable for this book. You can also say that he is a bit watery, but this is free, what else do you want a bicycle? The second thing is that it is too logical, and there is no scene of pretending to be slapped in the face. Well, this can be considered a shortcoming.

Nothing exciting at all, a low-level riff

The pacing is indeed too slow. Look at the 70-odd chapters of Wei Yang, Emperor Yang next door, and it's all about fighting the king.

Isn't the author also a horse-and-blade player and a Dou Po reader? After reading a hundred chapters, I can see the taste of horse-and-blade. The pace should be a little faster, right?

Author, are you planning not to write this book?

There is a book similar to yours with more than 1,000 chapters, and it is very poorly written.

Has Bendou Po risen from the bottom of the Wei Dynasty?

Does the author specialize in writing eunuch novels?

The writing is good. It's rare to find a Dou Po fan that doesn't follow the original work.

There is a Dou Po novel with a similar name to yours, and it is really rubbish. I don't know if this is okay for you?

I wrote a bunch of random things, I don't know what you want to express.

Haven't you met the original characters yet?

Still can't see it today?

Are you going to let the protagonist accept the beauty from the author's original work?